Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2025 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 3- Discussion

Thank you.  i fixed the errors.  I'm glad that are reading again.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2025 7:32 am Title: Chapter 3- Discussion

Well, at least they talked and got out some of their frustrations going in their life. Hopefully, this will lead to more talks. Sex should help too ;)

I realized today I haven't read part 1 or 2 completely. So I'm going to have to go back and start reading them. That's good, since I haven't been in a reading mood since that dreadful Covid.

You might want to go through the middle area of this chapter. There are 3 missing quotation marks.

Thanks for the new story. I'm happy when someone still has the energy to do this.

Hugs ~Cathy

 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2025 2:56 am Title: Chapter 1- Restlessness

Very good start to this story. You used some really nice adjectives, which enhanced the reading.

Justin seems to be missing Gus an awful lot, whereas Brian, nothing was pointed out about hiim. I saw the lack of characters, so it looks like Ted and Cynthia will have to figure Brian out. However, Cynthia has already been tipped off.

Not sure what our boys need, but they need to start talking. Oh, I know...

Dun-dun-dun-dun... Is it Gay Death Bed? They say that happens more than a person realizes. :D

Thanks for the new story.

Hugs ~Cathy

P.S. ~ I see you got your banner up. Sunday night I emailed Tag letting her know about the problem.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the comments.  I've been writing for many years and always strive to improve.  I'm pleased to see you found the story worth reading.  Gay Death Bed-  good term, but I think it could be found in any long term relationship.  Brian was never interested in a relationship so even though they've been together for a long time, it is still something he doesn't know what to do with.  thanks again for reading and commenting.  It means a lot.