Date: Dec 23, 2021 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I always hated that Brian kicked Justin out after the cancer, but I was so happy that Justin didn't just accept it. And I think Brian definitely appreciated that about him.
Author's Response:
Bull's eye. Right on. Keep writing reviews.
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2021 9:17 am Title: Chapter 1
This made me so happy. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your positive review of my story. Speaking for myself, but probably representing many writers...reviews and other feedback are what keep me writing. Bringing a little joy, or pleasure, into someone else's life is a very positive personal experience. Keep writing reviews!
Date: Dec 07, 2021 9:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thanks again for another great little story! You let them be so good together. But hey, that was S4? ;-) Is it a new one? "I let him back in because he cared so much" - Yeah, sure :-) I think Brian didn't stood a chance, but you're also right, Brian also had to give in. Oh, I love how you picture Justin here. I think that's what I generally love about him. He can be so mature but then there is the other side, the more childish, but lovable, positive, joyfull one, but nevertheless caring. I think that's what Brian needs, one of the reasons they are so good together. "Can I see it? Can I feel it? Can I suck on it, [...] It's a shame you couldn't bring home the one they removed" So great, you put a big smile on my face, despite the terrible situation Brian is in. And I love the thing with the changed will - shows again how much Brian loves Justin. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Yes, Season 4,...and, Yes, it's a newly-written story...just to prove to myself that I can still do it. I'll probably continue to write occasionally. It would help if I could rewatch the shows again. In response to another of your comments... Yes, I love writing B&J together; Brian is narrator, with his ascerbic witty comments, and Justin is outright funny, especially with his teasing. I try to write them with totally different speaking styles so the reader can instantly tell who"s speaking. Alone, Brian can sound cynical... but with Justin, the conversation takes on a lighter tone. I love this stuff!
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2021 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Paul,
This is great. There aren't many stories about their interaction right after the surgery. This sounds very much like them. Loving the age comment.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Thanks,Lorie...it was your gentle nudge that got me writing again. So this story is dedicated to you.