Date: Apr 15, 2021 2:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it, loved the changes to the original story





Date: Apr 15, 2021 1:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this, slighly tweaked version of their story. Looing forward to updates on your other stories too!
Thanks Hun,
Deb L.
Date: Apr 13, 2021 4:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a great alternative to what was in the show. I loved that Brian not only didn't disappear after the bashing, but basically took over Justin's care as well as help him recover.
Date: Apr 13, 2021 1:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it. Great writing.





Date: Apr 12, 2021 6:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love your take on how things could have gone. Great job.
Date: Apr 12, 2021 1:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I really liked the story but am a bit confused...in the beginning part Brian tells Melanie to file for third party adoption and then later Melanie tells him she filed and should get it...later you have Gus get sick and Melanie can’t get In the hospital so Brian signs over his rights like he does in the series,,,if she had adopted him already then this doesn’t follow...
Author's Response: Oops, that was even missed by my beta. Thanks for mentioning it.





Date: Apr 12, 2021 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1
It's so much better like that! Great story thank you !!