[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2021 7:30 pm Title: Chapter 20: An Obsessive Evil
Old Kippy boy was true about one thing, you are forever in their pockets and they can demand money at any time. If they threatened Deb, Michael would have to get the money. Mikey is so inept, I’m not sure how he could think this through anyway!
I love this plot development.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2021 3:33 am Title: Chapter 19: Morning Bliss
Wonderful! Justin had surveillance on the little worm. Or were his phones tapped? Anyway, your time is about up, Mikey. Looking forward to how this plays out.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Justin is extremely resourceful and not like the Justin we normally see - obviously. LOL. Mikey doesn't have a clue in many ways, but I'm sure his wakeup call is coming.
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[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2021 3:32 am Title: Chapter 18: A Cunning Plot and an Unquenchable Desire
Alright… I really hope there’s a few chapters of plot pretty soon. These men can only have so much sex, right? And is Brian going to keep playing bottom boy? He is gonna be so sore he can’t walk if they don’t trade off. And I would think Brian would demand he get a chance to top Justin.
Michael is crazy. How can he think he will get away with this? How much will Debbie get out of him?
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Yes, there is definitely a lot of sex in this story, but again, I think expected when Brian has met someone equal to himself in all ways, perhaps even more arrogant. LOL.
Regarding Brian topping, Justin hasn't held anything back about that being something he does not do. Things would have to develop more in order for Justin to change that rule that I think is more strict than Brian's ever has been. However, we do have more plot on the way, of course, largely with Michael's insane nonsense, but that won't be the only bit of drama either. Of course, that's not to say there won't be more sex. There will. LOL.
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[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2021 3:52 pm Title: Chapter 17: A Conspiring Evil as Desire Soars
Lots of HOT sex in this story… LOL…
But now we got some plot at the end. Michael’s crazy if he thinks anybody will take that job when they find out just who the guy is. You don’t mess with billionaires/multi-millionaires (whatever Justin is) and expect to live.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
The steam is deliberately amped up in this story since it's such a different take and a display of what would happen if Brian encountered someone equally dominant as himself. Definitely was meant to be a story with a lot of sex, but I think there is plot as well, perhaps more as the story moves forward.
Thanks for commenting.
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[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2021 11:20 am Title: Chapter 16: The True Master of the Hunt
Okay, I'm not coherent. I gotta hurry up and get my jaw off the floor. I don't have much in the way of anything intelligent to say so let me just say that was HOT, HOT, HOT, HOT!!!
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2021 11:19 am Title: Chapter 15: Recapturing the Mood
Lots more hotness - but I enjoyed Ted’s attempt to make Michael understand. Michael has gone around the bend and entered Crazy Land. Then Michael said that the blond got to Ted too… man, where’s the crew with the straitjackets?
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Michael is beyond delusional here, it's borderline creeper. Hopefully Brian is taking all of Justin's warnings to heart.
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[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2021 11:18 am Title: Chapter 14: Facing an Enemy
Wow, wow! That was explosive! I really hope Brian figures out that the ONLY reason Michael wants him isn’t because he’s ‘in love’ with him, but the mega dollars that go along with it.
I mean - how pathetic. A man that age begging to be loved, and in front of witnesses, one which is supposed to be a friend.
I’m surprised Justin foot didn’t come out so Michael tripped on his way into the elevator. He wouldn’t necessarily be tripping him down the stairs, and maybe the knot on his head would pound some sense into it.
Will we actually be seeing much of Emmett and Ted in this story?
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Michael is about the most pathetic he could possibly be in this story. I remember having fun writing him like that, and actually hearing the whine in his voice as I did it. LOL.
This is a different Justin in this 'verse. He has no patience for someone like Michael, and I wouldn't keep pushing him if I was Michael. But, the little worm isn't that smart, or so it seems...
I can't remember how much we see of Emmett and Ted, perhaps some, perhaps more of Ted since he does work closely with Brian.
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2021 6:05 am Title: Chapter 13: It Begins With A Kiss
Well, the whole dominant factor was entertaining... but the REAL fun is whining out in reception. God, I'm so excited to see how that goes down! I have a feeling that Mikey will try to talk back to Brian, and supernova Justin is going to put the little man in his place! EXCITING!
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2021 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 12: An Agreement Reached
I have no good words to say how powerful and amazing this story is, and to say I love it is an understatement. Although I hope there is some relief from all this sexual tension and some actual story pretty soon. I don't believe there was PWP tag. LOL…
I was hoping for a heated, heated kiss about the time widdle Mikey burst in unannounced. Because I know THIS Justin will chew him up and spit him out, without a second thought.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Thank you, Cathy. I do hope you continue to enjoy this story. This take is so different for me, as you know, and I thoroughly enjoyed telling their story here. No, I don't consider it PWP but at times I can see where it might seem so. LOL.
Mikey is probably used to Brian going easy on him because of their long-standing friendship; however, Justin won't be so kindhearted. Not at all!
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2021 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 11: Taking Care of Business
OK, I don't know about others, but I am literally drooling here! LOL! I almost need a reading break again!
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Haha. The sexual tension is high, perhaps that's what happens when you have two ultimate tops so intensely into each other. :)
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2021 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 10: The Brink of Insanity
Someone has just gone over the bend into a crazy, mad psycho world. If I was Brian, I’d get a restraining order, because I have a feeling he’s going to need it. Mikey will probably be showing up at Kinnetik, or waiting when he gets out of Kinnetik, the gym, Babylon… yikes! I’m scaring myself!
If I was Brian, I’d go take a scalding shower!
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2021 5:56 am Title: Chapter 9: Closing the Deal
So HOT! Yummy, yummy. And our normal hunter, Brian, just became the prey. It looks like some hot, fun times ahead.
So I hope after that meeting that Brian’s mind is elsewhere and he totally forgets the request to spend the evening with Mikey, Michael thinks he’s setting himself up - and it wouldn’t surprise me if Michael broke up with David - but widdle Mikey is soon going to see himself replaced, and then I think trouble will be brewing.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Michael probably isn't going to handle someone of Justin's determination and strength in Brian's life. I think we know his objections won't matter one bit. If he was wise, which we know he never is, he would accept what he has with David because he will never get what he so obviously wants.
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2021 5:54 am Title: Chapter 8: One Door Opens
Wow, wow! Gutsy move on Sean’s part. I suppose he wanted to know ‘why’ or ‘what’ Justin sees in Brian.
But if Brian tells Justin about their little rendezvous, I think Sean will be history.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2021 3:48 pm Title: Chapter 7: A Surprising Realization
Wow! These are two very determined men. And with Justin allure and persistence, and his predatory instincts, I still think Brian will bottom first. Maybe something like a deal closer on the account.
It’s going to be fun to see how it plays out.
Sean must really feel how Brian is way different than the rest, that he’s so concerned and nervous.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2021 3:47 pm Title: Chapter 6: A Hunting We Will Go
Can we have someone slug Mikey’s mouth shut? Maybe Brian? How about haul him out by his ear and tell him to shut his trap about his life and stay out! It wouldn’t take me but three seconds of my time to get rid of him.
It seems Justin wants to set up a three-way, with Brian in the middle. I’m anxious to see how the night progresses.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Not to worry, when the time is right, Michael will be put in his place...but, by who and how? Fun fun. LOL. Michael is certainly a pest that needs to be swatted fiercely!
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
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[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2021 3:45 pm Title: Chapter 5: A Plan in Motion
I think Brian needs to get the downstairs lock replaced, even if he had to do it himself, with specific instructions to not let no one for any other apt in. That would kill the pest being at his main door. At least Michael must not have a key to enter the loft.
Now Michael will probably spread all the news around the dner, Woody’s and Babylon.
Sean - that’s interesting. The cat’s away, so is the little mouse playing? Or isn't that a factor?
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2021 8:55 am Title: Chapter 4: A Clash of Hunters
I love it! I guess I’ve never really read a ‘total bottom’ Brian story, it’s not his nature. But I can see them battling this out. But the fact remains, Brian is gay. And I wouldn’t think any gay man would mind giving in to bottoming, especially a deal with Justin. Because like I said, I see them each bottoming for the other. But which one first? That’s the main question.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
I think it will begin to be obvious who will be topping. I won't say they both won't, that would give away too much...but it should be fun finding out. I hope!
I'm not sure I've read a total bottom story either, but one of most favorite stories is a Toppy!Justin and Bottom!Brian story. 'Spin and Fall' by Conzieu, and it's here on KD. If you haven't read that, I highly recommend it. :)
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2021 8:53 am Title: Chapter 3: A Meeting to Remember
This will be interesting. If I had to guess on how this meeting between the sheets will go this evening, I’d pick Brian to bottom first, and then Justin.
And oh god, we have a love sick Michael to contend with. That look he gets on his face about makes me want to throw up.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
You could be right, but I'm not breathing a word - LOL.
This story could take us back to the Michael WE love to hate! Haha.
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
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[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2021 8:51 am Title: Chapter 2: Making An Impression
Ah, there’s the guy that taped the interview, Justin. I think he will be what you are looking for. *wink*
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2021 5:32 am Title: Chapter 1: The Arrival
This could be an interesting concept. Both financially independent, so they don't need each other that way - both studs in the own rights - hmm, I guess my question is WHO will top first?
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Haha. That's a very good question. I guess we'll find out. This is certainly a different take on Justin for me. :)
Thanks for the comment, Cathy.
:)