Date: Jun 05, 2016 5:05 am Title: Chapter 11
Jennifer on Brian nakedness: was fun to watch and also fun to read her feelings about that. And Justin's reaction too...
Author's Response:
I thought her rationale was funny too. We know from the series she has an apreciation for fine art, so I could easily see her using that rationale.
Saje
Date: Jun 04, 2016 7:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Actually, some tags let me think that it would be hard to read for some parts, so, I didn't want to start; then, I read "The Review" and some of your comments on other writers' stories, and other writers' comments on this one.
"The Review" got me hook; that was the goal of it I guess. Job well done!!!
You are really talented from my POV.
Thank you for that.
Author's Response:
Some people had a problem with the abuse and others had problems with chapter 17. I just remind myself I write for me and anyone else that tags along with me is a bonus.
The goal of the "The Review" was simply to show first time writers that you can take something fairly small, give it water and fertilizer, and it can grow into something big and beautiful. (plus, it would not leave me alone)
Thank you for the compliment. I think I am a so-so writer, because I have a love-hate relationship with adjectives, and I like my stories to be dialogue driven.
But thank you.
And you are very welcome.
Saje
Date: Jun 04, 2016 6:51 am Title: Chapter 10
I thought the pressure would go down but I was wong.
Author's Response:
Nope, you have a little ways more to go for some relief.
Hang in there, it will get better.
Saje
Date: Jun 04, 2016 6:20 am Title: Chapter 9
You have talent to describe Brian so tortured. It's almost painful.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliment. I don't like to do it, but it needed to be done. If you thought it was painful to read, you may want to stop now. It really does not get better for a while.
Saje
Date: Jun 03, 2016 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love Emmett; fun, strong, queer in all his glory, resourceful and most of loyal.
Author's Response:
Emmett gets a much bigger part with me than he usually gets in most Fics. I really think he was an under utilized character in the series.
Saje
Date: Jun 03, 2016 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
Yay, Justin is finally back in the city.
Author's Response:
Thought you might like that.
Saje
Date: Jun 03, 2016 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
Fortunately, Jennifer is there with the POA.
Author's Response:
Not everyone will be happy about it though.
Saje
Date: Jun 03, 2016 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
What a cliffhanger!!!
Author's Response:
I was wondering when you would start this SNO. Good to see you on board for the ride.
Saje
Date: Jun 03, 2016 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
I haven't commented your story yet and I'm sorry for that (I know, sorry's BS...).
Anyway, I loved this and I don't know if I'm going to be able to go to bed (the night is there in Europe).
I'm so into this.
It's very detailed, well written, captivating, ...
Thank you for this amazing trip.
Author's Response:
No need to apologize. We all have lives outside of fiction, though some of us wish otherwise.
You probably will not be able to go to bed. The angst starts right away, and I have been told it is addictive.
Your compliments are making me blush. ( don't stop)
Thank you for giving me part off your day by reading and reviewing.
You are very welcome.
Saje
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2016 6:16 pm Title: Chapter 22
Today I nearly forgot to get off the bus.... that's how deep I was sucked into this story.
Author's Response:
I will take that as a compliment. Just don't forget to look up while you are walking so you don't bump into people.
Saje
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2016 1:13 pm Title: Chapter 20
I'm not against a threesome fic... And I just really really can't... I just don't get it. Why is any one still reading this story if they are to narrow minded for a loving threesome to take place? We've been through severe violence against babies for forks sakes.
Ok rant over... I love this story... Standing ovation !!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoy my work so far and that you have kept an open mind. I am not against a threesome either, just not for this particular work.
Thank you for the compliment, :P (i will take my curtain call now) LOL
Saje
Date: May 19, 2016 5:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
How much hetero sex will be in this story? Just so I can prepare myself for it haha
Author's Response:
Just a couple of scenes so far, nothing major. You would not deny Cynthia some hot, hard, action too, would you? LOL
Saje
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2016 8:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've been meaning to read this story for awhile now, but now I finally started.
I have to say it scares me... why because it's so good already on the first chapter. This I fear will be a journey needing a few paper towels to cry into. LOVE it !!!
Author's Response:
I am always glad to have another reader on board for the ride.
Thanks for the compliment. And yes, you will probably need tissues, and wine, and chocolate.
Saje
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2016 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 22
Love the simple, no-mess wedding. That's perfect for Brian. Of course, Jennifer's gonna be pissed that she missed it. Now, since you managed to get me hooked, go write me the next chapter already! TAG
Author's Response:
Working on it as we speak, along with MT. Glad you enjoyed yourself.
Saje
Date: May 15, 2016 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 20
Actually, I like the threesome-ness. It feels healthy. Finally. TAG
Author's Response:
Jane makes a great intermediary, doesn't she. Saje
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2016 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 19
Ahhhhhh. I feel much better now! Lol TAG
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it. Saje
Date: May 15, 2016 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 17
So, based on the tags and warnings up front I knew you were gonna go there and I'm still . . . Ewwww! But I trust you, so I'm still reading. TAG
Author's Response:
Yeah, but hey, I thrive on controversy. Saje
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2016 3:26 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh, good. Emmett's in charge! Everything will be fine now! Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
the man of many talents, our Emmett. I had a good time writing that little hotel scene.
Saje
Date: May 15, 2016 6:38 am Title: Chapter 8
So many threads going on here, I'm not sure how to comment. You're doing a great job keeping them all straight. I'm just going to keep reading and hope I can figure it out. TAG
Author's Response:
Nothing to figure, it is all pretty straightforward at the moment. Just keep reading. :)
Saje
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2016 5:52 am Title: Chapter 7
Good, Justin's back. I hope he's pulled his head out of his ass and is ready to do right. TAG
Author's Response:
He is back, not sure about the ass part though. LOL
Saje
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2016 5:25 am Title: Chapter 6
*holding my breath* TAG
Author's Response:
Just don't pass out! Saje
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2016 5:08 am Title: Chapter 5
Did I mention I love the Peter Pan quotes? TAG
I am glad you do. Of all the places this story is posted, you are the first to mention it in a review. [ :>) Saje
Author's Response:
Date: May 15, 2016 4:42 am Title: Chapter 4
Very intrigued. TAG
Author's Response:
So far, so good. Saje
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2016 4:41 am Title: Chapter 3
It seems like Brian has some powerful enemies - lots of them too. Hmmmm. TAG
Author's Response:
You can't be an asshole your whole life and not have them. Good thing he has friends too. Saje
Date: May 15, 2016 3:29 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, poor Brian. TAG
Author's Response:
Yep.
It gets worse. Try not to read while peeking through your fingers in fear.
Saje