Date: Jul 23, 2020 7:14 am Title: Chapter 4
not bad.. stay safe
Date: Mar 30, 2020 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Great story. I love a happy ending!
Date: Oct 12, 2019 8:01 am Title: Chapter 4
I love your story and I hope you will write your second story soon. Perfect ending. Thank you.
Date: Oct 03, 2019 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love seeing the boys happy
Date: Oct 03, 2019 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow! That was quick. Happy ending, nice.
Date: Oct 03, 2019 4:39 am Title: Chapter 4
Great job and CONRATULATIONS on your first story!! Trust me, the sense of wonder and accomplishment never gets old, so celebrate yourself because YOU DID IT!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 03, 2019 3:10 am Title: Chapter 4
Great story. I love happy stories with happy ending. Wonderful writing.
Date: Oct 02, 2019 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love the story. Perfect ending.
Date: Oct 02, 2019 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
Fantastic ending.
Date: Oct 02, 2019 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congratulations on finishing your first story. So proud of you. TAG
Date: Aug 21, 2019 10:20 am Title: Chapter 3
Good news for Justin & Brian. Wonderful update.
Micheal being nice didn't suit him. If he was ever good, Qaf would have ended in another way and Not Mikey still thinking Brian not change, even knowing Brian did & for Justin.
Date: Aug 20, 2019 1:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
They're so overjoyed by Justin's pregnancy. Can it get any better?
Michael's grown up enough to be a father of a baby? Let's see.
Date: Aug 20, 2019 8:27 am Title: Chapter 3
The story is moving fast. And there will be plenty of babies! I like stories where there are not too many problems I hope yours will continue like that with some quarrels but that will end quickly. Thanks for the update.
Date: Aug 19, 2019 8:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow! I like how well everyone is getting along. Great job.
Date: Aug 19, 2019 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
What a great story. Still our boys, but with a unique touch. Love how you are moving the story along. I do love long chapters and stories, but once in a while a story with a quick moving storyline is so much fun. Fantastic writing.
Date: Aug 06, 2019 8:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Well you go fast! Nice to see Michael under control.
Date: Aug 05, 2019 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Things were moving so fast I thought the story was over.
Who does Michael think he is telling Brian he owes him? For what? Brian protecting him from the bullies at school? Making sure Michael passes enough to graduate? Whay an idiot. If anything. It would be Deb and Vic Brian would be indebted to. But they aren't like that.
Yay Brian is moving in with Justin and Mikey doesn't have free access any longer.
Kinnetik is going to do well with all the important people onboard.
Mikey met a nice guy who came into the comic book store? RUN BEN RUN!!!! , and don't look back.
Date: Aug 05, 2019 12:01 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow, Just love this story and I really like how you move it along rather than long overly detailed chapter. Wonderful, fantastic writing.
Date: Aug 04, 2019 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am surprised and pleased that they manage to get Mikey under control. Especially after what he said at the beginning of the story. This is great.
Date: Aug 04, 2019 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1
No matter what Justin feels about his blooming friendship with Brian, he should really think if putting up with Michael is worth it. Good move with the iced coffee and standing up tp Deb.
Date: Aug 03, 2019 7:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this beginning and I loved Justin who throws coffee on Michael and puts Debbie in his place. I look forward to the evolution of the relationship Justin, Brian.
Date: Aug 03, 2019 2:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Great start. Loved it when Justin poured his drink over Mikey lol, never liked Michael. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: Aug 03, 2019 1:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Love the start to this new story. It is great. Can't wait to see where you go with it. And, for the record, I cannot stand Mikey. He is a PITA. Wonderful writing.
Date: Aug 02, 2019 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Looiking forward to more coffee chats. Hopefully, Mikey doesn't figure out where they are having coffee.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 02, 2019 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is going to be good. Love how Justin put Deb in her place and pouring coffee on Mikey's head.