Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2016 9:16 am Title: PART VII... BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE

 I am really getting into this story Have a couple of questions though. I don't get why Justin would be giving them any money or selling his loft at all if he knows that they have no case because he didn't sign anything. Why would he even be asking them how much to get rid of them. And why wouldn't the lawyer tell him that they don't have a case?

Author's Response:

Justin's reasoning is explained in the following chapter. 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2016 5:14 am Title: PART VII... BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE

Lindsay claiming her baby is Brian is never going to fly.  Somehow Melanie and Harry will have to figure out some way around buying Gary out.  After all what he and Brandon did can't be legal, can it?  Somehow I don't see Brian letting Justin give up his dream of college if he knows about it.

Reviewer: Shirley Heath Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2016 11:37 pm Title: ~Part I: LIONS AMONG MERE MORTALS~

Where can I get the book?  I love it

Author's Response:

Hello Shirley. Thank you for reading my work! If you are talking about my published books, they are available on Amazon under the same name. I hope you continue to enjoy this story as well!! 

 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2016 7:10 pm Title: PART VI: THIN LINES...

Oh boy, what a chapter!!!!!

It was so worth the wait ;-))

The beginning is playful with a little serious stuff (cancer, work, family) between Mel and Leda. As soon as Brian and Justin arrive, the ton becomes friendly and gently mocking. I really love the new dynamic between Mel and Brian.

As for the last part, you spoiled us with a loooooooooong and super hot scene.

To make it better, there are 2 chapters to read.

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2016 6:47 pm Title: PART VII... BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE

So the thunder-cunt is preggers huh? well we all know that Brian isn't the impending papa, so he rlies will definitely come back to bite her in the ass. I mean really...all it takes in a simple DNA test! Stupid stupid girl. Nobody is going to be fooled by her, at least if they are...it won't be for long. Her attitude towards Deb is shameful. And her assumption that brian will take care of her is....well, laughable! Debs parting comment about her health insurance was great! HA! stick it to the bitch! OH!! Wait!! Soemone already did!! lol. so is it Sam's or the Museum dude's?

Mel, Brian et al are finally piecing together everything about Lindsey and all her machinations. Justin is sure getting himself involved in a whole plethora of drama! good thing he's so supportive of Brian. Glad they will have eachother throughout this whole ordeal. they will need each other's strength I think.

OMG!!!!!!!! What if it's Michael's!? could she have gone into the aprtment and swiped some spunk thinking it was brian's? but he was out of town....anything left behind would've been old....huh. Maybe I'm thinking to much....Either way, I'm hoping it's not brian's. Not sure how it can be unless she really did get inseminated, but the timing is all off for that. 

Seriously girlfridn....I need an update like NOW to see what you have up your sleeve!! LOL!

Is that contract even legal? It can't be. contract law states if nothing else that all parties need to have knowledge. Can't be under duress...how can they possibly think they can get away with it! Legitimately it's only 5 days for Justin's contract, and Brandon's would be void as he can't force Justin to be a part of it I would think. Gary is going to be trouble. He's going to want to get Justin by whatever means. I had higher hopes for Brandon. I mean I know he wanted Justin, but I thought he's respect justin more. I knew he'd really try for more involvment, but to go to this level, to these extremes....I really didn't think he'd be this nefarious.

Heart is breaking for Justin. He's lost everything he's worked so hard for. I don't think Sap will end it there no matter how much he gets, but we can hope. I'm also hoping that Brandon faces reality that justin is through with it all, including him now. I'm sure Brian will do everything in his power to help out Justin. Hopefully Justin will accept at least some of the help offered. Perhaps even a job...

Again...frigging BRILLIANT chapter! I'm on pins and needles wondering what's going to happen next.

Huigs!!

cheers,

Elaine. PS sorry for all the spelling mistakes. My fingers get going and the font is so flipping small that mistakes are a pain in the ass to see

Reviewer: John Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2016 5:41 am Title: PART VII... BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE

Hey its me again. But because it's not legal because he didn't agree to it that makes it null and void. Wouldn't the lawyer friend and even Brian know that he doesn't have to pay anything. Maybe Justin can be scared but not the lawyer or Brian? More soon please. Lol

Author's Response:

Justin has a lot of heroes surrounding him,  if only he would let them help. But Justin isn't known as the "LION" without good reason or simply for his dancing ability. He's strong and fiercely independent which is both a blessing and a curse in his case. What he won't do is expect to he saved or rescued by anyone, including those he considers family. The Sheltons, Molly, Harry and Ava know that; the rest (Brian, Mel, Em and Ted) will learn quickly. He's had to live by his wits in ways that Gary and Brandon don't know and could never understand. But most of all he's intelligent and resourceful. 

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2016 3:48 am Title: PART VI: THIN LINES...

Chelle,

Love the HOT sex. Brian definitely made Justin's first time special. 

<3

~Lorie

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2016 3:37 am Title: PART VII... BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE

Okay I have no words here....that slime ball shouldn't be able to win so easily. I hope Justin finds another way out of this situation. As for Lindsay, she needs professional help.

Author's Response:

Justin has plenty of support in those around him. But having that support system and allowing them to help you are two separate things. Justin has been independent for so long, he may not know how to accept the help. As for Lindsay, Chillleeee she needs MORE than professional help! I would include a FIST and some HOLY WATER to exorcise that delusional demon, LMAO!

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Chelle

Reviewer: NoChaser Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2016 3:31 am Title: PART VII... BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE

I do so love this story. You've got a strong Justin, a less emotionally stunted Brian, and Lindsay and Michael we love to hate! What's not to love! LOL.

But, not to get all legally technical or anything - and yes, I know it's fanfiction land, but save Justin's money!!! Unless he was a party to the contract signed between Brandon and Sap, they can't hold him responsible for anything. That's all on Sap and Brandon. (Love it that they both can get shafted. haha) 

Can't wait for more. 

Author's Response:

RONIIIIIII OMG! I'm so honored that you are enjoying this! Thank you so much for reading! I love writing Justin as a strong lead, equal to Brian in every way but still vulnerable enough to need emotional support at times. I tend to write Brian that way as well- with heart and intelligence as opposed to just one or the other. I've always enjoyed their dynamic so this is my chance to take certain elements of their relationship and build a story around it. It allows me to never have to write or box the same 'type' of Brian and Justin dynamic. 

Brandon and Gary's deal about Justin is a classic case of "What he doesn't know won't hurt him." Neither of them ever thought that Justin had goals and dreams outside of the Dance Troupe (Gary) or building a permanent relationship with him (Brandon). In their minds, Justin has nothing outside of them to look forward to. Neither know anything about Justin beyond his life as a dancer. They are wrong, of course, but it won't stop them from pulling out all the stops to keep Justin where they feel he belongs.

In the meantime, Justin has a bit of an issue all on his own that he will have to address. He is fiercely independent and has been that way for more years than he can remember. It will be interesting to see if he'll allow those around him to help him or if he is still willing to suffer in silence and let Gary and Brandon win at his expense physically or financially. 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2016 3:24 am Title: ~Part I: LIONS AMONG MERE MORTALS~

Damn That Was So Hot, I Need a Cigarette...Wow!!*Wipes Brow and fans self*

It was just so sexy, intimate, breathtaking, beautiful and Very Hottt!! Brian and Justin just have this level of intimacy that makes you embarrassed to see and yet you can't stop watching because with a kiss, caress, look you are just mesmerized by them.

Ok back to the story lol

Leda having cancer and Brian being there to help her through it is just so Brian, I can understand why they are friends and Leda's loyalty, they both understand who they are and just accept that there will be no bullshit whenever they meet.

Melanie and Leda getting back together??

Melanie finally woke up and realized that Lindsay's problems are not hers and she needs to worry about herself and the kids not the Lindsay Show.

Michael and Lindsay need to be dropped off on an island surrounded by sharks and piranhas so that way no one has to hear from them ever again.

Great Update, Can't Wait For More :)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2016 4:15 pm Title: ~Part V: TANGLED WEBS~

Hi Nichelle!! another great update for a fantastic fic.

what a shocker to have Leda there!! Brian is definitely a step ahead of everyone and seems to be looking out for their best interests, including Mel as it appears. I think Brian knows that Leda is a much better option for Mel than Lindsey.

goodness....what's wrong with Lindsey? I'll be honest...I'm, not so sure I'm all that concerned about her. LOL. I'm more concerned about Gus and everyone else's reaction to her being ill. will seh get better? will she use what ever it is to manipulte those around her? Please don't have Brian feel guilty or responsible for her and have her stay at the mansion!! 

OK...so I know you have Craig...but HOLY SHITBALLS!! He is one evil, and I mean super evil asshole! He is one sick bastard! Definitely want to read how you bring him down in this one! Love how you do it in the others. 

Molly rocks! Great pow to teh kisser adn well deserved.

so much happens in every chapter in all your stories. I love it. Love being able to sit down and really get into each chapter. I've said it before, you have a gift.

Excited fo rthe next one!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2016 4:27 pm Title: ~Part V: TANGLED WEBS~

So, Craig intends to "sell" Molly to cover his debts: he's worse than I imagine.

The dance between Brain and Justin might add some heat to the evening.

Leda welcoming Mel: this might add some heat too...

Can't wait for more...