Date: Aug 25, 2016 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
Poor Michael, no manners, no brain, no charm, no clue. He was lucky to have a best friend and he over used it. Justin is so humble and kind with the kids. Gus and Brian will find soon enough what an asset he can be for them. Same for Jackson who will, with his mind, do what nobody will expect him to.
So happy Brian told Michael loudly and clearly that he is no more his friend. Will it be sufficient? One can dream.
Happy birthday to Lorie and thank you for helping on this story (and all the previous).
Author's Response:
TThanks for all your reviews and encouragement, it's makes me think of evil ways to deal with Lindsay and Michael. LOL
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2016 6:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
Happy Birthday, Lori. You get to be a part of the story! Love how Jackson told Michael off. Michael who thought Jackson was Gus was in denial about them being brothers. When Brian finds out what happened from Gus and Jackson, Mikey is going to be in for a world of shit!!! Can't wait to find out what you do.
PS-If you put a cat into your story could you name it after me? My name is from The Cat Who series.
Author's Response:
You know The boys might need a cat.
Date: Aug 25, 2016 3:25 pm Title: Chapter 8
"You think you can handlie it?" Sorry.that line along cracked me up. All I saw in my head was one of those candy gummy worms. haha.
Aaaaaaaaaaanyway. AWESOME chapter! Really glad that Brian was able to give michael what-for. I highly doubt it will do any good. for some reason, Michael seem to have an over inflated sense of self. I don't get it. How can he possibly? does Monty and eli influence them that much? Has he simply always been resentful of his "station" in life? That he grew up poor, so now he deserves everythign handed to him. "awwwwwwww poor widdle Mikey" and to treat his mother like he does. He needs to be hung by his little marble sized balls. the fact he seems to belileve that Brian "owes" him....ARG!!! He pisses me off! If this is the way he's always acted, it's no wonder Ben has strayed so much and ahs to attitude he does. Not that I condine it, and I have the feeling he's going to get worse before he ever gets better...........I'll wait and see.
The confrontation at the school was priceless. Nothing like getting shot down by a kid. Sad that he was such an ass in front of so many kids, but in a way good too. Perhaps a restraining order is possible as there were so many witnesses to his behavior.
Really hopng Brian can buy Michael's house. Deb's too for that matter. that way it stays safe and he can just pass it over to her. Michael's house however....Leave it as a milstone around Michael's neck. I want him to suffer unlimitedly!
curious how Lindsey is going to interfere here. What she's going to do or try to do. What kind of devious plots will she get up to. She's manipulative and devious. Michael is just an asshole and doesn't have the brain power to really devise anything overly manipulative I don't think. You may surprise me, but thinking of Michael as really smart enough to come up with a brilliant plot........really not realistic. lol. Lindsey is smart and Waspy. can be a dangerous combination.
really looking forward to what you have up your sleeve with this!!
cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I had to borrow the brain bleach, but I wanted Justin and Emmett to have to feel my pain writing it. LOL
Date: Aug 25, 2016 4:41 am Title: Chapter 8
The looney train has just pulled in, and Michael is the conductor....smh Why can't he get a life for heaven's sake.
Author's Response:
Michael is that guy you have to pick on. Plus I can treat him badly and still smile.LOL
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2016 4:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Happy Birthday Lorie:)
Now onto my rant about just how pathetic Michael is to actually believe he has any say in what happens to Gus or Brian, He chose Monty and Eli to be his new best friends and tossed his old friends to the curb when they didn't meet the standards of the two Stepford Idiots.
I think Brian should also look into buying Monty and Eli's house they seem to forget as they look down their noses and criticize Brian for not being the being the perfect gay/hetero, that he is very rich and while they give the illusion that they can buy and sell anyone Brian actually has the power to do it.
If I was Brian I would buy their house just to flex my power because Brian would never throw a child out in the street he can put the Fear Of God in Monty and Eli with just a little threat.
Now with Michael and Ben I would put their stuff out in the street for everyone to see and gossip about for days *Evil Laugh*
Lindsay is going to flip her dyed hair when she finds out Justin had a son with Brian and that both boys look alike, perhaps her head will explode? (One Could Only Hope).
This was a very good chapter, can't wait for tomorrow night! :)
Author's Response:
Don't you love ruining Lindsay’s day. I know I do. LOL
Date: Aug 25, 2016 3:29 am Title: Chapter 8
OMG!!!!!! What an AWESOME chapter!! First, what a touching tribute to Lorie! She is a VERY special lady!! Thank you for making her night!!
As for this chapter: WOW!! So much to comment on. I LOVE how you put so much content within the chapters themselves that my brain goes into overdrive just to process the emotions I feel while reading them!
Michael.... what an ASSSSSHHHHOLE First he eavesdrops- JEALOUS much?? Then he basically goes to the school and makes an even bigger ASS of himself by confronting Justin in front of 8-12 year olds. Let me think....STUPID much, Michael? I think so!! I loved the way Justin handled the whole contretempts with the idiot and then to have Jackson stand there and basically call him an ungrateful ingrate was just priceless. But then here comes Gus with the clincher!! The way the events were set up it was like watching a rat in a maze trying to find his way out- Interesting in the extreme and funny as hell!! I guess the fact that he actually thought that Jackson was Gus the first time he saw him was completely lost on the fool! HA! Classic!
Then the STALKER (because what else could you possible call his desperate ass) shows up at Kinnetik to further his foray into fuckery!! I'm so happy that Brian told him off. I cannot and WILL NOT deny giving a standing ovation to Brian when he let Michael have it with both barrels and a rope!! Let that mofo hang! I sincerely hope that Brian IS able to buy Michael's house as well as Debbie's. Michael doesn't need to be brought down off his mighty high horse... he needs to be DROPKICKED!!
WHOO-WEE I can't wait for more of this!
WRITE On, Star!
~Nichelle
Date: Aug 25, 2016 2:58 am Title: Chapter 8
The only way anyone would willingly have sex with Mikey is for money and then that person has to be extremely desperate.
Justin was so great with the kids! And Happy Birthday, Lorie! :)
I’m glad security got involved with stupid whiny Mikey instead of Justin handling him. Justin does not need to go to jail for battery! Although I’m sure with that many witnesses Michael would be the one in jail!
And of course whiny Mikey heads to Brian even though he’s been told repeatedly to stay away. I don’t think Brian and make it any plainer to the moron to stay out of his life and away from both his kids! But we all know Mikey! He never learns.
I sure hope he finds a way to keep both Lindsay and Michael away from the kids!
Keep up the great storytelling!
Deb
Author's Response:
Thank you, I just want to make sure people smile, laugh or cringe, if you did all three my work is done.
Date: Aug 25, 2016 2:52 am Title: Chapter 7
Brian and Jackson’s interaction is so cute! But I wonder what Brian will do when he finds out that Justin to the kids to McDonald’s for breakfast! :)
Lindsay will never learn! But she got what she asked for by marrying Sam.
Yay! Michael’s on the ‘hang-up list’ forever!!
Can’t wait to meet Natalie! And getting Daphne involved, too! Awesome! Fun times ahead!
Evidently Emmett and Justin were not meant to be burglars. :)
Ewwww! Mikey sex! *GAG* I’m with Justin on this, I think I threw up in my mouth, too!
Wonderfully fun chapter! Can't wait for the next.
Deb
Date: Aug 24, 2016 4:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
The relations are starting be built between sons and fathers, between brothers and between fathers.
Let's hope they will find sort of a routine to allow everyone to be at ease.
As Sam is out of the city, Lindsay won't try to get Gus, so it should delay her finding out Jackson is Brian's son.
The description of Michael "sexual" encounter by Emmett is to die for (the whining, the duration and the poor "endowment").
The description of Justin's first sexual encounter was also to die for, but for so many different reasons.
Lucky ladies who had a free porn at home.
Date: Aug 24, 2016 3:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
The scene between Brian and Jackson was adorable. I'm so looking forward to seeing tha relationship grow. also the one between Justin and Gus, and of course, all four of them as a family. I also can't wait to read about Michael's and Lindsey's heads spinning off when they figure out about B&J and they new developed family!! LOL!! That should be highly entertaining!!! It'll be nice to see Jackson developing healthy relationships with gus and Brian. Become a kid and learm to play rather than "figuring out the foce of teh soccer ball" ;) He and gus should be able to balnce it all out nicely in time.
Lindsey should take a look at her pre-nup before she starts assuming anything. she may end up shooting herself i nteh fioot if she tries to screw with Sam too much. He may be an ass, but seeing as he's been married nunerous times, I'm sure he's got the whole "covering his ass" concept down to a science. Had to laugh at the convo between the girl and Lindsey. LOL! Userped by a couple of teeny boppers. (at least she sounds like one)
Loved the emmett and Justin break in scenario. emmett always makes me smile. He's such a character. but.........the scene with Michael adn they trick. Ugh.......brain pleasch is now needed at the visual it gave me. haha. He's attampt at sexy talk was laughable!
Justin's description however was....intriguing! Apparently the neighbours thought so too!! LOL!!
Excellent update! Excellent fic!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Aug 24, 2016 1:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
LMAO!!! I already LOVE Brian and Jackson's interaction! I think Lil' Bit is going to keep surprising his newfound father at every turn! The same goes for Justin and Gus. I am going to love seeing their dynamic grow and change. It was awesome to see Brian and Justin working out the issues almost all parents go through when it comes to school-related things, specifically drop-off/pick-up scheduling. They're already finding ways to make it work so that the other parent's work doesn't suffer.
In terms of the scene at Deb's...First BLECH!!!!! Michael having ANY type of naked ANYTHING is definitely an ECK! factor for me. I still prefer to think of him as asexual or a eunuch at best. And then to use your mother's house as a Den of Sin after he put her out of it was just....I can't even!! Raggedy Rat Bastard! But on the flipside Emmett's comment about Michael whining during sex was HILARIOUS! I almost dropped my coffee during his and Justin's conversation and Justin's introspective inquiry about how the guy was suppose to choke on that. As for Michael's dialogue, he needs to stop reciting porn lines especially if all he has is an extra belly button! Again the fact that I'm even guessing at Michael's peen size is just....EWWWWWW Where the hell is my Brain Bleach?!
Speaking of which... Justin's reveals about that night so long ago were great. I like that it already feels natural to him to talk openly with Emmett. Emmett's reaction to Justin's memories was so IC that I couldn't help but smile at the exchange.
Finally the Coffee Clutch in the neighbor's backyard was HYSTERICAL and ADORABLE! The one thing I absolutely LOVE about the elder adults is that they are not afraid to speak their minds and this was no exception! I hope there is another scene with them at some point during the story!
Looking forward to SOOOOOooooo much MORE of this!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Aug 24, 2016 11:24 am Title: Chapter 7
Lol....this was hilarious, hot but hilarious. However, Lindsay and Michael both need crazy checks.
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2016 3:46 am Title: Chapter 7
What a wonderful chapter. Love the breaking and entering and their talk. The neighbor inviting them into her yard so they didn't get caught was too cool.
Date: Aug 24, 2016 3:19 am Title: Chapter 7
And now there's Diet Pepsi everywhere.. lmao this was so funny - high pitched squeal - but omg the neighbors that was perfect lol
Jackson's a cute little egg head and Brian's already protective of him... sweet!
I can't wait for the romance Linds and Mikey's heads are going to explode!
Author's Response:
Sorry about the Pepsi but reading your review I snorted water from just picturing it.
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2016 12:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Michael is such an idiot that he can think his way out if a wet paper bag when Mel finds out he is not really suing her he us going to wish he was never born!
Lindsay still trying to turn Brian straight? Get Real! Brian already had ya, didn't like it and had to cleanse himself by sleeping with a guy then he just kept on doing it, she is living in Delusional Land because Brian doesn't want to be with her he wants Justin.
I think it is good that Brian and Gus are staying with Justin it gives them a reprieve from the Gruesome Twosome (At least for a little while), I am actually looking forward to Justin's lawyer showing up I want to see what she does to Michael and Lindsay. (Also would like to see Sam, Monty, Eli and Ben get theirs too)
Why would Ben want custody of JR he barely wants to spend time with Michael and a small child would need a lot of supervision??
They are both being spiteful idiots and Mel is going to have help grinding their asses into dog meat!
Introducing Natalie and Daphne to Brian, Gus, Ted, Blake, Emmett, Deb, Melanie, JR, Leda is going to fun perhaps Jennifer and Molly would like to join this party too?
I can't wait to see what the Gruesome Twosome do next?:)
Date: Aug 23, 2016 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
The idea of Lindsey and Michael possibly schemeing together it truly cringe worthy. He's a complete idiot with too few brain cells, completely incapable to thinking up anything viable. I mean really....how long does he think he can get away with not really having a legal suit? Stupid stupid stupid. his attitude of "everyone owes him" is delporable. Where he got that from I don't know, but I'll be honest...I'm really really looking forward to his eminent downfall. lol.
Lindsey is just a scheming bitch. Sadly, she's also much smarter than Michael adn has teh ability to scheme. Not sure though if her level of selfishness will enable her to think of anything that would work.
I do think however, that Justin will be able to match either one of them very easily and surpass them. He's incredibly intelligent and won't be easily fooled. Brian is already fully aware of their machinations as are the rest of teh gang.
Jackson and gus together...I can't wait to read more on them. I think those 2 alone will give both Michael and Lidnsey a run for their money. LOL. Mind you, they'll probably challenge both Brian and Justin a bit as well, but in a good way.
I love that brian has custody of Gus. Well deserved.
Brian's internal thought process shows just how much he's willing to give to justin, adn how much Justin affected him 8 years ago.
Onwards adn upwards Star!!
anticipating the next update tonight. I get so excited knowing you update so well and it gives me a happy dance feeling when I know I get to read something new from you.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 9:53 am Title: Chapter 6
Michael and Lindsay plotting together. Now that's a <shutter> bad thought. Could thing that Lindsay doesn't like Mikey. Brian really is enjoying his new son. Thinking about dating his baby daddy. Things sure have changed. Like it.
Date: Aug 23, 2016 6:53 am Title: Chapter 6
I loved Lindsay's POV about Michael; he can be so stupid; wait, he is stupid!
I hope they never find Justin's home.
I'm so happy Emmett suggested Justin to try again with Brian and that Deb did the same for Brian.
If they live together for some time, it could help a lot (and I guess the kids would love that).
Date: Aug 23, 2016 5:29 am Title: Chapter 5
So happy they are getting along so well (both fathers and sons).
Emmett will have a lot to gossip very soon.
Can't wait to read the next chapter, which is already available.
Thank you for the super quick updates!
Date: Aug 23, 2016 5:03 am Title: Chapter 6
FANGIRL SQUEEEEEING at this chapter!!! First, Michael and Lindsay are the personification of greedy, selfish, idiotic and immature! How the hell do you get everyone riled up about a court case that isn't going to happen? And then we have Mrs. Auerbach still trying to turn a bonafide, sho'nuff gay man straight. If she doesn't sneeze and grow a nine inch cock, Brian isn't going to be interested. But then he STILL wouldn't be interested in the harridan anyway because her personality is UGLY! Once again both are willing to live in their egocentric delusions of grandeur, thinking that THEY are the most important people in Brian's life. I look forward to watching them not only fall on their faces but also getting their dumbasses handed to them while trying to prove their ridiculous theories!
As for Brian: Possessive MUCH, Mr. Kinney? I can't deny laughing and sighing by turns! Justin has pretty much locked himself away in favor of responsibility. Ironically Brian has done the same but to a different degree. It will be interesting to see what happens when someone ignites the dormant sparks between them. I think it's time for Brian to prove that one can take the Stud off of Liberty Avenue but the Maestro of Seduction is still alive and well within Brian Kinney. It would definitely help if they are sharing Justin's estate all for the sake of peace and non-interference from the Peanut Gallery, meaning Michael and Lindsay! OOOOhhhhh I can't wait to watch this all play out!
WRITE On, Star!!
~Nichelle
Date: Aug 23, 2016 4:47 am Title: Chapter 6
Poor woman, having to listen to both Michael and Lindsay in the span of only a few minutes!
Awww! Brian loves Justin! Can't wait to see if they take it slow or end up going full steam ahead! :)
Emmett is such a sweetie and Deb sure knows how to read Brian!
Looking forward to more soon!
Deb
Date: Aug 23, 2016 3:39 am Title: Chapter 5
OMG!!!! I am so in LOVE with this story! Gus and Jackson wanting to spend time togeether and already planning to be picked up and dropped off at school is just too damn SWEET!!!
I'm glad that Brian and Justin have come to an understanding about things and are being totally honest with each other from the start. I always felt that the things they didn't say caused more problems than the things they did. It was also nice to see Ted and Em being supportive as well as Deb. I really hope that Justin buys the house to shut that asshole Michael up! Whiny Worm!!! Then to top it off, Brian and Gus are staying at the Taylor residence which as Brian said could be the best thing for them. With Michael literally darkening the doorsteps of the loft, it looks like being 30 minutes away from the drama of Michael and Lindsay will indeed be a good thing. Without anyone knowing where to look, Brian now definitely has the option to answer his phone or NOT!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!! With any luck, it will be tonight. Yeahhhh....I'm greedy! LOL
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I was writing the next chapter when I posted, so you get your wish.
Date: Aug 23, 2016 3:33 am Title: Chapter 5
I love this! Hope Mikey gets arrested for being a public nuisance!
Jackson and Gus are so cute together!
I can understand Brian's concern after all he went through with Lindsay so it was a releif that Justin has no problem with Brian and Gus being a part of their lives.
Can't wait for more!
Deb
Author's Response:
Jackson and Gus are going to be a big part of this.
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 3:24 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh boy, Michael better watch out. Nobody likes him. Glad to see that Justin, Brian, Jackson and Gus are getting along great. Perhaps Deb can move in too, and cook for them all.
Author's Response:
Jackson is going to hoard and protect his family, Poor Michael shouldn't piss the Kinney boys off.
Date: Aug 23, 2016 3:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Awesome chapter! I want to hug everyone except Michael and Ben. I want to remove Michael from the planet and slap Ben into next year!
Deb
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, I wanted to slap Michael and Ben all the time. Now I can.