Date: Dec 14, 2024 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
I sure hope you are still seeing reviews as they come in. I just finished this, and there is a major mistake. I went through reviews on KD, MW, and AO3... and nobody commented on this.
The last four were told to go, Hannah, Belinda, Joe, and Loretta. Then you stated, the three left were Brian, Justin, and Marisol. But you didn't mention that Ethan was still part of the show. When Justin came out of the room, in chapter 11, Ethan even said to Justin, “Not everything,” Ethan said with a smirk. Then after the paragraph break, you said the last three were Brian, Justin, and Alice. So how could it go from Brian, Justin, and Marisol, to the guys and Alice? Then when their game started, it was just Brian, Justin, and Marisol. So how come it switched from Marisol, then Alice, then back to Marisol? I was so very confused.
That is such a major boo-boo. I'm shocked no one pointed that out.
I really liked the plot and the story. But there were inconsistencies, which made it hard to understand. One thing I wasn't very happy with, is that the whole family, and the whole of Pittsburgh, found out Justin had played hustler to get by in New York. Why would you have his mother watch and hear that?
Date: Jul 23, 2022 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 11
I loved this fic. Gotta read more of your stories.
Date: Jul 23, 2022 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
Excellent twist. Great story.
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2022 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very entertaining story which thoroughly reinforced why I refuse to get drawn into "reality" tv shows. Great to read a happy ending based so soon after the series ended, at least our boys weren't miserable without each other for too long.
Date: Jan 07, 2022 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow. Thanks for the update. I don't watch these shows but I like this story.
There is Kib , but Ethan is dating him and would know if he worked on the show.
There's Sap but I don't see it.
Maybe the virgin he slept with.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. The new chapter is up but I'll say, not everything is as it seems.
Date: Jan 07, 2022 1:10 am Title: Chapter 9
Argh I hate reality shows like these especially when they humiliate people. However great story so far I have no idea what is behind everything
Author's Response:
Me too. Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2021 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh..my..god... Please continue this story!!!! It's so good. I am shook.
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2021 5:28 am Title: Chapter 7
What a twist!! I love the trivia contest and Brian's critique of the painting got them kicked out of the museum. So many great moments in this chapter!! <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2021 9:26 am Title: Chapter 6
What a wild ride! Good for Justin calling Brian on his sh**. Their shower brought back lovely memories from the show . ;)
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2021 8:59 am Title: Chapter 5
Brian is a master manipulator and knows what he's doing. He still and always will love Justin, so I think he is guiding people to get rid of Ethan (and to make everyone hate himself). I hope Justin can forgive him after this though.
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2021 8:40 am Title: Chapter 4
ROTFLOL!! I knew it!!! I'm loving this story so far.
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2021 8:02 am Title: Chapter 2
Thank goodness they sent Chris home but omg Craig! This should be interesting... :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2021 7:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh no...! I'm hooked now...
Date: Sep 09, 2021 11:46 am Title: Chapter 8
didn't see that coming ????
Date: Sep 09, 2021 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1
You have no idea how happy that makes me.
Ypu have set up these relationships so well. So excited to see where this goes
Date: Sep 08, 2021 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 8
That was a super intense game. What a shocker.
Date: Sep 01, 2021 9:02 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow... just...wow... I hate reality TV shows. But I am soooo hooked on this story. Please , please, please don't take another 5 years to finish it.
Author's Response:
I have a love hate relationship with reality shows. My favorite I guess would be British ones. I'm going to really try and finish this in the next month or so.
Date: Sep 01, 2021 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh so good
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: Aug 31, 2021 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow another interesting twist and man Mel and Brian will have monster tantrums when they find out ????????????
I also wondered if Brian's business would be adversely effected with Brian being on the program
Author's Response:
Really? Brian and Mel are both so level headed, never once queening out. LOL.
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2021 2:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
I really like this. Looking forward to Mel and Brian finding out a bit being related.
Author's Response:
That will be fun, not for them though.
Date: Aug 31, 2021 1:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
Great twist
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: Aug 25, 2021 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow. Way to play the game Brian. I don't know if this will help or hurt Justin.
Author's Response:
Sometimes Brian goes for the throat, LoL.
Date: Aug 22, 2021 5:44 am Title: Chapter 4
Lol oh Brian you just couldn't stay away woohoo amusing jealous times coming up
Author's Response:
Jealous times are on there way.
Date: Aug 22, 2021 4:49 am Title: Chapter 4
I love the direction this is going!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: Aug 21, 2021 5:25 am Title: Chapter 3
Bloody Craig what is about people always wanting to beat Justin up