[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2020 2:11 am Title: Mr and Mrs Right
Wow, this was great. A sequel will be wonderful, but we fully understand what your priorities must be. Wonderful writing. Stay safe and will keep you in my prayers.
Date: Mar 16, 2020 1:31 pm Title: Race against time
thanks for update
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2020 1:11 am Title: Race against time
Ok, thanks for chapter 13. But did you have to leave such a cliffhanger?
Please let there be more to wrap this up??
Sos, I know you're busy. Take care of the more important stuff.
Deb L
Author's Response:
One more but... time today... not sure yet
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2020 11:48 pm Title: Race against time
OMG, cliffhanger. Wow what a chapter, but we are going crazy knowing if our boys will be ok. FANTASTIC writing.
Author's Response:
Last chapter for now just uploaded... hope the end is not to much of a cliff.... It really can't be helped...
Date: Mar 15, 2020 5:49 pm Title: A way out
Don't worry Hun, just me being impatient as usual.
You're doing great work during this epidemic so hang on in there. Not sure what country you're in but I imagine wherever it is you are overrun. I'm in UK and used to work in labs so know how it goes!
Take care,
Deb L
Author's Response:
I'm in Iceland. Chapter 13 is up!
Date: Mar 14, 2020 6:26 pm Title: Connecting The Dots
Hi,
Just wondered if chapter 13 is on it's way? As there seems to be confusion as to if this was finished or not. Then it was reopened. And now it has round robin on it?
I really would like to know how this ends!
Thanks hun,
Deb L
Author's Response:
Really sorry Deb...
I don't know what happened with the round robin...
And I'm so busy because of COVID-19.. because I'm a lab technician ... no time to write.
The chapter is well on the way... But I need one day to fix grammar and spelling...
I hope you understand.
Date: Mar 10, 2020 7:30 pm Title: A way out
I'm glad there is more to come and more to enjoy!
Deb L
Date: Mar 09, 2020 4:04 am Title: Connecting The Dots
thanks for update
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2020 1:55 am Title: Connecting The Dots
Okaay. This seems like a strange place to end this story. But I did enjoy the story, even if it made rather difficult reading at times! It also made me feel queasy that this was based on a true story.
Hope you have an epilogue for this or a continuation into another story.
Thanks
Deb L
Author's Response:
Hi, Thanks for your review,
It's not the end, there are two more chapters but I won't be able to post them today because I'm stuck adulting at work :)
I'm planing a sequel because there is such a shift in the story coming up
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2020 1:05 am Title: Connecting The Dots
Wow, great updates. Hope the good guys get there in time. Wonderful writing. Glad that Tag is helping you, she is a fantastic writer.
Author's Response:
Thanks! The good guys are doing their best :)
Yeah, she's amazing, Love her. Her emotional support and cheerleading from friends like her are the reasons I finished. Although, to have things right, she's not my beta (so any spelling mistakes are on me).
Hope she get's time to read the story (wink wink) although I'll never write anywhere near her level. My English skills are limited to a degree here...
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2020 10:48 pm Title: 4 In The Morning
Finally the good guys are getting involved. Can't wait for the rest of the story. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2020 6:28 pm Title: Is this the End?
OMG, caught up again on all chapters. Your writing is amazing. What a cliffhanger. Too bad all the rotten people didn't die.
Author's Response:
Well... someone needs to stand trial and go to jail and get tortured while recovering 3rd degree burn
Date: Mar 08, 2020 11:39 am Title: Broken
thanks for update. WOW some story
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2020 1:38 am Title: Broken
Got caught up on all the chapters. Great writing. So worried about all of the kids.
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2020 2:35 am Title: Sunshine In The Rain
Wow, what a story. I read chapters 1, 2 and 3. Great take on how bad Brian had it, but it is a really sad story. Fantastic writing. Hope somewhere along the line, they get some happy times.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and thanks for the compliment. I too want them to have happiness... let's hope so.
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2020 1:50 am Title: Sunshine In The Rain
Nooo. You can't be so cruel. Jack and Joan are cruel. Tell me you turn things around!
Author's Response:
I'm on their team! Thakns for reading and reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2020 12:17 am Title: Anita
Amazing background. Anita is an interesting character.
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2020 12:06 am Title: A way out
What a way to start a story. Of course it makes you have to read more to find out who.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2020 10:51 pm Title: Anita
Different. I like it.😊 Looking forward you more.
Author's Response:
Thank you.... be careful what you wish for. It was a bit hard to write...
Date: Mar 05, 2020 10:06 pm Title: A way out
????
Author's Response:
I trying to add more....