Date: Jan 29, 2019 1:36 pm Title: PART IV
cant beleive Brian fucked Michael
Date: Jan 29, 2019 1:30 pm Title: PART III
fucking Debbie, never liked her
Date: Nov 09, 2017 1:45 pm Title: PART IV
This was beautifully written, and captures their feelings in a human and credible way.
Date: Oct 18, 2017 2:22 am Title: PART IV
Nice story, ever though of adding to it. Telling how Brain and Justin get back togather.
lah
Date: Sep 01, 2017 11:34 pm Title: PART IV
Well, I was hoping for some sloppy make up sex at the end, but at least it ended on a somewhat positive note.
Wonderful writing, as always :D
Date: Sep 01, 2017 11:16 pm Title: PART III
Yes Brian, go fix the mess you made!
Date: Sep 01, 2017 11:04 pm Title: PART II
I love Brian, but I'm happy that he's miserable with Michael and without Justin...
Date: Sep 01, 2017 10:44 pm Title: PART 1
Great, but rather sad, beginning. I don't know how I missed this one before!
Date: Aug 04, 2016 6:17 pm Title: PART 1
I would love to see a sequel to this story. I just love to hate Michael.
This was so beautifully written as all your stories are. I oriiginally read it on MW and couldn't leave a review. I hope I can leavea review on KD.
Author's Response:
Oh, Linda, I'm right there with you on the Michael hating. I've actually written one, maybe two, stories where he wasn't so bad or was actually a good guy, but he's my favorite villain. What can I say? LOL
I'm not sure if there will ever be a sequel on this one because I like the open-ended feeling of the story. I could change my mind someday, but most likely not. I do have several things in the middle of being written so there should be something entirely new (maybe with a bad Michael!) shortly.
Roni
Date: Jul 23, 2016 8:56 pm Title: PART IV
This a a beautifully written story. I hope to see more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: Jul 23, 2016 7:43 pm Title: PART 1
Great to see this particular story here on KD.
Read it the first time on MW and fell in love with it.
Once again I want to thank you for giving your readers the oportunity to make up their own ending to this story.
Faved it once again.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Soirsa. I wanted to do something without a hard and fast ending. Will they repair their relationship? Is it too broken to heal? I don't know. I like stories that leave me wanting just a little bit more, and it's one of the reasons that I'm not a huge hater of the ending of the series. I know, I know... that's kind of heretical of me, but I like that I can create the post-513 lives of our guys.
Roni
Date: Jul 23, 2016 2:14 pm Title: PART IV
I love this story. When Justin talk to Deb in chapter 1, I cheered. This is one of my favorites.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you cheered! I sometimes love/sometimes hate Deb. Depends on the day or the weather or what shoes I'm wearing that day, I think. LOL
I do think Deb needs a real dose of reality when it comes to Michael, though, no matter what day of the week it is.
Roni
Date: Jul 23, 2016 1:28 pm Title: PART IV
Wow...this really broke my heart. To think that Brian actually ended up with Michael....I can't even imagine it. For Brian to do something like this was pretty shitty, but hopefully they can start again.
Author's Response:
It was a real stretch for me to pair Brian with Michael, believe me. But I could almost see it happening if Justin wasn't physically there and Michael fell apart. Brian wised up but it's hard for him to completely distance himself from Michael and Deb. Whether Justin and Brian could overcome that? I don't know.
I'm sorry it broke your heart, but it was honestly intended to do just that. With a little bit of hope at the end.
Roni