[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2021 6:40 am Title: Chapter 13
It was wonderful that Aiden got to see Grey Wolf. I'm hoping that Ted and Victor manage to get JR's younger brother away. It looks like you are going to continue this in a new story. I hope so. Daklin needs to go down.
Date: Apr 02, 2021 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 13
Fireworks! Let's hope Brian doesn't blow it.
Author's Response:
The next story is going to have plenty of fireworks. We know Brian and Justin will do anything for the children.
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2021 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hopefully this trip will go better than the last time. JR and Gus will keep a sharp eye on Aiden.
Author's Response:
A pleasant end to the story of course. It is nearly done. 4 is in the works.
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2021 3:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
Gus looks to be heading on the right track. If JR's lucky Ted and Victor will be able to help out his mom and him too.
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2021 3:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
Gus looks to be heading on the right track. If JR's lucky Ted and Victor will be able to help out his mom and him too.
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2021 4:47 am Title: Chapter 10
Haha. Cat fight at the fourth. I see you snuck JR in there and changed her sex. Nice. Both Mel and Lindsay are so immature.
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2021 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 9
Brian and Justin both met Cass and like her. Just hope that Gus doesn't mess things up.
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2021 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
Gus got to see Cass with Lindsay not the wiser. Brian knows how to raise his son better then Lindsay or Mel.
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2021 4:55 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love how Gus was the one to find Aiden. Will they believe that the wolves saved him? Aiden said it was his fault while Gus claims he was at fault. They are definately brothers. Good that Ted and Victor showed up.
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2021 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow. Having the wolves help Aiden was a stoke of genius.
Author's Response:
Trust me, I don't get called genius very often. LOL I have heard stories about wolves really raising a child so thought I would use it.
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2021 3:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
Luckily Aiden didn't get any of the special brownies.
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2021 1:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
The guys don't have a leg to stand on if they complain about an age difference. Somehow I think Brian is going to have a problem that will require medical attention.
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2021 1:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
The thunderstorm scene was really good. Is Gus straight?
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2021 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
How could Lindsay make such a mistake. When Gus was brought home by the cops that should have ended any chance of his getting together with his friends before going on vacation. Mel is acting in bad faith. She's the one with something on the side and she's letting Gus get away with shit.
Author's Response:
Said like a true mom. (Of course, I don't know if you are one.) Not their last mistakes.
Date: Mar 17, 2021 2:58 am Title: Chapter 9
I have to stop reading this. The writing is good, BUT I just can't stomach a 15 year old boy having oral sex/masturbation with an adult, and an adult in a postition of teacher, even if it is summer. This is illegal and it's a total irresponsible relationships between Gus and Cass. But the fact that Gus told his friends that they did have sex Cass could go to jail for what is going on, so I question Brian and Justin not actually doing anything to stop Gus.
Author's Response:
I didn't mean to offend anyone and you aren't the first one. I also actually agree and if you are willing to finish this chapter, you will see the relationship is done. As Brian's son, I was sort of mimicking Brian's thing with his gym teacher in the school. Also, in the original QAF in England, there Justin was 15 and their Brian was much older. Not approving sex with a teacher but that is where my thoughts started. There will be nothing more.
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2021 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 7
Tears falling, blurry vision and fogged up glasses - this story is emotionally draining me but it is amazing. Now I just have to get myself sorted before the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hope you managed to dry your eyes. The next chapter has been posted.
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2021 9:12 am Title: Chapter 7
Really? A cliffhanger?
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2021 5:40 am Title: Chapter 7
Melanie,
I'm loving this series so much. These last two chapters are tearing my heart out. I keep checking to see if you have updated the story. I even went to that other site to read the previous update when KD was experiencing technical difficulties. I really hope you are not busy with real life right now and that your muse is quickly working on the next chapter of this great story.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
I am so glad to hear you are enjoying it. I do my best to get 2 chapters a week written but with my work schedule that's about all I can manage. This one has kind of pulled me in, too. It hasn't gone the way I originally planned it to but it is telling me where it has to go. Now I just have to figure out how to get notifications back on here.
Date: Mar 12, 2021 2:45 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh my god. Please let Aiden be alright. Thankgod Gus found him.
Date: Mar 11, 2021 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
I hope they find Aiden soon. The wolves will look after him.
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2021 3:19 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow, fantastic chapter. Terrific writing and what a cliffhanger.
Date: Feb 21, 2021 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh dear I suspect Gus is in real trouble now if Mel knows where he is!
Author's Response:
I hope I can keep it exciting.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2021 8:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh this is getting so good. Love it. Wonderful writing.
Author's Response:
This is my first series that isn't exactly the Brian and Justin from the series although I have kept their characters the same. Glad you are enjoying it. I am guessing you have read the first 2.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2021 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, great first chapter. A completely different idea for our favorite guys. Terrific writing.
Author's Response:
Hope you continue to enjoy it.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2021 1:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is going to be rough. Great story!>>Cat
Author's Response:
It is testing everyone, including Brian who wants to be a good father and did drugs himself but will not allow disrespect either.