Reviewer: nickknack Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2019 6:29 am Title: You Take Me There

OMG this left me speechless and breathless. Wow!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2016 10:39 pm Title: Broken Open

A more perfect non-wedding I've never read.

Reviewer: Dido_Jolasun16 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2016 10:30 pm Title: A Place For You To Love Me

Exquisite writing. Very well done indeed. The emotion flows without interruption from beginning to end, and you don't fall back into stereotypes of overused tropes at all. Excellent work. 

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2016 6:47 am Title: You Take Me There

Bravo and we'll done my friend! I think I need to go and defog all the windows in my house after reading this.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2016 10:30 pm Title: A Place For You To Love Me

I am reading these one by one and honey let me tell you, you are on FIRE with these glimpses into the boy's lives. I will keep reading as they come.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2016 6:04 pm Title: Something Like Eternity

I just want to cuddle him, damnit.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2016 6:01 pm Title: So Let Us Melt

I have said this before, but you really have such a beautiful way with words. That was so sad and I just wanted to wrap Brian in my arms :(

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2016 12:58 pm Title: A Place For You To Love Me

You word this so well.  It makes you think that without the family there to put their two cents in they can be happy.  Oh they still fight, but then they make up and all is right in their world.

Reviewer: NoChaser Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 9:21 pm Title: A Place For You To Love Me

Oh, lord... what can I say? This is so heartwrenchingly on point, so poetically crafted, so sadly happy. 

"That's the one thing they never tell you, how unnerving it can be to have everything you want. How the fear of losing it is oftentimes worse than the ache of never having it at all."

Those few lines sum up the fears of all humans, that desperation that drives us to hold on too tightly or let go too quickly. That's the kind of pain that is so familiar and so foreign to Brian at the same time, and you've captured it so very well. 

Thank you for this. Really, thank you. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 6:23 pm Title: Illumination

Wow.  Give us a lot to think about and inspirition for future stories.