[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2025 7:31 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Connection
So, God writes the script, sweetie, you just say/write the lines. :) I certainly don't mind if the story gets longer ;)
He was just so done with Michael Novotny. (Hehe ~ are we surprised?)
Justin should go to Babylon WITHOUT a date, dance with Brian and see how his watch acts then.
When Justin was in Michael's vacinity - was Brian always there?
My heart just about did a nosedive when Justin accepted the date with the guy who was an artist, I thought - she's not really going to do that to us, right? Both Michael and Ethan? *gulp*
When Brian came in the diner alone, I was wondering if Brian would have some boards and notes for a campaign, and voilà! Brian and Justin would have a connection. (Anything to get him out of working at the diner.)
Hugs ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2025 5:04 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Chemistry
When Justin pointed out about Daph being a hetero girl going into a gay club to support her friend, and thus wanting to look good - how does he know the situation of a hetero guy couldn't be there supporting his gay friend? Chances are slim, but never say never. ;)
When everyone was walking to Babylon and Justin and Daphne were being ignored, it would have almost been funny if Justin and Daphne had stopped following, so when the group got to Babylon, Mikey's date was gone. THAT would have given Michael a clue. But THEN, the dance with Brian wouldn't have happened. (I really do hope we get to hear Brian's thoughts on that dance with Justin.)
The way they all got in Babylon and drinks were ushered immediately, I toyed with the idea that maybe Brian owned the club. (Free membership for the youngens. :)
If you were going for a vomit-inducing moment between Michael and Justin, after Justin danced with Brian, you passed with flying colors. I'm still queasy. Justin needs to tell Michael it's just not working. Oh, wait! I know, Daphne could make a trip to Red Cape... Besides, what are best friends for?
As far as the way the app went off, Justin had all those feelings... only it was Brian's closeness, not Michael's. I'm disappointed Justin didn't entertain that. I still think he should contact the company, and this time he could say it wasn't Michael he was with. Then again, I don't know if that's a viable option.
Thank you so much for the new chapter.
<3 Cathy
BTW, I'm not getting mail notifications. I added safe senders to Admin@kinnetikdreams and kinnetikdreams.com ... I've even taken them off, and re-added them, but still nothing.
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2025 10:55 am Title: Chapter 3 - Possiblities
First off... I think Justin should pay a visit to SoulMates, asking why he feels so uneasy thinking about a date with Michael? Should it really be hard work? There was so much drama. It made him tired just thinking about it.
Here I thought Mr. Kinney would have charmed the socks off Sunshine, but instead, he has literally scared Justin away.
I think for Justin's sake, I think he should text Michael and get out of the "date." Maybe Daphne has a bad stomachache, and he needs to take care of her, since she's vomiting and has a temp. (Of course, Justin doesn't want to spread any germs around.)
Justin should also try and look for another cafe/restaurant to work at. It would be hard to brush Michgael off, but Debbie? That'll be suicide! He just needs to get out of the situation he's in. Maybe Daphne has a male friend that would do them a favor, and show up at Babylon with him. THAT should get the message across.
Well, I can't wait for the second boring date at Buzzy's. Poor Justin.
Hugs ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2025 8:59 am Title: Chapter 2 - First Date
I was so excited to see this update. I had to reread chapter 1, just to get the story fresh in my mind. (Although, that wasn't a hardship.)
I had to laugh when Justin was in the coffee shop and thought: the thirteen year age difference was a bit much. Will he have that same thought when he meets Brian? :D
I could see Debbie being thrilled about Michael and Justin dating. However, how she can think a trip to Buzzy's was 'a date'? SMH... B.O.R.I.N.G.
It will be interesting to find out how you will get Justin away from Michael, without everyone getting upset, and in to Brian's arms.
I hope your writer's block starts easing up. That is one of the worst things ever when you have a story out there.
Hugs ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2024 8:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Match
I was reading a novel and ran across the word "Soulmate" which made me think of your story, so I came back in and reread it. Now I'm double anxious for an update. How is Justin going to get out of this meeting, or are you going to be a meanie, and have him go?
<3 ~Cathy
Author's Response:
Hi, Cathy. Sorry for the delay in getting you the next chapter. I promise that I'll get Brian into this story soon... Just hold in there. TAG
Date: Mar 10, 2024 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Match
Love this story idea. Really exciting to read it. ??
I've missed you. Glad your writing again
Author's Response:
Right? I love the story idea too. Just hoping I can find the time to get it written for you before we all go grey. I"m working on it, though. TAG
Date: Mar 10, 2024 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Match
Love this story idea. Really exciting to read it. ??
I've missed you. Glad your writing again
Date: Jan 29, 2024 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1 - Match
I
Love
you!
And missed you. I'll patiently wait for the last chapter. ??
Author's Response:
Awww! Thank you. I'm so happy to be back. TAG
Date: Jan 28, 2024 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Match
As soon as I read: an implanted biometric chip just behind his left ear ... All I could think was: is that going to get itchy?
Anyway... maybe on Wednesday, Justin has something at school that he just CAN'T get out of... big project, or class ran late. SOMETHING...
OH!!! Maybe Michael is nervous, so he invites Brian to come along, to help him out! What are best friends for??
So happy to see a new story from you,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Hi, Cathy! You just know that chip is gonna cause problems, right? *wink* TAG