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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2022 5:26 pm Title: Chapter 19

An intense moment of passion that reaffirms their love for another, the bond they share and the wish that it will never end as long as they hold each dear and near to their hearts Forever!!

A Beautiful Wonderful Story!!

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Date: Jul 10, 2022 5:02 pm Title: Chapter 18

Glad that Brian and Justin were able to deal with the Josh Situation and move so it doesn't infect their relationship anymore than it already has.

Now that they can put this behind them their relationship will be stronger than ever before and so will their love.

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Date: Jul 10, 2022 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 17

Josh was stupid to make a move on Justin and Justin was very naive to allow himself to be maneuvered into such a position of vulnerability, no deal will ever be more important than Justin's safety which is Brian's up most concern Always.

The pleasure derived from this punishment will keep them both on edge the rest of the day and will be wonderful later when they are home.

Yes this will be a very enjoyable day for them both.

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Date: Jul 10, 2022 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 16

Yes indeed Brian and Justin had chosen each other whole heartedly and no one will ever be able to break the bond they share.

The waiter got off lucky Brian could have had him fired and probably disappeared... Maybe?

 

 

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Date: Jul 10, 2022 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 15

Brian and Justin really do have quite a powerful love Justin sees the soft, sweet, romantic side to Brian which he will cherish as much as his jealous, protective, dominant side.

What a surprise they both found after such a sort time together love came for them both when they least expected it.

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Date: Jul 10, 2022 11:10 am Title: Chapter 14

That was a cheap move by Kyle and A very stupid move by Leo Brown they can both stick with Vanguard and remain in Mediocrity while Kinnetic climbs beyond their reach.

Brian and Justin coming to quite a revelation about their future and how it will change some things while enhancing others.

Quite a match these two men are????

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Date: Jul 10, 2022 10:58 am Title: Chapter 13

Brian and Justin make molten lava look like sludge their heat is just Way Too Intense for mere mortals to comprehend.

Brian is falling quickly in love with Justin and Justin is doing the same.

Wouldn't want to be the person to try to get between them because they will be destroyed.

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2022 10:25 am Title: Chapter 12

That Was So HOT??”???”???”?

my Screen Is All Fogged Up Now!!!

WOW!!!!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2022 6:40 pm Title: Chapter 11

Ethan you lost move on Little Boy!

Are cab rides supposed to be that Hot??

Justin and Brian are going to have quite a good time in New York City.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2022 6:23 pm Title: Chapter 10

WOW!!!!

That Was Beyond Hot!!!

I don't think New York will be able to handle the intense heat these two give off.

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2022 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 9

Is it possible Ethan had something on the side but enjoyed having Justin around too?

Justin can't be roommates with Ethan because he won't stop trying to get Justin back while also belittling him, he is a jerk who enjoys being in control and he won't leave Justin alone for a second.

Brian and Justin spending the weekend together?

This Is Going To Be Very Interesting!!

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2022 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 8

The chemistry between Brian and Justin is Hotter than a volcano they practically had the sprinklers going off and that was jyst them kissing the sex between could crack the world in half no wonder temperatures are rising *fans self* WOW!!!

I don't think Justin can resist Brian for much longer and I don't think Brian can wait a second longer.

Bye Ethan!!

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2022 2:06 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ethan placing an ultimatum on Justin is not the way to keep Justin by his side, Justin is too good for Ethan when just wants someone to adore and admire him, Justin can't be Ethan's constant cheerleader, housekeeper and personal ATM when he needs it.

 

Surprised Brian waited that long for that kiss  or to bring up that Justin is a submissive who needs someone strong and powerful to make him shine, not flatten that light so others can hog the spotlight for their own selfish reasons.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2022 1:38 pm Title: Chapter 6

Brian can't deny his desire it is starting to overrule his tense need to be in control, quite a dilemma Mr. Kinney has to overcome.

Ethan is acting like such baby which is an insult to all babies everywhere because they have more maturity just filling a diaper????

Justin couldn't deny his attraction to Brian in the diner after just one look no way is going to be able to continue to deny it as he and Brian work closer together????

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2022 1:23 pm Title: Chapter 5

Reading this far I can tell it is Going To Be Good!!!

Brian and Justin are intensely drawn to each other and I don't see it lessening the more time they spend together.

Guess lunch with Mr. Kinney proved more interesting than a sandwich with Ethan ????

Brian and Justin are going to enjoy spending long hours working hard into the night ????????

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2021 7:43 am Title: Chapter 19

Why did Josh bother to call Brian? If these guys have a ‘circle’ or ‘meeting’, I think Brian should make it known how Josh moved in on his sub. I didn’t think Doms/Subs shared when they were true partners. I know I've read stories where men share their ‘pets’, but Josh had to see there was a deep respect between them, and I’m fairly sure Brian never told him it was ‘okay’ to share.

I love the closeness and love that radiated from both Brian and Justin.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Josh was still trying to needle Brian. Perhaps Josh didn't initially realize how deeply Brian was connected to Justin, but Brian made that very clear. Brian would have never shared Justin with Josh or any other man, dom or not. That was established early on when Brian insisted that Ethan had to go before they could move forward. In the beginning, Brian did seek a true D/s relationship, but it evolved into so much more. A true partnership with the lifestyle mixed in. They should have a very interesting life together. :) 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2021 7:42 am Title: Chapter 18

Justin apparently has learned that if Brian says ‘caution’ regarding a man, proceed that way and don’t put yourself in a position you could regret.

Looking at it the other way - why is Brian trying to do business with someone that would be willing to rape his partner to get what he wanted? What did Brian do to Josh?

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Brian felt that the warnings he gave about Josh would be enough, and that Justin wouldn't ever place himself in a vulnerable position with another man...especially a predator Dom. I don't think Brian expected Josh to stoop this low, especially right under his nose. Josh is the type that always wants to compete with the best, and take what they have, whether it's something he wants to keep or not. In the D/s world, I think Justin would be punished, but I think it's a lot about the ultimate pleasure as well, and having a deeper taste of the relationship Brian craved before he fell in love with his sub. 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2021 7:41 am Title: Chapter 17

If this Josh came on to Justin, it hardly seems right that Justin should be the one tortured. Brian didn’t protect his sub…

Although the day should prove interesting.

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2021 7:39 am Title: Chapter 16

They get a nice month away and together. I do wonder how the bridge between Michael and Justin was gapped, because I don’t see Brian as letting anything upsetting his blond.

Kyle worked over two years for Brian, so I find it strange he could bring Vangard down so quickly.

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2021 1:58 am Title: Chapter 15

“You are my everything, Justin. Our forever begins now.”

How sweet. Brian Kinney finally found what he never expected to.

And nothing like being a respected colleague during the day and his slut at night! LOL!

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I think they are both getting much more than they ever expected out of this evolving relationship. They have reached this place quickly, but when something is just right it can happen like that. I am sure they will have a balanced, not to mention, exciting life.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2021 1:57 am Title: Chapter 14

Boy, oh boy… that was a shock! Leo’s bargaining was downright awful. Leo may own the Athletic company… but is he married?

For some reason, I foresee Brian settling a score with Gardner, Kyle, and Leo.

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2021 1:56 am Title: Chapter 13

Well, I’m certainly not surprised that Brian wanted Justin out of Ethan’s, although living with him was quite abrupt. But understandable when Justin had agreed to be his sub for all time. And I think Mr. Kinney has more than fallen for the blond, in a way he never imagined.

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2021 12:23 am Title: Chapter 12

They both certainly seem to be enraptured with each other.

The fact that Justin has submitted to him totally, what happens to Justin’s job? Can a submissive even work - and for his Master?

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I think a submissive can work for his Dom. For sure, a sub would never get away with anything - LOL. In time, though, they might find a good balance. I guess we'll see how they progress. :) 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2021 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 11

That was the beginning of the hot weekend to expect.

First, Kyle could have been fired without any severance package, simply for coming on to Brian. You just don’t do that to/with the boss. I honestly hope he learned his lesson and will stay away from Justin, and not try to cause problems for him.

Ethan made me want to puke. Hugging Justin, asking for a kiss… He already knew them to be over. But knowing Ethan, the thing that probably bothers him more, is that Justin’s paycheck will now be gone. I had always wondered, even in canon, how Ethan survived. Playing on street corners, could not have covered rent, food, school, etc… Just another Cowlip screwup.

And Ethan… did he realize how inept he looked compared to Brian???

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2021 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 10

I have to wonder what Kyle’s attitude will be after Brown Athletics actually accepts Justin’s proposal. I think in every workplace we’ve all dealt with a suck-up of Kyle’s proportion. I’m glad Brian saw it for what it was.

Wow… Brian took quite a chance with that dom blow job in his office.

HUGS,

Cathy

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