Date: Jun 09, 2016 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 12
I love this story of yours.
I read the whole series in 1 shot so I didn't take time to comment between the chapters.
I hope the 13th will arrive soon and that Michael won't invade the loft.
Vic is a really nice and reliable guide for Brian.
Author's Response:
Wow- that is pretty amazing. It took over a year to write and you read it quickly. glad that you enjoyed it. I must say it is one of my favorites. I like using Vic to give Brian some insight
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2016 5:40 am Title: Chapter 12
Nice to see Vic again. Just hope that Brian gets what he's trying to tell him.
Author's Response:
I love having Vic show up to give Brian a piece of his mind. I think Vic is one of hte few people who could get through to him
Date: Jun 07, 2016 9:18 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hi, I love the update and it seems like Brian and Justin are making progress. I love Gus with his daddy and Justin. Lindsay needs to stay away. Gus misses his Justin and that so sweet. He is worried about his daddy too. I hope Brian will open up to Justin some more. Hope Michael doesn't cause Trouble while Justin is away. I'm glad Brian is supporting Justin in his career. Please post more soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the continual comments. They mean a lot. I love Gus and Brian together and love to see them in the future. I think Brian makes a great father. Justin has a special place for Gus too and that shows in my work as well.
Date: Jun 05, 2016 6:20 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hi,
I have to say I'm so in love with this chapter. I'm so proud of Brian for telling Justin he was at the hospital. I'm hoping Justin will think about how the bashing really affected Brian. I'm glad that Debbie came to see him too. I know she really loves Brian and worries about him. She wants him to be happy where Michael doesn't. Lindsay and Michael need to stay away. I hope nothing happens while Justin is away. Please post more soon.
Author's Response:
This is one area that I really think Cowlip missed the boat- it's obvious that Brian was very affected by the bashing but he doesn't ever want to talk about it. I decided that they really should discuss it. Debbie will always be the mom- even if she pushes him when she shouldn't
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2016 3:02 am Title: Chapter 11
I like Justin's thought process. Very disappointed with Debbie demanding answers. It seems everyone is trying to push Justin into going back to NY.
Author's Response:
But will Justin stay in Pittsburgh or in New York
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2016 3:17 pm Title: Chapter 10
Brian's in rare form. At least they are getting along and Brian isn't pushing him away.
Author's Response:
Brian isn't pushing him away = maybe he just isn't quite ready to have that conversation
Date: Jun 02, 2016 9:28 am Title: Chapter 10
Hi, I love the update. I see Brian and Justin took a step back communication. Justin where is your Manual to Brian? He needs you more than anything.
Author's Response:
Justin knows Brian so well and he really wants to confront him but wants to be careful too.
Date: May 31, 2016 8:34 am Title: Chapter 9
Hmm, This is an interesting update. Micael needs to leave Brian alone. Justin, you still have your work cut out for you. Gus needs to come see his daddy, and help get back with Justin. Hopefully, Justin going to New York to do his show won't cause a setback. Brian needs a friend who understands how much he loves Justin. I would for him to talk to Cynthia, Daphne or Ted about how much he loves Justin. I think Daphne would be the one to see what's really going on with Brian and why he uses this type of Pain Management. I don't think Brian can handle his emotions so he hides.
Author's Response:
Justin has a lot to work on but so does Brian- he really needs to admit what Justin means to him. Michael is annoying and doesn't like Justin- jsut as Lindsay wants Jsutin back in New York - Michael wants him gone as well
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2016 4:09 am Title: Chapter 9
Love that Bri told Mikey he wants Justin to stay and Justin asked him to tell him that. I think Brian's getting the picture. Soon he'll be getting a shower.
Author's Response:
Brian is finally admitting that Justin means something to him and wants him around- glad Justin called him on it and he admitted to wanting him there.
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2016 3:26 am Title: Chapter 8
That wasn't nice, leaving Brian with Mikey. What's with Lindsay wanting to go to Justin's show? They started to talk, will they finish it? Loving this.
Author's Response:
I think Lindsay is secretly hoping to convince Justin that New York is where he needs to be and talking to people at his show might influence other parties that be to work on Justin in that manner. I think htere is also some jealousy that Justin is doing what she always wanted to do but lacked the talent. Justin knows that Brian and Mikey are friends and that there friendship goes way back. He doesn't trust or like Mikey but he knows he would not be right in making Brian choose at this point in time.
Date: May 29, 2016 8:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love the update but Lindsay, Mel, and Michael need to go somewhere. I'm a little surprised Justin didn't expect Brian to show since he knows Brian so well. I feel really bad for Brian because he is really trying to grow up and be a better person, He realizes Justin makes him a better person. Justin really cracks through Brians walls. Justin shouldn't have left when Brian was about to open up to him. Michael should be banned from the Hospital, Gus needs to com see his daddy and Justin. Daphne, please help Justin and Brian. Please more soon!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm not a fan of the lesbians or Michael and my work reflects this. Justin was pushed off a Cliff ( see Falling off The Cliff- on this site for some back story). Up until he was called by the hospital, he hadn't seen Brian for months. He's till a little unsure about their relationship and while he did write the Brian Kinney operating manual, there are a few pages he needs to reread.
Date: May 28, 2016 1:03 am Title: Chapter 7
Aww, I feel for Briand Justin, Brian is hiding a lot of pain. Brian and Justin have never all talked about the Bashing. Brian isn't going t9o make this easy onJustin at all. Justin is going to have to find a way to get Brian to deal with his feelings. Daphne may need to talk to Brian. I think she would be able to see how scared Brian is to love Justin. Brian needs Justin. Please Post More Soon!!
Author's Response:
This story is definitely a journey in discovery and truth. Thank you for the thoughtful comments.
Date: May 28, 2016 12:33 am Title: Chapter 6
I love this chapter too. Michael needs to go somewhere and sit down. Justin put Michael in his place. Daphne, I love you for trying to protect Justin and make him think what's going on with Brian. Daphne, indirectly told Justin how much Brian still loves him, and there is so much more going on with him that meets the eye. Why hasn't Justin gone to see Gus?
Author's Response:
Michelle:
Michael's jealousy of Justin're realtionship really colors his interactions with Brian. He doesn't want Brian to grown up and will do anything to prevent that. I love Daphne and I think she has always been a fan of Brian and Justin's relationship. Justin doesn't want to confuse Gus as to why Brian isn't with him, but soon he will go see him.
Author's Response:
Michelle:
Michael's jealousy of Justin're realtionship really colors his interactions with Brian. He doesn't want Brian to grown up and will do anything to prevent that. I love Daphne and I think she has always been a fan of Brian and Justin's relationship. Justin doesn't want to confuse Gus as to why Brian isn't with him, but soon he will go see him.
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2016 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 7
At least Justin's laid it all out. How is he going to get ready for his show?
Author's Response:
I love that Justin decided this is the perfect time to tell off Brian- he has a captive audience- Brian can't do anywhere.
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2016 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
Daphne is a better friend to Justin than Mikey is to Brian. Hope the talk goes the way Justin wants it to.
Author's Response:
Thank you for being such a loyal reviewer. Mikey is very self centered- everything revolves around him Brian and he can't see beyond what he envisions in his mind as the "Brian- stud of Liberty avenue.". Daphne cares for Justin and wants what is best for him and she is fearful of seeing him hurt.
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2016 4:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
It's good that Brian is not insisting that Justin leave. And that he tried to throw Mike out of his room. lol. Loved that.
Author's Response:
Not a Michael fan- At least Brian is sticking up and saying Justin should stay and Michael should leave
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2016 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
He still hasn't told Brian how he ended up in the hospital? Brian's being a shit. Thank goodness Justin isn't backing away.
Date: May 24, 2016 3:39 am Title: Chapter 5
Hmm this was an interesting chapter. Brian is in a lot of pain. He needs Justin to heal what broke in Brian even if he doesn't want to admit it. I'm wondering what Justin is goint to do get Brian to open back up again? Please post more soon!!
Author's Response:
Brian doesn't like to talk about his feelings or admit he's weak. However, Justin has a captive audience and Brian can't get up and walk away. This should prove interesting
Date: May 23, 2016 6:05 am Title: Chapter 4
Yay I'm so glad Brian is awke. I hope he will let Justin help him. It seems like Justin has his work out fror him to get Brian to trust him again.
Author's Response:
Brian still has a long way to go.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2016 4:51 am Title: Chapter 3
I hope Brian heard everything that Justin said to him.
Author's Response:
I understand that people in coma often do hear when folks are in coma
Date: May 18, 2016 3:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
OK...first off, rteally glad there's a sequal to the last one. That ending killed me! :)
secondly...OMG!! You sure love angst and drama don't you?! Man alive! You're killing mere here! I had a feeling of course that something would be happening with Brian.
Hoping you update soon and very regularly! RL is stressing me out as it is...please don't do it in my fanfic life! (kidding)
Thanks for posting! Thank you for continuing!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
This is an angsty story- but I tend to write angst- I'm trying to update every day- hopefully can keep that momentum alive
Date: May 18, 2016 6:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Brian is waking up go Justin
Author's Response:
Justin wants to be there for him, but waking up is only a piece of the problem
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2016 5:37 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm surprised that we haven't seen Mikey and Deb running around crying. Love the part where Brian talks with Vic. Can't wait for the next installment. I'm dying, pardon the pun, to know why the machines are beeping.
Author's Response:
I like the part Vic plays in this story. Mikey and Deb will be making an appearance.
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2016 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
I read this chapter right after I read 'Falling.' What was going through Brian's mind?! I can understand celebrating but JEEZE LOUISE!!! And poor Justin! The vultures will certainly start circling. Lindsay with her histrionics and Michael with his accusations...Justin jist doesn't need that brand of insanity...smh Please post again soon!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I think the family as vultures and LInsay and Michael- histrionics are bound to occur. Hope to post frequently
Date: May 17, 2016 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is definitely an emotional beginning. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy the story- there is angst