Amazing chapter!!!

I loved Ben's description of his relationship with Michael, especially the sexual part.

I also loved how you managed to have Brian meeting Justin and their son (who is adorable).

Brian's way of taking Jackson apart to teach him how to be careful with his clothes is just genius. If the kid is as label queen as Brian is, it will prepare some interesting discussions.

Lindsay, as usual, has her head full of impossible dreams. She would do anything to get into Brian's pants even if she knows he doesn't want to. She needs the social status, the money, the kid and the house.

Michael is more than awful to his mom and he dares defying Justin.

I can't wait to see what will come next for him and the mad muncher.

I love this new story of yours!!!

WOw....yet another story to sink my teeth into. Just read upto chapter 4 in 1 shot. Must say...a different take on some of the characters. I really really like it! 

So Michael...I've always seen him as, I guess soft is teh best way to describe it. While he has a few moments of independant thought and action, he seems to need to consult others, particularly Brian on decisions in his life. He seems to be at the opposite end of that sprctrum in this one. And not in a good way. We've seen him (in canon) take on the attributes of teh person he's with. He tends to look up to his partners as someone who sets the example. We see him do this with Brian as well. Without having his own defined personality, he's easily influenced by those around him. I can't believe how much of an asshole he is in this one!! His head is turned by Monty and Eli and the ideals of being the "right kind of gay", the fact that Ben is a notable professor and deemed respectable causes him to believe he's better than others. that he would do this to his own mother is beyond reproach! I really can't wait to see what all the others do! 

I actully love that you're going to make Ben out to be less that positive here. While I love his character, there were times when I wanted to cuff him upside the head Debbie style. This take on it though...is going to be fun! I enjoy the odd story that takes an otherwise beloved character, and puts a slight negative twist on them. I think Ben has become so bitter is directly attributed to Michael's behavior and attitude. Will he remain an ass? will he change his ways and support Debbie eventually or will he continue to be the ass you've created him to be. He seems to need to stay with Michael to gain Jenny's custody, but will he? Hmmmmmm so many possiblities and so excited to see what you do.

Lindsey marrying Sam huh? Intersesting. I can see that happening. her need to be socially acceptable overtaking her idea of family. Poor gus being caught in the centre of it all. Her intention of using Justin, (so surprise there) She seems to have no problem using anyone in order to get what she wants. How far will she go now? She wants respectability, social acceptance and recognition. she seems to think that she should have more influence than she odes. Sam at least has it right when he calls her to the carpet about her actual status. that's a relationship I'd love to be a fly on the wall for. LOL1 (just not the sex part cause...yick!!!) But his put downs and their arguments, their individual manipulations would be entertaining.

Interesting how you intertwined all the others. Ted as Justin's accountant for example. Justin meeting Gus, justin meeting Deb and theneventually seeing Brian, both from a distance and finally face to face.

I am already so enjoying this, and naturally can't wait for any and all updates. I'll be anticipating each and every one of them. :)

Can'twait to see where you take this!!

Cheers and congrats on the terrific start of yet another, obvioous great story!

Elaine

Michael is such a little ungrateful troll!!! I want to be mad at Ben for cheating but you know....I just can't find it in my heart to be angry with him. Although I would never have married Michael in the first place (BLECH!!! I think I just threw up in my mind a little at the notion), I think Ben is understanding that it's cheaper to keep him...or at least that's the only viable reason I can come up with at the moment. I really hope Brian does buy Stepford Village and either burn it to the ground or turn it into a carbon copy of Liberty Avenue. In the meantime, Michael can live in his old childhood home- exactly where he does NOT want to be!!

I'm glad that Ted was able to semi/sort of make the connection for Brian to Justin. I'm also glad that Brian and Justin had a little chance to talk before Brian met Jackson. Their meeting was so touching on so many levels! I laughed aloud when Brian said that he would have to teach the youngster how to treat his clothes. I'm LOVING the fact that Justin is well-off so that can't be looked at as an obstacle in moving them forward. Of course we KNOW who is going to have the most to say about Brian having another son plus the blond resurfacing and I can't deny that I'm looking forward to Chucky and his Bride's (Michael and Lindsay) reactions! He always did remind me of that damn doll! with his constant whining litany of "Brian is my best friend" LOL I'll definitely have to use that analogy in one of my own fics! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

I'm loving this.  Ben may not be a good guy, but look who he has to deal with.  Even Ben knows that throwing Deb out of her home is not a good thing.  Glad to see that Brian, Ted and Emmett are all behind Deb.  Brian finally met Jackson and since he didn't know about the pregnancy you can't fault him for it.  I'm glad that Jackson is glad to meet Brian and soon Gus will know he has a 1/2 brother whose father is his favorite author.

I just love me a good Mpreg. This one is going on my bookshelf so I don't forget to read it next. Thanks for writing! TAG

Michael definitely needs to be thrown into traffic. What an ass.

Wait till Brian finds out that Michael threw Deb out of her house.

Getting the popcorn ready.  It's going to be a smack down!  Hehehe!!!!

Sandy

Poor Deb! Bet she's wishing she had aborted Michael! He's such a little toad! Sure hope Justin is able to help.

Really looking forward to Brian finding out about Jackson and the brothers meeting for the first time as well as Brian meeting Jackson for the first time.

And Jackson is such a sweetie!

Deb

Another great chapter!

Lindsay needs to have her head examined! First she married Sam! Now she clipped Brian with her car! Woman needs some extra strong medication!

Love how Justin stayed and comforted Gus and even signed the book he gave him. That was such a sweet thing to do.

Looks like Brian is a great father despite his childhood. So glad that he realized it was Justin that he had seen outside the diner. Maybe he'll go on the hunt for the blond soon! :)

Off to read the next chapter.

Deb

Oh boy.  This gets better and better.  Gus and Jackson have sort of met.  Justin realizes that Gus' dad is Jackson's dad.  Brian remembers Justin!  So much going in a good direction.

Chapter two proved to be way dramatic - yay! Oh please let there be at least one more chapter tonight -- I am grateful and greedy! :)

This is off to a great start! So much has already happened; can't wait to see what happens next.

Deb