




Date: Dec 25, 2019 12:48 am Title: CHAPTER 9: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 2
Deb is about to realize that Daphne is her worst nightmare cause she as afraid of Drb, Michael and Lindsay as she is a mosquito bite, Daphne can fish it out with the best of them and she do believe in holding back when her hackles are up.
Time for Deb to know her place which isn't the center of everyone's universe Emmett, Ted, Brian, Just and Melanie are grown-ups who can make their own decisions, if it is a mistake then it is their mistake to fix? Unlike Michael who even if he had the instructions still couldn't figure out without everyone laying down their lives for him first.
What Michael, Deb and Lindsay want if for everyone to now to their edicts and never think for themselves again but no one will do that because it comes at too high a price.
Deb better rethink raising her hand her to Daphne cause she will lay her flat on her considerable Ass without a care.
Imagine the applause that would get in the diner and all over Liberty Avenue?
So Lindsay is going to use Joan and Craig to get Brian to bend huh?
Good Luck With That!
Only two people can get Brian to bend his knees and that is Gus and Brian lol
Where is Joan?
How much trouble is Ron about to get into for Lindsay's eavesdropping?
I doubt the Chanders will care beyond making sure Daph is well looked after but then putting Deb in her place should be funny.
Everyone is converging on the diner this is about to be Epic!!!
Thanks For the Update 😃
Happy Holidays!
Date: Dec 24, 2019 9:17 pm Title: CHAPTER 9: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 2
thanks for update
fucking Debbie, fire her





Date: Dec 24, 2019 2:22 pm Title: CHAPTER 9: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 2
Wow. That was some smackdown. It looks like Ron needs some attention for opening his mouth that sound have remained shut. Now that Lindsay knows the truth the shit is about to hit the fan. Brian and Justin need to find a way to stop Joan from learning about Gus.
Date: Dec 24, 2019 1:52 pm Title: CHAPTER 9: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 2
Hell yes!!!! Way to go Daphne! I really hope Deb gets some help and starts to realize the truth she's been played!
I'm a bit bummed that Lindsay knows part of the real truth, but I have confidence that she will still get what's coming to her!
I know it's Christmas, but the best present would be yet another update!!!!! lol <3





Date: Dec 24, 2019 9:20 am Title: CHAPTER 9: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 2
Lindsay makes me think of Liz Taylor in "Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf". As for Debbie, the awakening just started and it going to be hard.





Date: Dec 24, 2019 3:51 am Title: CHAPTER 9: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 2
Yayyyyyy Daphne!!!
Date: Dec 19, 2019 2:37 am Title: CHAPTER EIGHT: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS
So typical of Michael to try and pin everything bad that happens on Brian so that he will bail him out. Michael is such a toad, jsut as Cynthia said. I don't even need to be a fly on the wall at Deb's house to hear Michael whining.
I like that Mel and Brian are finally not at each other's throats and being suppportive for Gus.





Date: Dec 18, 2019 7:12 pm Title: CHAPTER EIGHT: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS
Cynthia and Leda related! That's a great idea and it will link Mel and Brian a little more.
The explosion is going to be fun to read! I can't wait to see it appear, soon I hope.
Poor Gus: I hope there won't be any side-effect on his health and development.





Date: Dec 18, 2019 6:05 pm Title: CHAPTER EIGHT: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS
So Miss I Want Be The Best Mommy In The World was taking drugs before she suddenly wanted to be mommy and after Gus was born to lose weight so she wouldn't look fat.
Selfish Bitch!!
Mel can't blame herself cause an was working to make sure the bills were paid, there was good in the house and a roof over their heads while Lindsay gets to play lady of the manor.
Everyone missed the signs including Deb but she won't see it that way it will always be Brian's fault no matter what.
So Lynette's new husband can't stand Nancy, Lindsay, barely tolerated Ron and doesn't feel the need to hide the fact from anyone in his Upper Circle, perhaps that could be useful information to hold onto later?
So why is Brian wanted?
And what fresh Hell has Lindsay done now?
If Deb has it is preparing who to Joan about Gus then she really will lose Brian Forever!
I never understood why Deb felt Joan should have any part of know anything about Brian's life when she was just as abusive as Jack?
just because she gave birth to Brian does not make her a mother and her actions for eighteen years of Brian's life has already proven that she does not and will never love Brian.
Michael got his Ass handed to him by Cynthia and it seems that this meeting at the diner is going to have Deb and Lindsay getting their Asses slammed to in a crowded room.
Can't Wait!!
Daphne is petite and vicious where her friends are concerned and that means she will not back down when Deb tried to intimidate her.
Lindsay losing her rights to Gus and his support payments will be a good thing but her under the jail will be better.
Thanks For the Update 😃
Happy Holidays!!
Date: Dec 18, 2019 5:01 pm Title: CHAPTER EIGHT: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS
thanks for updat





Date: Dec 18, 2019 12:16 pm Title: CHAPTER EIGHT: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS
Lindsay has gone beyond the pale. Taking drugs while feeding Gus! Hopefully the judge will see the wisdom in taking her rights away from her. Michael needs a mental hospital badly, thinking Brian should pay for his incarceration? This is what makes me look forward to each and every chapter.
Date: Dec 18, 2019 11:41 am Title: CHAPTER EIGHT: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS
I can't read this fast enough, and you can't write this fast enough either!!! Every end of chapter has me longing for the NEXT button...
fantastic twists and turns!!!!





Date: Dec 18, 2019 4:59 am Title: CHAPTER EIGHT: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS
Ssoooo love this..





Date: Dec 13, 2019 5:14 am Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: FAR FROM SWEET DREAMS
Mikey & Lindsay are idiots for thinking getting out of this. Both belongs to a 4 padded wall room. Its pleasure to read Michel & Lindsay miserable states. Here as well as in Qaf, they manuplated, failed Brian (& Justin) so many times.
Enjoyed it. Kudos to Your writing! 🙂





Date: Dec 09, 2019 9:48 pm Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: FAR FROM SWEET DREAMS
Michael... I would have loved to have him approach someone on Liberty Avenue to have Justin kidnapped. The fastest way to get into Brian's 'thankful' bed... would have been to spill their guts. Michael would have a heck of a lot more problems than a simple stay in jail. And I honestly believe Brian would have applauded Marilyn for having the imbecilic pest arrested. It was funny listening to his ramblings... he's going to have Brian make David pay for hurting his feelings... poor little guy... did the big, meanie doc break his widdle heart? I'm pretty sure doc was in place to try and make Brian jealous!
The nose-snorting addict... boy, oh boy... delusional doesn't even come close to describing her. if she thinks Brian will forgive her because he will see what his defection did to her... lordy... what a dimwit. She better hope the police catch her before Brian does. What she did to HIS son... will NEVER be forgotten or forgiven.
Wow! Using Gus' support money to pay Kip to scream sexual harassment... and SHE was to be Brian's savior? PLEASE... Let that little tidbit come to light.
I am so happy she thinks she's better than Justin... debutante extraordinaire... more like child abuser, drug abuser, raging psycho, ... and if she started using drugs when Gui came along, was she nursing? Maybe that would account for weight loss. OH MY... What if Gus has drugs in his system when he goes to the doctor.
Well, I was wondering how she would have lunch with Michael tomorrow, seeing as he's in jail... maybe she will oversleep and they'll send someone in to rouse her... maybe they will snap photos... I can see the headlines now...
MRS. BRIAN A. KINNEY... EVICTED FROM HOME AT GROVESEND LUXURY APARTMENTS AND CONDOS...
Photos to follow...
Thanks again for the chuckles.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Dec 09, 2019 6:26 pm Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: FAR FROM SWEET DREAMS
thanks for update




Date: Dec 09, 2019 5:12 pm Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: FAR FROM SWEET DREAMS
Whoa! Lindsay is ready for the loony bin!!!
Thank you for the update!





Date: Dec 09, 2019 9:55 am Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: FAR FROM SWEET DREAMS
Ms. Kinney and Mr. Novotny are completely crazy! I hope Jennifer can find out where Lindsay is with her WASP relationships. I hope Gus is safe and Brian comes quickly. I love you so much in your story that all the bad things that happen to Brian in the show are related to the manipulations of Lindsay and Michael I can not wait to read more.





Date: Dec 09, 2019 12:35 am Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: FAR FROM SWEET DREAMS
My, my Michael is so mentally out of line with Lindsay only a second behind him. Can't wait for the truth to come out. Poor Gus.





Date: Dec 09, 2019 12:18 am Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: FAR FROM SWEET DREAMS
So Lindsay has been parading herself as Mrs. Kinney in Sewickley-Belle Aire huh?
Interesting she ran to the nest to flaunt a status she will never have though I am surprised that Jennifer hasn't heard about this?n
Do Mommy and Daddy Peterson know Lindsay got married and divorced from a man?
Lindsay was taking drugs while she was nursing Gus?
She used the support payments to pay Kip to blackmail Brian?
BITCH!!!!!
Yes I do hope she enjoys her little nap cause it will be the last restful one she has, I do hope she isn't late to meet Michael and Deb because I hope someone calls the police to take her away.
Michael won't have to worry about missing Lindsay cause hopefully they will be seeing each other soon.
I do wonder what new excuse Deb will come up with now?
How she will spin Lindsay neglecting Gus to the point of almost killing him and attacking Melanie?
How she will find a way to blame Brian and Justin?
Thank Goodness Justin is looking out for Brian and time to Ted to look deeper into the support money cause Lindsay needs to pay every cent she spent back.
As nice as it would be to have Brian choke Lindsay out I believe a more fitting end for Wannabe Lindsay is to have all her dirty secrets out in the open so she has no where to run and no place to hide.
Time for the Three Little Pigs to be roasted on spit where they belong.
Thanks For the Update 😃





Date: Dec 08, 2019 10:54 pm Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: FAR FROM SWEET DREAMS
Great story as usual. Really can’t stand the Twit twins.





Date: Nov 26, 2019 7:02 pm Title: CHAPTER SIX: THE HARBINGER OF A BEAUTIFUL NIGHTMARE EQUALS…
What a demented fool! Hurting Gus in order for Brian to come to her? Hurting Mel thinking she's Justin? Wow...I don't think even in a drugged up state... you can be that delusional.
So, Lindsay escaped out of the window... see, that's telling me she really wasn't that far gone... she knew she had to save herself.
Could she have had any money stored away someplace? Because, if she thinks she can go to Debbie's, Vic will put a halt to that!
Mommy and Daddy don't really approve of her... I have to wonder if they will help her. But, I would think that would be one of the first places the police look for her. Maybe they should call the Peterson's, and tell them if she shows up... keep her there.
I HOPE all Lindsay was doing was neglecting to feed Gus... and not giving him doses of Dulcolax or Miralax.
Mel better NOT get into any trouble with CPS. I can just see them charging her with neglect for not being aware of Gus' physical appearance. Those people are usually all about blaming parents.
Look-out Pittsburgh! Hurricane Brian (and I hope Justin) will soon be landing!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Nov 24, 2019 3:28 am Title: CHAPTER SIX: THE HARBINGER OF A BEAUTIFUL NIGHTMARE EQUALS…
Great update. Leda and Cynthia- didn't see that one coming, but good way to get her in the story. LIndsay is conniving and I hope they find her quickly.
Date: Nov 24, 2019 12:49 am Title: CHAPTER SIX: THE HARBINGER OF A BEAUTIFUL NIGHTMARE EQUALS…
just love it, great story





Date: Nov 22, 2019 2:04 am Title: CHAPTER SIX: THE HARBINGER OF A BEAUTIFUL NIGHTMARE EQUALS…
Wow. Talk about action packed. It's a shame the length Lindsay went to in order to get to Brian. What she did to Gus and Melanie is indefensable. Love how Leda comes into the story.