[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 4:00 am Title: Chapter 1
First, OMG 4th fic already?!!! GO GAL!!!!
Now onto my review: Great beginning!! I already know it's going to piss me off but I will rant happily as I leave my reviews. Already the four PITAs (that's pain in the ass for short) are tap-dancing on my last working nerve of the last working nerve. I am already looking forward to you making them pay in BIG ways (I'll be making them pay in my fics as well just to make sure they suffer A LOT, LOL).
Your writing is amazing and you never disappoint! I am always ALWAYS able to escape into the story and that is a true gift!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Yep I hit all your favorites anti them all. Get to writing and I'll help you want bash the hell out of them. Thanks for sticking with me.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 3:50 am Title: Chapter 1
This is starting out very interesting. Brian is going to go on the warpath and Mel is in his sites.
Great start on the story. Sometimes the writing muse won't go to sleep. Sending virtual chocolate to keep it happy.
Sandy
Author's Response:
I was going to let Linds survive but I changed my mind. I really just thought this story up a few hours after my last one. I had it planned out and decided to go with it. It will get lighter.