[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2021 2:01 am Title: Chapter 6: The Hunter and His Prey
Oh man! Not Brandon! YUCK! And Justin, what a mistake asking Brandon to pretend to be your boyfriend. Brandon gets a taste of your lips, feels your body, he’s going to get ideas in his head. I also know how icky you can write Brandon, so it's hard to say if he’s better than Gary.
But Mr. Intuitive, might know the difference too.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2021 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 5: The Element of Surprise
Ah, Babylon. If Justin is dancing in the bar, money continually shoved in his briefs, I think we can anticipate a jealous Brian.
It was a fun read to hear Brian doesn’t like Michael. (that’s always a plus in stories!) But twice now it’s been mentioned about Brian’s tough start in life. So I wonder if that is even worse than canon.
I’m curious if Sapperstein will own Babylon, or maybe someone better - or god forbid worse. If worse, just think what Brian could be saving Justin from.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
I have written a couple of stories where Brian had clear contempt for Michael. Usually it just materializes as a story progresses and Michael does stupid Michael things. LOL.
Now that it's been a while, I don't remember if I delved much into either Justin's backstory or even Brian's. I might have to reread it myself. For the stories that have been completed some time ago, my worlds get confused in them. Perhaps I am just getting old. Haha.
We may be spared from nasty Gary this time around, but yeah, something could always be worse.
Thanks for commenting!
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[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2021 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 4: Setting A Plan in Motion
For some reason I believe there will be a new participant at Babylon this evening, or for breakfast in the morning at the Liberty Diner.
And Daphne’s eyes are gonna bulge hearing that interview. Although Brian had paused the part about the desk.
The PI must have started the minute Justin left the building.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Yeah, I don't think this Brian delays in making anything happen - as Justin might soon find out! LOL.
I think paused or not, Daphne will read between the lines, and detect something isn't how she would have expected.
And, I spelled her name right in this response. I wish I could edit a review response - haha. I am too tired and too rushed!
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
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[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2021 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Dominant's Decision
What a meeting! I’m not sure how much of that will be appropriate for the paper Daphne needs to write.
But I think the interview just changed Justin’s whole life.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2021 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 2: Into the Lion's Den
My, my, what an interview. Daphne is going to wonder what the hell happened during it???
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Probably not the interview Daphe was expecting, or what she would have left with afterward - LOL.
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[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2021 9:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Friend in Need
That was certainly a bitchy secretary. It can't possibly be Cynthia, I wonder if that is a rule from the boss, or if she just thinks she’s important and unexchangeable.
I'm interested to see the infamous Mr. Kinney’s reaction to Daphne’s replacement.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
No, definitely NOT Cynthia in this story. She is rather full of herself, and probably needs to be put in her place. I wouldn't doubt that she will be. :)
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet