Date: Apr 09, 2022 3:08 am Title: Tit for Tat
Wel with Michael, I would record his voice, then lock him in a sealed room for 24 hours and see if he can remain sane after hearing that constant whine for JUST 24 hours! Defo need a straight jacket on standby.
Deb
Author's Response:
Ha! I was just thinking a ball gag. You're so much more creative! LOL
Roni
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2022 1:37 pm Title: Tit for Tat
This is really good. A shot across Deb's bow!!
Thanks
Deb L.
Author's Response:
They all need a good shot across their bow, once in a while, but nobody more than Deb and Michael. (Personally, I'd have put crazy glue in her lipstick loooong before this point.)
Thanks, Deb.
Roni
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2022 11:42 am Title: Tit for Tat
WAY TO GO, SUNSHINE
Author's Response:
Super Nova Sunshine! My favorite Sunshine!
Roni
Date: Mar 31, 2022 12:04 am Title: Tit for Tat
Oh wow. Yeah it works like this. But I would Love to have this continue. This is just awsome. Finally Deb gets put in her place.
Author's Response:
I love a good tit for tat encounter with Deb. Just can't handle that level of meddling and, apparently, neither can Justin in this case. Ha! (I had nothing to do with it. I swear - it was all HIM!)
Thanks for the comment.
Roni
Date: Mar 30, 2022 3:27 pm Title: Tit for Tat
Wow Brian always knew there was a firecracker laying dormant now Deb gets to see it!
Author's Response:
I like to add a little gasoline once in a while. LOL. I think about the only thing that would bring out Super Nova Sunshine is someone dissing Brian or someone mistreating him. Or Gus. He's pretty laid back much of the time, but we see a few sparks now and then, and given the right accelerant...?
Thanks for he comment.
Roni
Date: Mar 29, 2022 7:43 am Title: Tit for Tat
We need part 2 and part 3 and a lot more!!! and anti-michael too!!!! i think i'm in love. it's been a while since i read something that got me going like that!!! (i even searched my mail to find my password so i could login and comment!!!)
xoxo lori
Author's Response:
The one I'm working on is definitely anti-Michael, but it's a little harsher and a lot more angsty than this little bit. And anyone who knows me knows I just HATE to write angst... HAHA... Okay, so I love it.
And thank you for being so persistent!
Roni
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2022 10:23 am Title: Tit for Tat
(I just lost my good review!) Dang it. I accidentally bumped my mouse, it fell off the desk... and there the screen went! Shoot! But anyway...
YOU ARE BACK! So happy to see you HERE - instead of just LJ!
I actually read the 'Story Notes' which I must admit, I don't always. And after a moments hesitation, I just knew it would be about Lt. Novotny.
This was awesome. I've always believed, "Respect is Earned"... and just because Debbie was the older one, she felt she could play boss to EVERYONE. And sticking that red nail in their faces, well, Good for Sunshine! If anyone could best Debbie, it's Justin. And their was no holdng back. Jen would be proud.
(Not sure if this would work) but I would have loved to see at the end: Two Weeks Later - and Brian and Justin having everyone over to the loft. Now, whether they do tell family secrets, or not, could be left up to the readers, but that old biddy would be sweating like a pig. Just the idea it could happen would be harder on Debbie than anything. And she deserves to not have Brian and Justin in her life after that. I get so tired of "Well, we're family. We have a right to know." What comes around goes around, lady.
I loved this little story. It riled me up. I need some of that sometimes. (I know my lost review was better! LOL)
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
"Respect is Earned"... THIS! Exactly...
Deb is a busybody. I know many find that endearing, but I'm not one of them. No one has the right to full disclosure that is not freely given. Unless they have a freaking subpoena! Mercy! LOL
And your ending is kinda perfect. Not sure I'm going to add on to this every, but that would be exactly the kind of thing to wind up with. Let 'em sweat! :)
And, Cathy, thank you SO much for your help on LJ finding all of those stories. I've lost so many, I'm certain to need more help soon. I found this little piece in my files when I was moving them to the new laptop and decided to just put it out there since it had an "okay enough" feel to it. But thank you, again.
Roni
Date: Mar 28, 2022 9:11 am Title: Tit for Tat
Let's hear it for the boy! Yes!
About time someone stood up to her.
More more more!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
That was the perfect song for Justin, wasn't it? LOL
If only Brian tried to bite Deb's finger off to the second knuckle a time or two... But...
Thanks for the comment.
Roni
Date: Mar 28, 2022 6:09 am Title: Tit for Tat
Wow, Wow! Justin you go boy.
Author's Response:
:)
Love me some Super Nova Sunshine.
Roni
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2022 2:58 am Title: Tit for Tat
Please do just a little more. I love it so much when Debbie gets what she deserves by always wanting to interfere in other people's lives thinking she has every right. What a great moment when Justin shows his fangs! Thank you !!
Author's Response:
I love Deb. I really do. But she can piss me off so much. Almost as much as Michael. (Wonder where he got it, eh?)
And, yeah, I'm a strong!Justin writer for the most part. I never, ever saw him as a wimp. Vulnerable? Yeah. But no shrinking violet. (Fangs! I like that.)
Thanks for the comment.
Roni
Date: Mar 27, 2022 10:14 pm Title: Tit for Tat
WOW WOW WOW This is awesome! Debbie could be such a hypocrite at times and she treated Brian like crap often. He was her patsy. I sure hope you feel up to writing soon and I hope you continue this one shot
Author's Response:
Couldn't she, though? Some kind of "okay for me, but not for thee" mindset she had going on. Lord. This snippet will probably never have any more added to it, but I've got a longer one-shot almost ready. Just trying to wind it up and do some editing. I'm not writing much anymore, but I have a LOT of pieces and parts hanging around and a few that need finished here, so...
Thanks for the comment.
Roni
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2022 10:14 pm Title: Tit for Tat
A well deserved telling off. I'd actually like to see this continue.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I love those telling offs, too. But, alas, this is probably it for this particular snippet. But? Never say never.
Roni
Date: Mar 27, 2022 8:06 pm Title: Tit for Tat
WAIT! A new story from NoChaser! No way! Can't wait to read! TAG
Author's Response:
Girlfriend! LOLOLOL
Yeah, it's been a while. I'm working on one now (this one was already in my files). Just trying to find a way to wind the new one up that keeps it consistent and somewhat in character. Kinda angsty, though. SHOCK! (and you know I'm grinning when I say that. Ha!)
Roni
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2022 7:47 pm Title: Tit for Tat
Please continue this Deb got away with way too much because we felt she was entitled to do whatever she wanted, and she was rarely called out for what a hypocrite she could be when it came to her own personal affairs.
I love when Just I stands up for Brian he was abused so appalling by Deb, Michael, Lindsay and Mel, until they needed something usually monetary then he was Wonderful, Terrific in their eyes.
Justin going toe to toe with Deb, Michael, Lindsay and Mel should be done more often, he knows secrets about them that would turn their hair white.
And what he doesn't know I am sure others would love to tell with great relish.
Author's Response:
I agree Deb, and the others, got away with waaaayyyy too much, even if we go strictly by canon! Maybe my family was just different, but no one would have been as intrusive as Deb and the nosy crew! I can't imagine that level of interference.
Thanks for the comment.
Roni
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2022 4:56 pm Title: Tit for Tat
Please please please write more! I love a good Deb smack down. I’ve always thought she got away with too much interference in everyone’s lives when she wouldn’t want the same.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the comment! I love a good Deb smack down, too. LOL.
Roni