Date: Sep 26, 2016 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 11
Gus is just adorable with his sisters. Finally, some family quality time.
Loft invader... Prepare the bleach!
Date: Sep 26, 2016 11:27 am Title: Chapter 10
Now, Ben is also angry at Michael... Poor Ben, not only he is positive, but he has another incurable disease in the form of Michael.
Date: Sep 26, 2016 11:16 am Title: Chapter 9
Hilarious chapter!!!
I loved the hamsters in Michael's head, even if it's not nice for these adorable pets.
I also loved the message Justin left on his phone.
Date: Sep 26, 2016 11:08 am Title: Chapter 8
What a bunch of immature jerks these 2. Lindsay obviously knows all about style and art and Michael is a very responsible father.
Glad that Mel is not left alone and that B&Justin are as strong as ever.
I loved that Oreos gift.
Date: Sep 23, 2016 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
Full drama queen mode! Poor kids, having to witness this scene, even if it was only by hearing.
What could they think while their mother doesn't show up or is late so often?
Date: Sep 23, 2016 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
Poor Brian having to drill information into Michael's head!
I love the whole chapter, but the end is delightful.
Date: Sep 23, 2016 6:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lindsay has some nerve to barge in the gallery and complain about the job.
I love the escape from Brian and Justin from Babylon and that Emmett took one for the team. He knows Michael won't bother him as much as he would Brian.
Justin is no more patient. Good for him!!
Date: Sep 22, 2016 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
I smell more trouble from Lindsay since Brian bought the gallery and other people were hired.
Brian having to hide from Michael is a pity.
Date: Sep 22, 2016 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
What a nightmare this Michael and such a liar!!!
Date: Sep 22, 2016 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
Justin is really patient with Lindsay and she doesn't deserve it. She invades them and is late to pick up JR. At least, Michael is angry at her. Mel is also very patient.
I could imagine Brian going to a surprise party with a bunch of professors & friends... High risk of boredom.
Date: Sep 22, 2016 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting beginning!
The usual leeches already are at full speed on bothering quite everybody.
Lindsay is so delusional she thinks she could have been as talented as Justin as if it was something you could learn...
Michael is disrespectful of the little girls and their parents and so so so blind and deaf...
Date: Sep 22, 2016 8:36 am Title: Chapter 28
Great wrap up!That was a fantastic story, with its funny, family fluffy, creepy and bizarre moments. Thoroughly entertaining.
Thanks for sharing your imagination and talent.
Date: Sep 22, 2016 8:22 am Title: Chapter 27
ROFL, I just calmed down from the last chapter, but picturing everyone staring at Michael with the huge bandage around his head, just set me off again. How many times is he going to have to explain to people that part of his ear is missing?
Michael is now back to talk to Blake; that conversation misunderstood by Mikey (but of course) interpreted as he should see JR in the hopes that he would run into Brian with Gus. They could take care of their children together, wouldn't it be perfect?
B/J and kids meeting with Emmett, Debbie and Ted at the diner was great. Glad Justin has his freedom back.
I'm glad Mel made the decision she did, for herself and the kids.
Kell's interview with Lindsay was disturbing. I think she will be on her way to a hospital for the criminally insane.
Poor Blake, if he's not careful he will become Michael's new best friend.
Date: Sep 22, 2016 7:10 am Title: Chapter 26
Wow! Well, Lindsay didn't kill her mother, but Nancy may wish she had if she ever regains consciousness. Both the lawyer and her father are throwing the Lindsay problem over the wall, back to Mel. How nice for Mel.
Oh, Mikey, Mikey, Mikey. Snort, it's not funny, giggle. Really, it's not funny, Bwahahaha. She bit off his ear, while he was waiting to hear that Brian, his bestest friend, maybe, possibly wanted to see him. It could happen, right? Only in your delusional mind, Michael. ROFL
I found that hysterically funny and oh so righteous! Thank you. <BG>
Date: Sep 22, 2016 6:46 am Title: Chapter 25
HAHAHA! The confrontation between the Petersons and Justin was hysterical. Go Justin! And Nancy just learned the lesson we all learn at some point, never assume. Now we see exactly where Lindsay learned her manipulations and WASP demeanor.
I loved Brian's parting shot to Nancy before they left the house. It is so true!
OMG, did Lindsay kill her? Well, her dad may thank her for it.
Date: Sep 22, 2016 6:22 am Title: Chapter 24
Well, maybe Lindsay will achieve some fame after all (or should I say notoriety?), she'll be a case study for the BAU.
I feel sorry for the lawyer sent to help Lindsay, he doesn't know what he's walking in to.
And there's the root of Lindsay's problem right there...Nancy. So conscious of what others are thinking or will think about her, she isn't even concerned about why in the world would Lindsay even lie about this. Sigh!
Michael's back and it looks like he bought a small clue! I think Blake did a great job of explaining the facts of the Brian and Mikey Show to Michael. Had to snicker regarding Michael's thought of contacting Dr. Alex. Poor guy!
And the tally of charges keep going up and Lindsay hasn't even left the police station. Wonder what mommy and daddy will do to try and make this all go away and cover it up?
Date: Sep 22, 2016 5:56 am Title: Chapter 23
I'll say it again, your POV's are excellent, I have no problem visualizing the story with your words.
Justin, Gus and cheesecake, I'm with them, it is very necessary. Loved that they all had a great time in NY and the ongoing blush battle between Jen and Brian. Lol.
Lindsay's phone calls are definitely creepy!
Lindsay is now arrested and either her sister or parents will be asked to bail her out. Will her house of cards now tumble? It will be interesting to see their reactions to the true status of her ‘relationship' with Justin.
Ok, I'm glad Lindsay tried to stab and then threatened Dr.Alex. He's an impartial professional and she did both deeds in front of a witness (Carl). Added to the existing charges, she ain't getting out, no matter who her father is. In fact, she might be on her way to the funny farm. Yay!
Date: Sep 20, 2016 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 22
I'm glad that B/J and kids got away. They all needed it.
Another stint in jail and is it possible...has Michael finally bought a clue?
I had to laugh at Lindsay wanting real gifts at her wedding this time around. If she wasn't thinking of marrying Justin, I could sympathize with her remembering that fertility statue or whatever it was that Michael/Ted got her and Mel.
Justin was bound to do something that didn't fit in with her fantasy. Now that has happened and so publicly, what will she do?
Date: Sep 20, 2016 12:07 am Title: Chapter 21
Is anybody but Michael surprised that no one wanted to bail him out? I didn't think so.
Dang! Lindsay slept in the car again. I can just picture her stalking through the woods at Britin. Too bad she didn't come in contact with some poison ivy. Maybe that would have slowed her campaign to run off with Justin.
Lol - Brian molesting Justin in front of the house. Lindsay, when did Brian ever have to molest anbody, much less Justin.
Good idea to get out of town for awhile. They all need a break.
Blake is a smart cookie, glad he stood up to Michael and gave him the smack down he so desperately needs.
I loved the Michael Anonymous comment - Lol
Oh lordy, Lindsay is dragging her parents into this. Well, I hope Lindsay is happy she has managed to get her mother's approval, regardless of how temporary this will be, at least she gets to experience it for once. Planning a wedding? Yikes.
How lovely that Jen is accompanying them to NY. I laughed to read that Jen is winning the blushing contest with Brian.
Sigh! Michael showing up at Kinnetik.
Lol about Justin's lament asking if there were a smoke signal visible telling Michael/Lindsay to come ruin their day.
Victoria asked the question of the day. Smart little girl.
Date: Sep 19, 2016 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 20
Poor Justin, you gotta empathize. He has to curtail his life because Lindsay isn't capable of living in the real world.
LOL, I'm with Brian, run over the two of them at the same time, he's got insurance and any publicity would probably help his art sales. <g>
I think Max is reading both Michael and Lindsay correctly. Michael is in a waiting game, he has been for 2 decades and probably will be for the next 2, not so silently pining. Like he deserves Brian for having waited all those years.
Drat! Too bad the police were too slow getting to Lindsay...it will happen, she can't help herself.
Giggle, I knew Michael would violate the restraining order, I just thought he would go to the house or Kinnetik. Couldn't happen to a nicer guy.
Another great chapter, on to the next...
Date: Sep 19, 2016 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 19
Talk about creating revisionist histories, Lindsay and Michael are certainly special snowflakes!
Kudos to Ted for trying, but it is a lost cause. Mikey only hears what he wants to.
I'm glad Max is there. No telling what Lindsay would do to any of them if she felt thwarted enough.
Great POV's!
Date: Sep 19, 2016 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 18
I get Brian's need to vent, but he has to remember this meeting with Lindsay was just a means to an end. He got custody Gus, mission accomplished. I'm sure Justin will know just what to do when Brian gets home.
The bitchfest between Michael and Lindsay was funny and Michael of all people to mention a restraining order was hysterical!
Date: Sep 19, 2016 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 17
Well, if her prior behavior didn't convince you she was going around the twist, Linds trolling a neighborhood (the wrong one at that) trying to find Jen certainly should. When she finally does connect with her on the phone, exhibit one WASP smackdown. Go Jen!
Lol the 3-way conversation between Jen, Justin and Brian, that left Brian blushing and Justin amazed.
I understand the way Justin and Brian are feeling (although from different perspectives), but am glad that they are listening to the experts around them.
I think Blake is spot on with the analogy that Justin is Lindsay's crystal meth and all the accompanying angst that's ahead of her (and the gang) in confronting and handling her addiction.
I'm glad Mel was there to support Brian and yay they got the custody papers signed with relative ease!
And now I know how she reacted to the restraining order. That went well....not.
Great chapter!
Date: Sep 19, 2016 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow, Lindsay is spiraling.
As always, excellent POV's from each character. I could see Justin not wanting to believe it was that bad until Lindsay used Gus as a bargaining chip. Gus doesn't matter to her anymore, only her fantasy has hold. Wonder how she's going to react when she gets the restraining order?
I love the way the gang is rallying round B/J.
On to the next...
Date: Sep 19, 2016 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 15
Well, now we know how Michael got the key to the loft. It's good that they all know, so that it won't happen again.
I commiserate with both Brian and Justin regarding how to deal with Lindsay. Justin wants to let her have it and Brian wants to protect his family from the crazy person.
I'm glad Peter is coming down with a security expert, they badly need advice from an outside party.
After meeting Max I'm seeing some of Justin's and Lindsay's earliest interactions in a different light. And with the reevaluation, I'm equally concerned.
On to the next...