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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2021 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 9

New York... two whole days, maybe longer, if they say after the pitch to 'celebrate'.

Let's just hope that they don't run into Ethan at anytime, because he would make for a very uncomfortable situation, as you know his mouth wouldn't have any filter to it.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

If they did run into Ethan, and he ran his mouth as he is certainly prone to do here, I have no doubt that Brian would chew him up and spit him out quicker than he can cry 'fiddler.' LOL.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2021 1:27 am Title: Chapter 8

Very intense. Both men are wanting the same thing, but Justin was still trying to hold on to his integrity. But just kissing Brian, Justin realized Ethan wasn’t for him.

I chuckled when Justin gauged the distance to the door, wondering if he could make it before Brian stopped him. (I’d guess – NO!) LOL...

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2021 1:25 am Title: Chapter 7

I liked the way the whole presentation thing went. Prior to that, I have to really wonder about Ethan. He seems rude and crude. And the fact Ethan thinks Justin should work for Vangard - speak no evil of gayness - it really makes me wonder about him.

The kiss at the end was awesome, but I have to wonder if the submissive question will throw Justin.

HUGS

Cathy



Author's Response:

I think Ethan primarily wanted Justin to work for Vangard is to get him away from Brian. As dense as he is, Ethan can still see his meal ticket slipping away.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:) 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2021 11:56 am Title: Chapter 6

Ethan is such an ass. always was.  good story



Author's Response:

Yes, you are so right. I have occasionally written Michael as decent, but Ethan - NEVER. 

I'm glad you enjoyed this story.

Thanks for commenting. :) 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2021 7:08 am Title: Chapter 6

Well, we ALL know he doesn’t want to resist it. Where would be the fun in that?

So now I’m back to the clothes. Will Ethan see them, ruin them, put cat hair all over them?

Or worse yet, was Ethan outside when Brian left so that he saw them?

Is Ethan being faithful to Justin?

Questons, questions, and more questions...

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

So many questions, and I'm not saying a word. You will get your answers soon enough, especially about Ethan. :) 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2021 7:06 am Title: Chapter 5

I’m kind of glad that Justin didn’t have to bring that suit home. I’m nervous about Ethan. It will be bad enough if Justin tells him where they ate - then shopped, but if that suit was present, I could almost imagine Ethan ruining it.

I almost LOL when Justin questioned Brian if what he did was really necessary. If Brian hadn’t, I don’t think Justin would have made it home without being attacked.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I would hope that Ethan would consider consequences if he destroyed a suit that obviously cost a fortune out of jealous rage. I doubt he could pay for the thread alone. 

And yes, Brian definitely needed to take the edge off. Brian is barely hanging on to his control so far. Justin will probably fully understand very soon.

Thanks for commenting.

:) 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2021 7:05 am Title: Chapter 4

There is hot, hot, magic already between the two. How soon is that out-of-town trip scheduled? Or will they even wait that long?

And since Justin didn’t check in about lunch, and ignored Ethan’s call, how much trouble or repercussions is Ethan gonna cause?  How possessive will he be??

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

There is definitely some smoldering chemistry between Brian and Justin already, and they are suited to each other more than they realize, but they will. And, probably very soon. :) 

I don't think Ethan should think about getting in Brian's face about missing Ethan's lunch call. Brian would chew him up and spit him out without any effort. Horrid thought, though. Any part of the chin rat in Brian's mouth. Ugh.

 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2021 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ah, poor Brian. However will he make it through not just today, but the whole week? And god forbid, SHOPPING with him? I can just magine how Justin' pants will cling to show his ass-ets.

I gather the company is Eyeconics, so Justin will make the sale there too.

HUGS,

Cathy

 



Author's Response:

If memory serves me correctly, since this was such a long time ago, I do believe it will be Eyeconics. In canon, such a big moment for Justin, although, it caused some stress for Brian. Haha. 

Shopping with THIS version of Brian. Good luck, Sunshine!

Thanks for commenting!

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2021 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love Brian’s vacation… and he didn’t miss a beat even on the phone with Cynthia.

Debbie doesn’t seem to care for the chin rat… I think he thought he was too good for the place. And oh boy - I think she totally loved telling Ethan that the gorgeous man was Justin’s new boss.

Why do I get the feeling there could be trouble when Justin gets home from work this evening?

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Brian certainly can stay in 'rhythm' even when conducting a business call - LOL.

No, for whatever reason, Debbie doesn't seem to like Ethan at all. Of course, I never felt she did in canon either, but tolerated his presence because of Justin. 

It's very likely that Ethan won't approve of Justin working for Brian, especially after seeing him in action. :) 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2021 9:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well, Justin won Cynthia over… which is promising. Only Cynthia knows her boss very well.

HUGS,

Cathy

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