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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2019 1:05 pm Title: Chapter 4-Surrogate

It's a great idea that Cynthia is proposing and very generous!

I too can see Jennifer with a grand-child in her arms.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2019 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 8- Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

I have always thought Ben was amazing putting up with Michaels obsession not many partners can recognise that it's Michaels DNA to obsess over Brian. Ben is also secure in the knowledge that Brian has no interest sexually in Michael and one day he will realise it as well.



Author's Response:

Sorry for not responding earlier, I missed the notification that you commented.  I always thought that Michael's relationship with Ben is unusual.  I would have a hard time with a partner who obviously wants someone else.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2019 4:47 pm Title: Chapter 8- Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

It's amazing how Michael views Brian.  Even Melanie sees that Brian has changed.  Love Melanie and Mikey shopping for toys.  Ben, as a teacher, should be able to teach Michael, but Michael never was a good student.  lol.



Author's Response:

So sorry to not have responded.  I didn't get notification you commented. Melanie is willing to give Brian a chance; whereas mikey sees Brian in only one way.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2019 5:33 pm Title: Chapter 7- All About Gus

thanks for update.  Darn Dykes



Author's Response:

yep  they are a pain for sure-  not tow of my favorite characters

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2019 11:28 am Title: Chapter 7- All About Gus

Gus is very smart, he's figured out a solution to the problem that Lindsay, Mel and Deb bring up.  You'd think the girls would know better.



Author's Response:

Gus has an inkling that his moms and Deb are not always supportive of his dads.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2019 6:03 am Title: Chapter 6- Its Real

There's a lot to do to get ready for this baby, but I'm glad they didn't forget to fuck! Lol. TAG



Author's Response:

Can't forget the important things in life.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2019 7:19 am Title: Chapter 5- Peek a Boo

All's well so far... TAG



Author's Response:

Lots of story ahead

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2019 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 5- Peek a Boo

Hi, just wanted to say that I loved reading this story on midnight whispers. 

Please note this is not meant as a criticism, but an anomaly I noted previously; in this chapter you have the Doc saying due date is end October but by later chapters it's Christmas and the baby isn't born yet.  Just thought you might want to correct this as you add chapters on here.

Thanks & hugs

Deb L

PS  Guess what?  Now I've looked at this chapter again, I've just got to re read the whole story on MW again - it's just that good! LOL



Author's Response:

thank you for pointing that out.  Obviously, I started writing and posting before the story was finished.  I will see if I can fix the timelines in the next few days.  So glad that you decided to reread the story.  I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it that much.  It is oen of my favorite stories.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2019 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 4-Surrogate

Cynthia will make a great surrogate! 



Author's Response:

Yes. I liked using Cynthia as she is so supportive of them.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2019 5:37 pm Title: Chapter 6- Its Real

Such a lot of things that need to be done before the baby gets here.  I can see Brian wanting final approval on the car seat, crib, even rugs.  What I can't see is them stopping fucking in the livingroom.  A good baby moniter will be in their future.



Author's Response:

A baby takes a lot of preparation and Brian being Brian will want the top of the line stuff.  I can see Justin telling him that the baby will never know the difference and will outgrow the stuff quickly.  Interesting to see who will win out.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2019 7:09 am Title: Chapter 3- Everyone Has An Opinion

Michael is being a hypocrite... TAG



Author's Response:

Oh yes,  but I'm not a fan of Michael and I beliee he is always a hypocrit

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2019 1:01 pm Title: Chapter 2- Peter Pan and Wendy

The conversation with Lindsey actually went better than I had expected. TAG



Author's Response:

But she was so selfish, thinking that she would carry the baby.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2019 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1- Decisions

Finally getting a chance to start this one! TAG



Author's Response:

I hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2019 8:23 am Title: Chapter 5- Peek a Boo

Aw sos sweet I really enjoyed this chapter 



Author's Response:

thanks-   I love how Justin wants to be so involved.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2019 3:11 am Title: Chapter 5- Peek a Boo

Who would have thought, not Justin it seems, that there was so much work to having a baby.  Love that Cynthia is doing this for them.



Author's Response:

I had fun writing Justin freaking out about the birth, even if it is months away.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2019 5:11 am Title: Chapter 4-Surrogate

Cynthia! A perfect solution.  I love it when a plan comes together.



Author's Response:

Cynthia is a perfect solution.  I think she will do this for Brian and Justin and they are comfortable with her.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2019 6:53 pm Title: Chapter 3- Everyone Has An Opinion

Poor Brian! What kind of friends he has! They are at the opposite of Daphne who actually is happy forJustin and Brian. It's obvious that Brian wasn't ready to be a father when Gus was on the way and the munchers did/do all they can to limit his influence on Gus' life, whatever impact it might have on his emotional development.



Author's Response:

Daphne is great.  I always liked her.  Brian wasn't ready, but Lindsay still wanted him involved. She would invite him over to spend time with Gus and was constantly pushing him to be with him.  yet, she doesn't feel he should have a child of his own.  So double standard.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2019 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 2- Peter Pan and Wendy

Lindsay and her assumptions and false beliefs. It's amazing how she thinks that Brian can't change: what a best friend!



Author's Response:

Never been a friend of LIndsay and I dare say she is not really a friend of Brian's either.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2019 6:24 pm Title: Chapter 1- Decisions

It's always great to read how Justin and Jennifer interact, especially on such a subject. She is so different from when she was still married to Craig.



Author's Response:

Jennifer has finally come around and supports Justin 100% in whatever he is doing.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2019 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 3- Everyone Has An Opinion

darn Lindsey and Michael



Author's Response:

They are the selfish "best friends".  Not sure why Brian is friends with them.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2019 3:28 am Title: Chapter 3- Everyone Has An Opinion

Rats, I really wanted to hear how Emmet and Ted take the news.  Not too surprised about Michael.  I think Mel might be more understanding.  At least one can hope.



Author's Response:

Michael and LIndsay are not very supportive when Brian is doing something they don't see as positive for them.   

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2019 2:00 am Title: Chapter 2- Peter Pan and Wendy

darn Lindsey



Author's Response:

It's always about Lindsay.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2019 8:39 pm Title: Chapter 2- Peter Pan and Wendy

Sounds like talking to Lindsay was a mistake.  I can just guess what her 2:00 appt. consists of.  Telling everyone what she knows.  Justin will make sure she pays for that.



Author's Response:

Lindsay knows what she wants and that has Brian. But since she can't have him she'll do whatever it takes to see that no one whose has parts that she can't.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2019 4:41 am Title: Chapter 1- Decisions

YIPEEE!!!! I get to read this all over again! Thank you for posting this HERE! It's one of my favorites!

HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Nichelle:

  Thanks-  Always good to know that my stories stand up to a second read.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2019 3:59 am Title: Chapter 1- Decisions

A very exciting start.  Finding the right surrogate will be an important part.



Author's Response:

So many things to figure out.  It will be a fun journey.

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