[Report This]Date: May 10, 2020 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very good story - I love "take charge" Kinney. I so wanted there to be a "Next" at the bottom of this story, as it felt like the start of something special.
Date: Aug 19, 2016 2:39 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed the story. I would love to see you continue the story- what happens when Justin leaves the hospital- does Justin stay or go- and if he returns to Pittsburgh, what does he do-
Date: Jul 13, 2016 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Justin: alone and disapointed in LA; fortunatelly, Brian is his POA so he's aware of what happened to him; and yes, he has the money to get there very quick.
I loved the end: “You so care about me. You love me sooo much…” Justin mumbles as he falls back asleep.
Soooooooo true!
Date: May 23, 2016 1:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I love the fact that Brian didn't hesitate for a minute getting a plane and flying across the country for his man - now if only it didn't take a scare like this to get them together
great job on tihis - and the postictal stuff ws very autentic and believable
nice job
Charle
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2016 7:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, what an interesting tale. I'm so glad that Ted was able to help Brian get to LA fast. And I'm glad that Brian let Justin know just how much he cares.