Date: May 29, 2016 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Epilogue/Conclusion.
Ha ha ha, Craig is the evil goblin; you are too much fun! I would have loved "seeing" him be the witness of some sexual heat...
Thank you for this fantastic story.
Can't wait for the next one.
Date: May 29, 2016 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Journey's End.
Hoping the FBI won't be at the loft's door in a few hours spoiling the reunification.
Date: May 29, 2016 9:40 pm Title: Chapter 11 - What Happened With Brian.
Yeah!! The red rose is back.
Date: May 29, 2016 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 10 - The Hustling Hunter.
Such a vivid imagination
Date: May 29, 2016 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Farewell to Spitzburghen.
Oh Boy, you really are a master at cliffhangers! Who shot the cans?
Date: May 29, 2016 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Sweet Dreams.
Gus the hero just as Rage!
Date: May 29, 2016 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 7 - The Break Out.
What an evil cliffhanger!!
Date: May 29, 2016 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Stockwell and Rickert.
Ha ha ha!!!Lindsay Lohan; you cracked me up!
Date: May 29, 2016 11:34 am Title: Chapter 5 - The Visit to The Palace.
You really have a gift telling this kind of story!
Thank you.
Date: May 29, 2016 11:14 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Ravens.
Gus is really too much fun and innocent. I like he is spending quality time with Justin.
Date: May 29, 2016 10:37 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Garden of Eternal Summer.
Eww, Ian... What a goofball! He can't even erase Brian from Justin's mind. What kind of warlock is he?
I don't quite like Brian being called Bri; I think it doesn't fit him. He has such a beautiful short first name why make it shorter?
Author's Response:
I named Brian, Bri, in this one because in the real story, the boy who gets carried off was named Kai. (K-eye)
Date: May 29, 2016 7:15 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Journey Begins.
No complaints at all! This is fun and weird but very interesting. Gus is so much ready for anything to get his father back.
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Epilogue/Conclusion.
For All Eternity! The best ending ever. I never did like Craig.
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Journey's End.
Boy did you have me worried. The tension, the suspense. At least Hunter did go with Jason. <sigh> And everyone is back home, so a happy ending. right?
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 7:36 pm Title: Chapter 11 - What Happened With Brian.
Hunter! <slaps forehead with hand> He certainly has changed! Glad Brian is back to hisself, now how do you get them out of there?
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 10 - The Hustling Hunter.
Comet! That means they might meet Santa? Oh joy. Why if Jason studied martial arts didn't he use it? Next chapter Brian? Hopefully!
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Farewell to Spitzburghen.
Oh no. Who's the madman taking pot shots. Jason could have gone to Ian's summerland and stayed with him.
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Sweet Dreams.
Let's hope all is well once Jason goes home.
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 4:10 pm Title: Chapter 7 - The Break Out.
What a cliffy. Now about who told Stockwell that Jason was gay? It was his father wasn't it?
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 3:18 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Stockwell and Rickert.
Ahh. Goldielocks and the three bears. Beauty and the Beast. Love how you manage to introduce other fairy tales into this one. So Stockwell is from the Pitts. and Rickert is still alive. Surprise!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 2:05 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Visit to The Palace.
Wow, that's some chapter. You give us a look into Jason's home life. Can't blame him for leaving.
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 4:16 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Ravens.
Like how you combine things that happened with this tale. Hope Justin gets to Jason in time and saves the town. Love the ravens!
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 2:12 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Garden of Eternal Summer.
Bad Ian. He put them off track. At least the North Wind was looking and found them.
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2016 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Journey Begins.
The Ice King will fix things, right? Only a little boy could see the adventure in this.
Date: May 25, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Mirror.
Oh no. Not Brian!!!