Date: May 28, 2016 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
Poor Justin. It's so sad. I hope he can overcome this.
Date: May 28, 2016 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
I read the first6 chapters in one go.
And now, I guess, you want a review.
I can't find words enough to describe these first chapters.
Wonderful, gorgeous, fast paced. From the first words in the first chapter you pulled me into this marvellous story.
I love Justin as a power top and I also love Brian as a bottom. The chemistry between them is beautifully depicted. The commeraderie between them, the easy banter and the blatant sexuality is what keeps my interrest in this story going.
I simply adore Ted and Blake and their easy going way towards Justin. So great to see Ted this happy.
Michael though I expect will be causing a bit of a stir when he finds out about the 'relationship' already exisiting between Brian and Justin.
Looking forward to reading the next chapters of this amazing story.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: May 28, 2016 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 15
Hopefully the psychiatrist can help Justin. I'm supposed to be sleeping but I can't stop reading. I'm off to the next chapter.
Date: May 28, 2016 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 14
Poor Justin. That must have been such a shock. I don't really know how I feel about Justin stoping tricking. For me it would have been okay if he just tricked like Brian. No emotional attachments.
Date: May 28, 2016 8:19 am Title: Chapter 13
He probably used the wrong words when talking to Justin but I can totally understand Brian.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2016 1:30 am Title: Chapter 1
1. I love a story that references the Pacific Northwest - my home!
2. I love Botton!Brian - always have. Shamelessly.
3. How do you suck in your readers so quickly in the first chapter! It's phenomenal! Someday you have to tell me your secret.
4. Love a confident, in-control Justin!
Just so much to love here and it's only the first chapter! TAG
Date: May 27, 2016 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 12
Poor Justin. I don't even want to imagine what it felt like to see Brian with Kyle.
Date: May 27, 2016 8:20 pm Title: Chapter 20
*cries* I'm sooo gonna miss Justin's tricks.
Date: May 27, 2016 5:06 am Title: Chapter 15
but really Justin has GREAT tastes!!
Date: May 27, 2016 3:46 am Title: Chapter 14
still think Brian is being a little unfair with the whole Justin can't fuck anyone but him...lol and a jealous lesbian..
I mean I get why Justin is not doing it...but I feel bad fro him cuz in a way it will be a constant reminder that he's not tricking cuz he can't bottom...I feel like that would add to the triggers. mhm
Date: May 26, 2016 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 24
thank you hardly seems like a big enough word - loved this story so very much
Charle
Author's Response: Thank YOU for all your wonderful reviews. I wrote this story a while back, and it was my last one in this fandom. I was very very happy with it. I got so much slack, and so many outraged readers for Brian being a happy bottom. at the time. It was really funny. No one in Kinetic dreams has been up in arms about it yet. (Or they just won't review to say negative things?) so it is very different than my last experience posting this! It really makes my day that you liked it so much. I have a partially written new fic. Who knows, all this positivity might give me the enthusiasm to finish it?
Date: May 26, 2016 9:25 pm Title: Chapter 11
Lindsay is behaving like a bitch. I hope she gets her act together.
Date: May 26, 2016 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
damn JT's tricks are hot hot hot
Date: May 26, 2016 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
Stuart sounds sooo funny. And the janitors closet? Hot, hot, hot.
Date: May 26, 2016 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love that they have to sneak around everyone. That should prove very interesting.
Date: May 26, 2016 6:33 am Title: Chapter 11
ok but holy shit Theo is flipping hott!
loving this more and more!
Date: May 26, 2016 3:57 am Title: Chapter 18
how amazing to picture this scene - so freaking amazing!
the passion - lust - desire - love
fantastic!
Charle
Date: May 26, 2016 3:42 am Title: Chapter 17
so very glad that Brian knows the whole story now - and even more that he is finally going to be able to show Justin how he feels in the way he knows best - I am tingling with excitement just thinking about how overwhelming its going to be
Date: May 26, 2016 12:51 am Title: Chapter 13
oh Brain...you're such an ass - and you says things all wrong when backed into a corner...but I kinda' get what you are saying...which just shows how much you love him -you want to be special and that is so new to you!
if only Justin could find a way to let Brian know what's going on without talking about it himself...
Date: May 25, 2016 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 11
thanks for the dreamy pictures - delightful!
and the story is good, too! lol
I am so far behind on my other reading - just can't stop reading this one!
Charle
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2016 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 24
I will admit that this is the third time I have read this and I still stayed up into the wee hours to finish. You are a wonderful writer and I am so very grateful to have you posting with us. This is a fantastic story! Now I am off to read another of yours.
Saje
Author's Response: Thank YOU for all your wonderful reviews. I wrote this story a while back, and it was my last one in this fandom. I was very very happy with it. I got so much slack, and so many outraged readers for Brian being a happy bottom. at the time. It was really funny. No one in Kinetic dreams has been up in arms about it yet. (Or they just won't review to say negative things?) so it is very different than my last experience posting this! It really makes my day that you liked it so much. I have a partially written new fic. Who knows, all this positivity might give me the enthusiasm to finish it?
Date: May 25, 2016 9:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
whew! that went so much better than I anticipated...I love everything about this chapter, especially Brian's declaration...amazing
now I can only hope that sometime soon, knowing that Brian is giving more trust than he has in his entire life - as a gift - freely and without hesitation - that Justin returns the gesture and tells Brian his secrets
now...I can't wait to see how they keep this smoldering love affair under wraps...
have I told you...I love this story! lol
Charle
Date: May 25, 2016 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh my - Justin, please don't break Brian's heart - its so fragile - and it was so very hard for him to open it up to you...
I'm almost afraid to click next...
Charle
Date: May 25, 2016 4:29 am Title: Chapter 5
DAMN. i loved the brian and mel heart to heart and i also love justin's and ted's. loving this!!