Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2021 6:49 am Title: Chapter 1

I really liked this. It was pretty much like canon, only with a twist. Brian gave into his feelings in this one.

I always liked how Daphne was in Brian's corner, and never cared for Ethan. She caught on to his bullshit from the start.

The one thing I found nice about Brian, was he knew the fiddler was cheating, and he didn't run out and tell Justin. But it was funny when he told Etahn he smelled of another man. LOL...

The one thing I think Cowlip screwed up with this arc... is them having Justin leaving Ethan because he cheated. Justin never loved him, it was always Brian, and he should have left Ethan for THAT reason. Not something so lame as cheating.

HUGS,

Cathy

Author's Response:

Yes, this was kind of a redo of sorts of canon. Daphne is extremely intuitive. I always enjoyed how she could see Ethan for who he really was. 

Brian has the nose of a hound dog when it comes to smelling another man on someone. LOL. 

Whether it was Cowlip's intention or not, I think the cheating was just an excuse for Justin to leave and lead to him going after his heart's desire. Justin never loved Ethan. He was just passing time until he and Brian could be in the same space again, and find a way to make it all work. 

Thanks for commenting!

:)

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2020 9:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw that was great thank you 

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :) 

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2020 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well written...loved the tension and the game play between BJ....Brian is more fucked then even he knows

Author's Response:

Yes he is, much more than he would ever admit. :) 

I'm glad you liked it!