Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2020 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 8

I'm not sure I trust Craig.  But he doesn't think he did anything wrong, even though he did.  Molly's meeting with him should prove interesting.  Like the idea of having a live in security.

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2020 3:00 am Title: Chapter 8

Another great chapter. I wonder how long it will take Craig to break his orders and sneak out to find where Justin is and what he will say in his meeting with Molly to try and turn her against everyone. I hope James is a good addition and not any trouble between Brian and Justin. Hopefully when Michael visits he is nice to Justin and not his usually snarky self.

Loving this story!

 

Liz

Author's Response:

Just a peek ahead....Emmett will be spending a lot of time at the estate soon.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2020 5:33 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm not quite sure exactly what the point was of Brian's confrontation with Craig. I am on Justin's side; it wasn't a good idea and Brian would've been better off staying home with his Sunshine. TAG

Author's Response:

Sometimes Brian just has to 'do' something.  Sort of like when he glued the seat of the toilet for the judge.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2020 11:38 am Title: Chapter 7

Can't wait to find out what you have planned next!

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2020 12:32 am Title: Chapter 7

What a cliffhanger, Iam afraid they are going to find Craig dead when they break in and then Brian is going to be in trouble.....Please don't do that we really want a trial for Craig to get what is coming to him.

 

Liz

Author's Response:

Why didn't I think of that!  That would have been good!

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2020 2:44 am Title: Chapter 1

Like I said before.  Still love, love, love it!!! 

Channel 4 has always broken new ground in LGBT programming and always will in the UK.  That's why we luv 'em!!  No way would most of their programming ever make it to air in the US!  Glad I live here!!!

Ta

Deb L.

Author's Response:

I should watch it again.  It has been a long while and I think I only did watch it once.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2020 2:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

It's good that we haven't seen Craig in while.  Hobbs is another wildcard.  Can't wait to find out what you have planned for Danni's baby.  Enjoying this.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2020 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 4

Hi. Love this update, but then your writing is very good.

Just a point, I am sure someone else has mentioned, the age of consent in penn state is and was, at the time of the show, 16.  So Brian couldn't be responsible for statatory rape.  Sos, but if you want that in this story, you need to explain that the age of consent is higher.  If for no other reason than to stop people like me scratching their heads and saying WTF!! :)

Also, in the show, Justin was eigtheen when he was bashed so, hopefully, Craig will be charged with kidnapping among other things.  Which will make keeping him away from Molly easier. 

It's a shame that Chris Hobbs will get away with a light sentence (again!!) for what he did but, hopefully, he will sue Craig into the ground, thus freezing his assets and not allowing Craig to make bail.

Okaaay, Just read that back and can see I am attempting to write this story for you, so, so sorry, bad Deb!!!  But this is what happens when I get so involved in a really good story, so it's your own fault really, for making it so good! LOL

Thanks Hun!

Deb L.

P.S. Please checkout the UK version, where a 15 year old Nathan (Justin) is portrayed beautifully, as a gangly, untried AND underage neophyte, by Charlie Hunnam who was 18 at the time.  Which was okay for us in the UK, but would, no doubt, never make it to air in that format in the US.  But be warned, it is much more gritty and in your face than the US version. :o

All my love...

Author's Response:

Yes, someone brought up to me the age of concent in PA.  I doubt very few people, other than those who live in PA, would know that and this is a work of fiction.  But that is why I haven't mentioned the statatory rape in the last couple chapters.  I won't bring that into the story line again. As for Hobbs, he has spent 2 years in jail already.  He isn't out yet.   I have seen the UK version.  In the US they knew that would be too young for anyone to  agree with.    I love writing and enjoy comments.  Like you said, it lets me know that people are liking it.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2020 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 3

Glad Justin seems to be improving so fast. TAG

Author's Response:

I don't like seeing him in distress, LOL.  Soon he will be distressed but with anger to his father.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2020 3:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting premise! TAG

Author's Response:

This was a plot bunny someone had put out there.

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2020 8:02 am Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2020 12:10 am Title: Chapter 3

Another great chapter. I can't wait for Craig to get what is coming to him. I like that Jenn and Molly will be staying with Brian and Justin. Let's hope Mel can come up with something good to go after Craig legally and then Brian come up with some good payback that will hit him where it hurts in hit wallet and any future business.

Can't wait for more!!

 

Liz

Author's Response:

Yes, both Craig and Hobbs have to be dealt with in some way. I am trying to figure out what is the most fun.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2020 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait to see Craig get his comeuppence!

Not sure about statatory rape thing, as pennsylvania age of consent was 16 at time of show & still is, but assuming for your story you are basing it as 18.

Love this story can't wait for more,

Deb L.

Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know that.  I know I don't do as much research as I should but now I can use that to help Brian.  Glad you are enjoying it.