Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2016 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 10

Finally Debbie!!!!!  stay on this path please...

hopefully this will be the beginning of the turn around :) 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2016 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 8

wow... Michael is just dumber than ever!!!! haha

 

I LOVE that Brian wants to do everything to make his family happy including a menagerie of pets! lol

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2016 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 6

I love this family too Emmett!!!!

 

 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2016 9:22 pm Title: Chapter 4

OK, I want to adopt Mia now!!!! lol

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2016 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love Blake, Ted, Emmett (and Drew) and Cynthia soooo much!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 7:49 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved the idea of Brian and Justin (and Emmett & Drew too) adopting at risk kids. Great story idea. TAG

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 12

Lindsey and Mel just can't seem to learn their lessons at all can they? sheesh! to presume they can just use Gus's credit card is pretty audasious of them. Mel especially seems to think Brian and gus "owe" her. And Lindsey is going down!! Yee ha! couldn't have happened to a better bitch. LOL

JR is finally seeing the truth. Michael had no choice but to tell her the truth adn now he's paying the price of it. Once again, his selfishness is costing him huge. Ben and Brad will do wonders for JR. Seeing Ben deal with Michael was great! Again, Michael assuming that Ben should automatically  "save" him is unreal!! 

Really glad the Deb is finally coming around to seeing the truth of everything. Yes...it will definitely take taime for everyone to really trust her once again. She just going to have to suck it up though. Hope she prepared to do it.

cheers!!

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 5:39 am Title: Chapter 13

Beautiful story with lots of emotions and fun as well.

For the next, I would choose "Justin friend with Ben" first.

Thank you for entertaining us!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 3:14 am Title: Chapter 13

You've ended this on a positive note.  JR is happy with Ben and Brad.  Lindsay has her used car dealer.  Mel's back in Canada without her daughter.  Even Mikey has a new guy, one that's completely gullible.  All the foster children are doing well, as are Chad and Mia.  Best of all Gus is in a safe place and happy.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 1:39 am Title: Chapter 13

And now for my last review of the "Young, Old and Ridiculous:"

I LOVED that you had Gus update us on life as he sees it! Since he was the most affected by the issues presented, he seems fitting for him to have the last word. I'm so proud of him for not becoming a product of Mel and Lindsay's neglect or letting their assholery change the person he is becoming like it did to JR.

I'm glad that JR has shed her DLS persona and her 'parents.' Perhaps being with Ben and Brad will heal her in the long run and she and Gus can renew their relationship before she was turned into the mini-M&M that she was. Hopefully she'll go on to remain clean, sober and have a bright future.

I'm also glad that Delusional-No-More was not just a short-term moniker for Debbie but became an actual fact. It was past time that she stopped letting the rose-coloered glasses for her spineless and spoiled son rule her life! Even though Michael is in a new relationship (WHY STAR WHY? LOL), it is obvious that he hasn't changed or learned any life-changing lessons at all. Well I hope that his John is prepared to stay broke and invests in some top-quality earplugs. He'll need them! Meanwhile, I really hope Carl and Deb can get back to their lives but happy that they are taking it slow.

I don't blame Brian and Justin one bit for being still wary of Deb after a year. She did a lot of damage to them in the eight she was a shrew! But at least they are still willing to give her a chance, even if the relationship will never be as it once was. Perhaps after the mending, it will be stronger. I think Princess Mia will play a large role in that!  

Well now it is time for the update regarding Slutty Felony and Horny Neglectful-Ass... It is a good thing that the toxic relationship has FINALLY met its end. Lindsay must be in her full glory even if the man she is now married to doesn't have as much money as Brian and Justin. She'll get to be a socialite and have dick-on-demand...or at least until the urge hits for her to carpet-munch. But then again as a sleazy used car saleman and a hetero dude, he might just be into that.

I'm not surprised that Melanie went back to Canada and no longer has anything to do with any of them. No one really knows her there or what she's capable of and now that Jenny isn't there, she is free to be who she wants to be and forget where she came from. I doubt that she is missed!

Well I am going to miss giving this running commentary of Who's Who is Asshole-ville! I am so looking forward to MORE of your work. You are an amazing writer who never fails to make me feel. Reading your work is not just a pleasure but a much-needed respite from my real life and writing adventures. And I thank you!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Author's Response:

I won't leave you for long. I just wrote a chapter for an anti-michael fic.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 12:59 am Title: Chapter 12

I will be sad to see this end it has been such a joy to read because all the ones who got on my nerves are getting their just desserts.

Deb finally removed the repose colored glasses to see the truth about Lindsay, Melanie and Mama's precious little baby boy Mikey, he took that money she begged Drew for to buy a toy, he couldn't be bothered to go to work to support himself or his daughter but he could steal money for a toy? SMH

Lindsay using the credit card for her own selfish reasons is not surprising anymore, Mel joining in on the phone is icing on the cake, I agree with David it would have been nice to see the look on their faces as the movers put their stuff on the lawn for all the neighbors to see.

Michael lying to JR about Ben not wanting to see her was so him and so pathetic that the girls joined in, especially since Michael never once helped them with JR's support, but pettiness loves company so they all should get a place together lol.

Lindsay and Melanie go at each was funny because they are two spoiled children just looking for attention, of course this attention they might not enjoy so much but you reap what you sow. (Mommy and daddy Peterson not helping is Hilarious!!)

That was nice of Ben and his husband Brad to take JR in this kid needs discipline and a strong family structure to save her life.

I really liked that Brian and Justin put Debbie in her place she has years of groveling to do before forgiveness can be established, I agree with Justin I don't trust her either she needs to start thinking before she speaks.

I like both story ideas they both sound very interesting though the one about Brian running every time Michael calls has potential for a lot of angst :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for all the cheering on. I wrote to see if I could and you guys cheered me on. I am already on the next one. Michael is going to be thwarted at every turn and I want to return to a more humorous one.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 12:37 am Title: Chapter 11

So Delusional-No-More (for now at least) is following through on evicting Dumbass... Why do I feel that she will fall into old habits once she finds out that he lost his store and all the contents in it? Which is exactly what I'm waiting to see happen. Perhaps without his toys he might actually grow up...faulty theory but worth a try right?

Speaking of Dumbass Denial Stupid, it's going to be interesting to see what happens when he really understands just what he lost. Ben has moved on and by the sounds of it has a terrific husband who puts his needs FIRST. I imagine that being the VP of Operations for Liberty Air, Brad doesn't make chump change. A much better fit for an intelligent professor than a man-child who never grew up. I would think actually being able to hold an adult conversation and one that doesn't revolve around comic books would be refreshing to Ben. I'm looking forward to seeing how DDS and Desperate Lying Stupid are going to react to this change!

Speaking of changes.... can I just tell you that I had the fist pump and loud cheering going on full-blast reading about the downfalls of Slutty Felony Guilt-inducing Stupid and Horny Neglectful-Ass Accusation-throwing Stupid!! Yeah, I just had to add to their names once again! Lindsay telling Gus that he had to tell his father that he allowed her to use the card was laughable. I absolutely LOVED his response to her, telling Lindsay that he was going to do exactly what she had done for him when Mel was throwing him out. Now THAT response was befitting of Brian Kinney's son!

As far as Mel's comment that if Lindsay wasn't letting every cock near her snatch then she would have had time to pay attention to the kids...WOW  Pot trying to tell off Kettle? Really? I have so many issues with Mel's self-righteousness and blame-shifting that I can't even list them all. However, I would love it if someone would point out that JR's latest stint in lock-up was because she was laid out for Layla. Whether Lindsay was there or not, JR came out of HER snatch and she should have been more vigiliant with HER daughter!

Thank you for allowing me to give my play-by-play "Young, Old and Ridiculous" reviews on this story!! This one will keep my tongue wagging and fingers typing for years to come!!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Attn Claire: LOL!! I can't help it! I'm just calling the crazy as I see it!! HUGS! 

Author's Response:

I think I write just to read your opinion. I love that people got so involved in all these stories. This one is going to end in the next chapter because I feel it would lose to much if I didn't. I do have another one I've been playing with. Its Anti-Michael but not to the extremes that I have gone to in the others. I hope to have enough done to post tomorrow.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2016 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 11

Everyone is getting exactly what they deserve.