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Reviewer: nickknack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2021 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 10

Love this story and especially the loving extended family Brian and Gus now have with Aiden, Justin, Jennifer and Molly. I just know that there will be many more years of happiness ahead for the Kinney-Taylor, or is that Taylor-Kinney, family. Looking forward to your next offering :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you.  They all deserve to be happy.  There will be another in the series to come.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2021 3:53 am Title: Chapter 10

What a wonderful end to a wonderful story.  Loved it from beginning to end.  I am a happy ending person so it made me extremely happy.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2021 3:40 am Title: Chapter 10

Great ending.  Im happy taht Dak did not want custody once he learned that Aiden was sick.  Very cool about Molly gettng married and being pregnant.

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2021 8:26 pm Title: Chapter 10

Loved this story in the series

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoy joining me in my imagination.  More to come in a couple months.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2021 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 10

A very well written story. I loved reading it.≥≥Cat

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2021 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 10

Great story!  Wt b another sequel? (Hint hint!) 🙃



Author's Response:

 I plan on another 2 in this series.  First I will be adding to the Hate series.  A follow up to a Father's Hate.  This will be A Mother's Disdain.  Then I will go back to the Cabin with the boys.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2021 3:17 am Title: Chapter 9

What a wonderful chapter.  So happy that Aiden will do well.  FYI, I can understand Brian and Justin's feelings about Aiden since when I was 4 I developed Nephritis (a kidney disease).  Long story short I was hospitalized for 3 weeks getting 21 shots a day.  In the middle of that time, they thought I was fine and told my parents I could come home the next day.  My Mom was young, 23 and pregnant with my sister, who was born while I was in the hospital.  They told my mother to call & find out what time someone could pick me up, when she called, the doctor yelled at her and even swore asking if she wanted me dead or alive.  I had taken a bad turn during the night & was actually gone for a short time.  I did a turn around and here I am almost 75 years later.  They said it could reoccurr, but it never has.  My mother told me the story over & over until she died.  When she finally told the doctor she was surprised that he swore at her, he was shocked saying he didn't recall, but had been terrified of losing me at that moment and said how sorry he was.  It came on out of no where and makes it easy to understand that life can change in a moment.  Your writing is fantastic.  Hope you don't mind that I shared my real life story.  Happy New Year. 



Author's Response:

I am glad you shared.  For years I worked with medically fragile children and adults so I know how things can change in the blink of an eye.   I had to do some research for this one.  I ended up with NTDT. I am glad you are enjoying this one.  I have one more chapter and then I will move back to the follow up to 'A Father's Hate'.

Reviewer: Lorie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2020 4:16 pm Title: Chapter 8

 

Melanie,

Hopefully Dak will show his true colors and sign the papers once he finds out that Aiden is not the perfect, healthy kid. He is not a caring person, he just wants control.

~Lorie

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2020 1:50 am Title: Chapter 8

Oh, I just knew that Aiden was ill.  Tissue box time.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2020 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 8

Noooooooo! Please keep.Dak away.

Author's Response:

He is the slimy type.  How did Justin ever fall for that?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2020 1:44 am Title: Chapter 7

I can't imagine what is bothering Aiden.  He's too young to be worried about his deliquent dad.  Maybe he misses Gus?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2020 12:40 am Title: Chapter 6

Such a wonderful wedding even if the gang was not there.  At least the important people were.



Author's Response:

They had everyone they needed.  This is real love.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2020 5:22 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh, no, just knew things were going too good.  I don't like Daklin.  Great writing.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2020 2:28 am Title: Chapter 6

So enjoying this. I like B/J working together V on their relationship.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2020 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 6

What a wonderful chapter.  Our boys are married again and I love that.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

Pretty soon I am going to feel like I really did a wedding for them.  I think this was the 4th or 5th wedding I have written for them. LOL.  

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2020 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 6

Lovely wedding chapter with a little angst at the beginning lol



Author's Response:

I just always seem to need to add that.  I think it keeps the 'boys' happy and they like to make up.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2020 2:00 am Title: Chapter 5

Things worked out perfectly.  Now to have Gus work out too.



Author's Response:

Our boys can make it work this time.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2020 4:38 am Title: Chapter 5

Wonderful chapter.  Such a great story.  Fantastic writing. 



Author's Response:

Love our boys.  This one is easy to write.

Reviewer: Lorie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2020 3:30 am Title: Chapter 5

 

Melanie,

So happy the boys will be living together and getting married. Loving this story.

~Lorie

 



Author's Response:

I'm enjoying writing this one a lot.  It just comes out.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2020 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 4

You have to lose something to realize how much you need it.



Author's Response:

They realize it now.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2020 2:11 pm Title: Chapter 3

Love seeing how much Brian has changed.  Lack of Mikey must be part of the reason.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2020 3:11 am Title: Chapter 4

Love that Brian and Justin both say they love each other-  now they just need to figure things out

Reviewer: Lorie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2020 3:13 am Title: Chapter 4

 

Melanie,

Like I said before, this just keeps getting better with every chapter.

~Lorie

 



Author's Response:

This has been an easy one to write so far.  Need to map the rest of it out in my head and am starting to work on the next story.  Getting notes. started.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2020 2:45 am Title: Chapter 4

Still loving this! Keep up the good work! >>Cat -Frosty70

Author's Response:

I'm just glad you are enjoying it. I expect to have this story finished in early January and am starting to plan the next story in the "A Father's Hate" series.  I think the next will be "A Mother's Disdain".

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2020 2:35 am Title: Chapter 4

What a wonderful chapter.  I love them so much when they are happy.  I am a happy ending person.  Your writing is fantastic.  In case you don't update again this week, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you.



Author's Response:

I often have some strife in the middle but those boys just have to end up together.  I do hope to have at least one more chapter done by Christmas.  I actually have a few days off for Christmas so I might get a couple!  Merry Christmas to you, too!

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