[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2021 1:51 pm Title: CHAPTER 5
Just reread this. I don't know if you'll get a notice of this comment. Sich a good story and love Mikey getting his just desserts, bitter ones to boot. >>>Cat
Date: Aug 15, 2021 6:43 am Title: CHAPTER 5
This was great!! Michael got what he deserved, and Deb, I can't feel sorry for her either. I'm just glad that David realized that Michael was the one who hurt Justin, and sent him back home, where Brian had figured it out as well!! You can't fool Brian Kinney!!
Date: Apr 16, 2021 6:33 pm Title: CHAPTER 5
did read it again
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2020 2:36 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Mikey deserved what he got. And Deb, she never learns does she? Dont get me wrong I like Deb. But when she smacks, someone needs to smack back. Great writing.
Date: Jan 06, 2020 3:27 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Wonderful ending
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2020 3:18 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Really loved this. Such great writing.
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2019 7:55 pm Title: CHAPTER 4
What a nightmare it must have been during the flight: poor passengers!
Brian knows and so does Vic I guess; how Debbie is going to react.
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2019 7:16 pm Title: CHAPTER 5
This was really good and I enjoyed it very much.
Thank you for your excellent stories and writing. Look forward to you finishing 'Bundle of Joy' too.
Deb L
PS I loved it when Mikey got his! Mind you, so did ranting Deb!
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2019 3:55 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Cathy,
This story was great. The events of your story also fit in well with the episode. It definitely seems like something a jealous Michael would do.
I heard in one interview that it actually was Hal who wielded the bat in the garage scene because Alec McClure (Hobbs) had already left before they filmed it and only Hal was available.
~Lorie
Date: Dec 09, 2019 2:08 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Wow, this was a really great read, well written. I think you captured Michael's devious nature spot on. As for Debbie in the last chapter, I think this too, was spot on. She would definitely go into psycho momma mode for her "precious Michael"
Thanks for this alternative ending to the bashing.
Thanks for sharing
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2019 2:07 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Absolutely perfect. And, Deb was done so well. Just what was needed to show the real person she was. Loved the dance scene so much. I watch it over and over. Wow, it is great that they added the little bit of Randy and the champagne. Love your writing. Maybe you will have a new story for us one of these days. Have a happy holiday season.
Date: Dec 09, 2019 2:07 am Title: CHAPTER 5
This was the perfect ending for this story.
You wrote Debbie exactly how she would have reacted in season one. A bit over the top, but still Deb.
Michael, what's to say? Should have learned to keep his mouth shut. Learned from Deb that that is highly impossible.
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2019 1:43 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Fantastic. All the times Debbie call Brian an asshole and kept praising Michael makes this chapter so believable. Brian helping Vic when Deb runs off is so him. Emmett became such a take charge guy which is wonderful. Great ending especially the latest dance moves in New York.
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2019 11:44 pm Title: CHAPTER 5
Perfect ending in so many ways, especially with the return of Justin's memory. It was further proof that Michael had NOT won! Ya did good, Kid!
HUGS and LOVE,
~Nichelle
P.S. Thank you so much for the card. Your thoughtful, loving kindness towards me always brings a tear to my eyes. Thank you so much for simply being YOU.
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2019 11:16 pm Title: CHAPTER 5
Oh Cathy, this is so perfect. I so enjoyed reading this. Thank you for a wonderful story. -Cat
Date: Nov 03, 2019 1:24 am Title: CHAPTER 2
Michael doesn't use what little brain cells he has. He's already forgotten he has flown before. So glad Cameron is already getting suspicious of Michaels knee injury. Love this story.
Author's Response:
I'm aware my response is very late in coming, so sorry about that. I'm trying to catch up on all of them tonight, especially with the last chapter ready to be posted.
I just wanted to extend a thank you for reading and reviewing all the time. I hope you enjoy how it all turnsout.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2019 8:22 pm Title: CHAPTER 4
Great chapter. Wonderful writing. Glad you are back. Hope all is going better for you.
Author's Response:
I'm aware my response is very late in coming, so sorry about that. I'm trying to catch up on all of them tonight, especially with the last chapter ready to be posted.
I have a new tag to add to the story... so I hope nobody will be upset.
I just wanted to extend a thank you for reading and reviewing all the time. I hope you enjoy how it all turns out.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Nov 02, 2019 10:36 am Title: CHAPTER 4
wow thanks for update
Author's Response:
I'm aware my response is very late in coming, so sorry about that. I'm trying to catch up on all of them tonight, especially with the last chapter ready to be posted.
I have a new tag to add to the story... so I hope nobody will be upset.
I just wanted to extend a thank you for reading and reviewing all the time. I hope you enjoy how it all turns out.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2019 6:04 am Title: CHAPTER 4
Loving how Brian figured it out. I don't think anyone is going to back Michael up except his ma.
Author's Response:
I'm aware my response is very late in coming, so sorry about that. I'm trying to catch up on all of them tonight, especially with the last chapter ready to be posted.
I have a new tag to add to the story... so I hope nobody will be upset.
I just wanted to extend a thank you for reading and reviewing all the time. I hope you enjoy how it all turnsout.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2019 5:26 am Title: CHAPTER 4
YESSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!! Every facet of this chapter has made me so HAPPY!!!! I'm literally squeeing and bouncing up and down in my chair! I'm so glad that Brian actually HEARD what Michael said when he was told that Justin was going to be alright. For a moment, I thought that Michael was going to get away with it in all the excitement over Poor Widdle Mikey's jacked-up knee. But NO! Brian actually LISTENED! And I'm almost certain that he wasn't the only one besides Dr. Sheffield. It's not as though Michael is even capable of whispering, but in this instance that damn lack of brain-to-mouth filter is going to work in everyone else's favor EXCEPT his. Someone should call David and congratulate him on a plan well-played!
OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Great job, Cathy!
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
BTW... Well wishes on your move. I hope that everything goes smoothly for you.
Author's Response:
First, I'm well aware my response is very late in coming, so sorry about that. I'm trying to catch up on all of them tonight, especially with the last chapter ready to be posted.
I have a new tag to add to the story... so I hope nobody will be upset - it just worked best for the direction of the story.
I'm happy I got your stamp-of-approval. That means a lot. As I commented, I rewrote the hospital scene three times before I was told it might happen that way.
Anyway, I just figured Brian is no dummy or fool. H e actually listens.
I just wanted to extend a thank you for reading and reviewing all the time. I hope you enjoy how it all turns out.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2019 10:03 am Title: CHAPTER 3
It's great to have some insight of what could have happened in the ER waiting room. So glad that Vic is reminding Jennifer and Debbie that they pushed Justin to go to the prom.
Debbie will have a big surprise when she will learn who the homophobic asshole who hurt Justin is. Based on David's reaction, it could be very soon. Furthermore, Justin being awake and remembering, the heat will become difficult to bear on Michael' s side.
Author's Response:
The fact that Justin is asking why Michael was there... well, right now they think it's confusion (shouldn't it be Brian?) ... but hmm, Mikey is on his way home... and, oh, yes! Surprises await...
Thanks for reading,
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Sep 14, 2019 11:28 pm Title: CHAPTER 3
Michael certainly is becoming more beligerant as time goes on and he isn't even accused of anything. Acting like he's hiding something. Hmm, wonder why.?
Bravo David. Finally found that backbone to stand up to that little weasel. I wouldn't even buy a ticket back to Pittsburgh for him.
Ahh Daphne, always has Justin's back. And now Brian's. Kind of put Jennifer in her place, Vic did too.
Chomping at the bit to read what happens next. Who's going to believe Justin asking why Michael was there. They'll probably tell him he was seeing things. Vic will know. David will know. Will Brian?
Author's Response:
A person really has to wonder about widdle Mikey, don't they? He should have kept his mouth shut. As far as purchasing the ticket... I'd want him as far away from me as possible. Yes, David sure has his suspicions, although that's all they are at this point... but we'll have to see what happens when he hits Pittsburgh.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2019 12:41 am Title: CHAPTER 1
So happy to read this new chapter. Have to feel sorry for David, who now realises just what type of man he was bringing into his son's life. I hope he doesn't just send Michael home - he needs to let Vic or Brian know exactly what is going on. Looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response:
I'm aware my response is very late in coming, so sorry about that. I'm trying to catch up on all of them tonight, especially with the last chapter ready to be posted.
I just wanted to extend a thank you for reading and reviewing all the time. I hope you enjoy how it all turnsout.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2019 12:22 am Title: CHAPTER 3
Great chapter. Give Mikey enough rope and he always hangs himself Love how the story is going. Fantastic writing.
Author's Response:
Ah, yes. Mikey, Mikey... he should have kept his mouth shut!
Thank you for your continued support. It means so much to me.
HUGS ~Cathy