Date: Mar 31, 2021 6:41 pm Title: CHAPTER 1
That BITCH!! She's so jealous about other's talents, she knows she has none herself.
Waiting to see what's coming.
bec
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2021 12:23 am Title: CHAPTER 1
Wow at least Lindsay is a slut from the start. I hope the revenge will be terrible! Interesting start
Date: Mar 30, 2021 2:20 pm Title: CHAPTER 1
Noooooo! Not an indefinite hiatus - this story has so much promise and I have been patiently waiting for an update but this was not quite the updated I was expecting :-(
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2021 9:31 am Title: CHAPTER 1
Gah!!! Really? You end with his death? Okay great storyline. More please.
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2020 3:08 am Title: CHAPTER 1
Lindswy should rot in jail.
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2019 7:11 am Title: CHAPTER 1
Murdered by Lindsay - jealous cow! I sure hope she is going to get her dues, she definitely should end up at the devil's gate.
Author's Response:
Hmm, have you look at my next chapter somehow? Get her hot dues... she will.
Thanks for reading.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2019 5:27 pm Title: CHAPTER 1
Great beginning!!! It seems that Lindsay did not only check that the juice was still OK. It seems that attending PIFA was a trigger to something ugly.
At least, we know that Gus and Justin are/were doing fine together.
Author's Response:
Lindsay really is something else... isn't she? Sit back and enjoy her ride...
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2019 2:38 pm Title: CHAPTER 1
Wow. Lindsay better not get away with this. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Have no fear... Lindsay is going to get it! Thanks for reading!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 23, 2019 3:08 am Title: CHAPTER 1
I love it! You made me cry with the last few minutes of Justin's life. Your writing is wonderful, especially with how you wrote Justin's thoughts. He's not only thinking about Daphne and how his life might have turned out, but even wondering what could have been with someone he hasn't even met yet felt a connection to.
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
*Hugs*
Deb
Author's Response:
I'm glad you approve... a little hint (just for you) the tone of the story will be changing. Buckle up!
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2019 11:35 pm Title: CHAPTER 1
Oh, wow, this is going to be good. Did Linds really murder him or was it an allergy? I'm going with murder. Can't wait to see where you go with the storyline. Wonderful writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading... and as the summary says: the Devil tells him he was murdered... so, yeah... murder she wrote. hehe...
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2019 11:34 pm Title: CHAPTER 1
Great beginning. Can't wait to see where you take this plot.
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thanks! I worked through the whole thing today and figured out why the Devil wants Brian so bad. Actually, I kind of surprised myself!
HUGS ~Cathy