[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2016 2:17 am Title: Chapter 11
Gotta give it to Em he knows how to stir up trouble. Fun, fun, fun.
Date: Jul 18, 2016 2:04 am Title: Chapter 11
And the plot thickens LOL
Date: Jul 18, 2016 1:51 am Title: Chapter 11
OMG!!!!!! I LOVED GIRL'S NIGHT!!! GO JEN! Justin got it from his Mama! I always laugh when I see her telling Brian that in her youth she had some wild times. Nice to know that Jen wasn't always so prim and proper! And Emmett remains HILARIOUS!!
Lindsay is getting part of her just desserts. YAY!! Although Nancy still should have put her on a plane, it was nice to see Lindsay be forced into dating other men. I still find her thoughts about marrying Brian a trip though. She's going to blow a gasket when she finds out that Brian is already, in a sense, MARRIED to her nemesis. Do I detect a clash of the blond WASP in the near future?
I really LOVE Daphne! She really takes care of those she loves and that extends to the kids. What a touching scene between her and Gus! I'm also thrilled about Brian and Justin becoming the father of twins!! GO JUS and your over-achieving bubble butt!
This chapter was freaking awesome and I certainly can't wait for more! Damn Real Life is so intrusive!! Wouldn't we all just love writing fan-fic all day?! But work does pay the bills which includes internet service so I guess it's a MUST!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2016 1:07 am Title: Chapter 10
I thought I would die laughing. Daphne actually said she was having triplets? And the fathers could be Brian, Justin and Ted? And Lindsay bought it? Brilliant.
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2016 12:53 am Title: Chapter 10
That was too funny for Words, though I do have a few for Lindsay lol Daphne Is My Girl!! Everything she said to Lindsay was hella funny I wish Lindsay hadn't left yet I wanted Daphne to say more.
So Lindsay would owe Brian $140, 000 huh? That sounds about right since not all that money went to Gus anyway, still hasn't even asked about JR...What a Cow!
Daddy sleeping with his god-daughter is not surprising still wondering if he is going to give the spoil brat the cash to pay Brian?
Brian and Justin vanishing for a few days sounds wonderful cause the garden should be finished by the time they get back, I so wish I see Katie's face when Jennifer shows her around and says the names of all the plants *roflmaO*
Looking forward to the garden party where Katie gets put in her place (her husband is so going to love this!) and when Lindsay gets what she deserves.
I Just Love Your Wicked Imagination! ;)
Date: Jul 18, 2016 12:38 am Title: Chapter 10
OMGGGGG!!!!! I freaking LOVE Daphne! She is a TRUE best friend! I nearly choked on my Pepsi while she told Lindz about the 'babies' and then followed it with the sex change offer. This chapter was absolutely HILARIOUS and pure Daphne!!
As for Lindsay, I think she is finally beginning to see that all avenues to her becoming Mrs. Brian Kinney are closed to her. But I doubt that she will take the high road and quit while she's ahead. Gold-digging heifer! Watching her downfall is amazing!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 17, 2016 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
I lover Daphne's candor, but I don’t think it was wise to add fuel to the fire. It was funny as hell and Lindsay deserved every scathing word of it.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Amazing chapter: you got to love Daphne; she's the best of the best friends!
I love everything you wrote here and especially:
"I told Brian that he is going to have to rub my feet and carry me around when I get too big"
and
"I don’t want to be the perfect WASP wife to Brian like you do. Linds, has it occurred to you that without a dick Brian isn’t interested in you. Wait, I think I might know someone who does sex changes if you need that number. Even with a sex change though, you couldn’t be Justin. You don’t have the ass for it, but maybe a they could do butt implants. Linds wait, where are you going. I haven’t finished yet."
May I ask why you call Melanie "Melody"?
Author's Response:
The name was my mistake fixed it thanks for letting me know.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 9:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh so now she's going after Daphne...she is in for a BIG surprise. As Maury would say..."Daphne, you are not the baby mama"
Date: Jul 17, 2016 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 9
I think Lindsey needs a scorecard to remember what lie she has used to keep it all straight.
I love that Jennifer is going in on tormenting Katie.
Sandy
Author's Response:
Jen is going to do this in the last chapter so that might be a while. I also want it to be good. Lindsay is keeping so many balls in the air that she can't keep up anymore.
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2016 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh what fun. A road trip for mel, the plants for Katie and Lindsay for Brian.
Author's Response:
I liked the idea of Mel just having fun. She was always so serious.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
I'm so glad that Mel was able to have fun on the roadtrip!! That was an important scene of self-realization for her.
I am anxiously awaiting the garden party! The fact that Jen is in on it will add loads of FUN!! That's exactly what Katherine gets for messing with the Justin Taylor- Lord of Mischief!
Reading Lindsay's downfall is just way too much hilarity! This bitch is certifiable! I'm glad that Brian had the good sense to call Cynthia into the meeting and get Aaron to Kinnetik ASAP. No doubt Lindsay would have either tried to twist Brian's actions and words around or made everyone think that she and Brian had sex again...yeah, like that would ever happen crazy beotch!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I noticed that everything Linds and Mel did was to impress the GLC. How does an ex biker chick suddenly want to be so proper. I have a surprise in the next chapter for everyone. I couldn't not put this person in the story.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
I can't wait to read how Jennifer will manage the garden tour for the neighbor.
I love how you mix the fun parts with the serious one.
Author's Response:
I want to here Jen say Dropping Ball shrubs. I don't know why but to me that is hilarious. I can't be serious for more than a few minutes.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 2:04 am Title: Chapter 8
nice update- Lindsay is still a bitch
Author's Response:
I am in love with chapter 10. I finished it and am waiting on Lorie to Beta it. I wanted to screw with Linds alot and I think I did. It should be up soon.
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2016 1:57 am Title: Chapter 8
Mom gives her the idea to push and pull Brian then when she comes to town Mama Peterson ain't got no time for her, now that is funny and so deserving for their little princess.
Hunter was funny the way he handled Lindsay I do love that young man :)
Nice that we are getting Gus point of view about Lindsay and I do find it interesting that she is all concerned about Gus, but never asked about JR once, smart of Brian to cut off the money so now Lindsay is really all alone, also smart of him putting in a clause ,that if they deny him access to his son then they have to pay back the support, how could Lindsay forget that part of the agreement especially since she barely has enough to pay for a lawyer?
She us so delusional about Brian and what he needs this woman never knew him she just liked the wrapping he came in, Lindsay the manipulator is not surprising you could see she liked the power it gave her especially over Brian.
Justin and Michael are having too much fun getting back at Kathy nice to see Carl joining in the fun too, I wonder what Mother Taylor will find out about Mrs. Peterson that Brian doesn't know already??
Date: Jul 16, 2016 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
Such a tangled Web is being weaved here.
Date: Jul 16, 2016 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
WOW! Lindsay just keeps digging herself into a deeper hole...and I'm LOVING it! She's the only one who can make Brian happy- HAAAAAAA!
Mel and Michael's talk was moving and informative. I think Mel is finally realizing all the ways that Lindsay kept playing her throughout the years.
Justin is hilarious!! I can't wait to see Katherine's reaction to Justin's 'Garden of Artistic Vision.' It's good that Cal is on his side too...LOL
So much plot going on and I'm so looking forward to watching you bring it altogther!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2016 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
What a fantastic chapter. Lindsay finally gets told that the money has dried up. Not even the police are will to help her. Love all the POVs.
Date: Jul 16, 2016 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
"Poor" Lindsay: she will have to back out or she will have to pay back all the money she received for Gus; it's going to be a tough choice.
Can't wait to see how she will react to that fact.
In the meantime, Justin and Michael are going wild; it's nice to see how they are close now. I liked how you explained how this happened.
Date: Jul 16, 2016 3:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
I LOVED that Hunter put told Lindsay off! They did the right thing in giving Hunter ALL of the information instead of treating him like a child and disregarding that he is an intelligent man in his own right. I think she just overplayed her hand calling the police. I wonder if they will arrest her for making a false report. After all there is a paper trail, one that Lindsay is fully aware of. And WTG Gus for telling the entire truth! I don't think Brian left any avenues for Lindsay to use to get her way.
Can't wait for the next chapter!! Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 16, 2016 1:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
Things are about to get very heated and not in positive life-affirming way
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2016 11:46 am Title: Chapter 7
I love how fast you post. These chapters leave me laughing. Brian has everything figured out and everyone Linds calls turns her away. It's only a matter of time before her parents do the same. The feud with the neighbor is just too funny. Finding a fountain like you describe will be hard, they have some with little boys and water shooting out of their penis and I saw one where water shot out of breasts. Keep up the good work,
Date: Jul 16, 2016 7:50 am Title: Chapter 7
Thank you for the update!
The blond devil is back to the Pitts and her family doesn't seem to be really waiting for her.
I loved how Hunter is clashing Lindsay: straight to the point and honest to people that actually help him.
I also loved "Emmett said something about eating salami and mom suddenly wanted my Dad. I don’t really get it.". Poor Gus, way to mature for what is happening and fortunatelly clueless for Emmett rantings.
"Hum, Brian naked.": that would have a lot of people day/night dreaming...
Date: Jul 16, 2016 3:50 am Title: Chapter 1
SEE? I told you I was writing! LOL LS is UP!! Happy Reading and then Get to Writing!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2016 1:12 am Title: Chapter 6
Nymphs with water coming out of their Asses- I Love That! lol Perhaps they should get some sculptures in different sexual position too or some men who wouldn't mind acting out those sexual positions just when Kathy comes outside *roflmao*
Brian and Justin are quite remarkable when they turn their evil genius on others this Kathy woman should just give up but I doubt she will.
So the wicked witch is on her way to Pittsburgh now that she knows that Mel is there with the kids, I can't wait to see for her broomstick to land and she goes to see Daphne, I wonder how Jennifer is reacting to all this drama and does she have any suggestions to help Justin get at Kathy? lol
Now suddenly Lindsay's mom is starting to realize this is a bigger headache than she originally planned, this isn't her pathetic relationship with her husband, Brian and Lindsay were never married so the wasp games don't work on him.
I can understand Gus needing a break from Lindsay and her drama he is a child who should not be dealing with these problems and JR didn't ask to be born into this either, thankfully Lindsay does not have custody of JR so in a way she is safe, Lindsay barely noticed her anyway unless she was using the poor kid as pawn to get back at Mel.
I wonder what dirt Brian has on the Petersons to make them regret ever trying to take Gus away from him? (I wonder if Mrs. Peterson talking to her daughter was a ploy to get Gus all along?)
Not surprised Sam doesn't remember Lindsay women are just Kleenex to him and that man is a dog always in search of a new bone.
Lindsay has a long line of people who want to kick her ass, I hope she is ready to pay the consequences for her actions?
This story is so good and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)