Date: May 25, 2016 3:10 am Title: Chapter 4
I love love love this. *standing ovation*
Did I mention that I REALLY REALLY LOVE this story.
KUDOS!
Date: May 24, 2016 2:19 am Title: Chapter 5
I absolutely love the fact that the girls are not desitute and bickering - and the way the relationships between Brian and Mel, and Ted and Justin are developing are really really nice
now...as much as I want to step right onto the next page and continue - I have to be at work bright and early (5:30am) and so...its off to bed for me - but have no fear - we'll be taking that next step once the drudgery is done tomorrow
Charle
Date: May 24, 2016 1:39 am Title: Chapter 4
I have chills - and tears - the 'depth of love' in this story is something I've not seen in any other story - ever
Brian - open and honest with himself - I fear what's to come but this chapter may be my favorite that I've ever read
on to more - sorry to gush and run
Charle
Date: May 24, 2016 12:32 am Title: Chapter 3
this is so verfy beautifully written - drawing us into the passion - the lust - and then the emotion and the disappointment - it can all be felt and that is great writing!
'watching him fight to keep control and trying not to cry out, watching him lose that fight with astonishment at his own pleasure. Justin loved seeing Aidan come apart and getting carried away by his physical self, leaving all thoughts behind.' - so do I, I can close my eyes and actually picture it - so intense
sorry - would love to stay and chat - but I have a 'hot' date with chapter 4
Charle
Date: May 23, 2016 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
love the long chapters of delight - vulnerable Brian leaves me drooling to begin with - but this - oh my stars -
I have a feeling though that we might be coming up against a bit of turbulence - having someone that has seen him like that right there under his nose in his own home town - can Brian handle it?
can't stay - have to run - there's more and I can't wait to read it
Charle
Date: May 23, 2016 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh - my - God - all this Brian bottoming talk is just setting off more sparks than you could imagine - and the possiblities for this story...delish!
I love this story already - and I've only juist begun.
gotta' run - more to read -
Charle
Date: May 23, 2016 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love your fic. I couldn't tell you how many times I've read and reread them. It's so great that you're posting here. Can't wait to read them all again. Yipee
Kearney

Date: May 23, 2016 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, just so you know, this is without a doubt my absolute favorite fic ever. I am so happy that you are allowing us to have your amazing stories on our site. I already read this one twice before on Mags. It's amazing that I love the story so much, since I normally hate the thought of Brian and Justin being with anyone but each other. I plan on commenting at the end of every chapter, just to warn you ;)
Date: May 23, 2016 3:42 pm Title: Chapter 24
Yet another of my favorites... I spot a trend here... you write, and I love!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for all your wonderful reviews. I wrote this story a while back, and it was my last one in this fandom. I was very very happy with it. I got so much slack, and so many outraged readers for Brian being a happy bottom. at the time. It was really funny. No one in Kinetic dreams has been up in arms about it yet. (Or they just won't review to say negative things?) so it is very different than my last experience posting this! It really makes my day that you liked it so much. I have a partially written new fic. Who knows, all this positivity might give me the enthusiasm to finish it?
Date: May 23, 2016 3:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am so happy to see you here! Spin and Fall is one of my all time favs along with In His Kiss and Together. Now I need to go read some of your other stories. :)
Date: May 23, 2016 3:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Welcome to Kinnetik Dreams. I love all of your stories and can't wait to read them again. So happy that you decided to join us.
~Lorie