Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 9:00 pm Title: CHAPTER 3

Wow.  I'm glad Jen finally saw sense and how Daphne stood up for Brian.  David is turning into a pretty good guy.  I know Michael is in pain but he's not acting in a way that isn't suspicious.

Author's Response:

Hey, Phyllis! Yeah, David wised up... thank heavens. But, I do have to wonder if Michael is just in too much pain to care... besides, you know how he always feels everybody should cater to him. 

It should be a fun flight home!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 9:09 am Title: CHAPTER 3

Obviously David knows Michael is the villain so why isn’t he offering up that information ?

Author's Response:

I had to think for a little bit before trying to figure the best way to answer you. I guess I could say, David is offering up Michael to the wolves... he has to go back to Pittsburgh with a very bad RIGHT knee and a split lip... and let's not forget Justin woke up wondering why Michael was at the Prom. It shouldn't take much for the pieces to fall into place. But let's see what type of lie Michael might try to spin first.

Thanks so much for continuing to read. I hope you enjoy what else I have planned.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2019 1:32 am Title: CHAPTER 2

Is it wrong of me to hope that David keeps intentionally bumping the bastard's knee? I really do wonder what David will do with this new information. Considering that he's a doctor, he could lose his medical license due to withholding key information such as this. However, I understand how and why he is so desperate to make things work with Michael. The real question he needs to ask himself is: What could and would Michael do to him if he could have the heart to attempt to kill Justin based on some perceived slight?

Another question that should really be to the forefront of David's mind is: What would Michael possibly do to Hank if David didn't give the idiot enough attention the way Brian stopped doing when Justin entered the picture? If David takes the time to think rationally with a modicum of emotion about the consequences to himself and his son, then perhaps David will be so inclined to do the right thing NOW as opposed to waiting until he can't get rid of the murderous bastard in Portland. 

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Author's Response:

I have to wonder if you are somewhat of a mind reader, or do you have a long lens, powerful magnifying glass? Since the next chapter has been written for a while, I almost thought about adding that 'bumping knee' suggestion. But alas, reality settled in, and Michael is sitting in the aisle seat. Hmm, maybe there can be a late-comer onto the plane... *wink*

Thanks for reading.

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: Gcleft77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2019 3:11 am Title: CHAPTER 2

Now we find out if David will do the right thing

Author's Response:

Hmm, what will David do? That's a big question. Just how bad does he want Michael?

Thanks so much for reading,

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2019 9:44 pm Title: CHAPTER 2

I'm sure that David doesn't want to believe that Mikey was capible of doing such a thing.

Author's Response:

 No, you are right, but the evidence is kind of inconceivable, don't you think? Hmm, what will David do?

Thank you for reading!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2019 7:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

I have a strong feeling of "déjà vu" and I realize that there currently is another story from the same bunny. It should be interesting to see how both stories evolve.

Michael, with his small brain, thinks that the attack will fall on some straight student (why not Chris) so he will be able to go with the motion like he did nothing. What about the  blood he spat and the fingerprints on the bat? I hope he will feel safe for a moment and that the police will track him down, slowly, very slowly. It won't change anything regarding Justin's state, but it will be interesting to see if Michael finally goes to Portland or if he remains with Brian. I also hope that Daphne will find out who attacked her friend and will be able to speak her mind, loudly and publicly.

Author's Response:

Hey, Sno! Thank you for reading. You mentioned the other story. Yes, I am enjoying that one, myself. I think right now Michael has a sense of false security. Yes, he thinks Justin has had his last dance. Foolish man!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Azabeth Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2019 2:56 am Title: CHAPTER 1

Absolutely loved the first chapter- your description of Micheals actions and his innner thoughts was really in character and believable for me.

I never personally saw Micheal as being much of a long term thinker- he is clearly more the type to react in the spur of the moment out of anger like you described here, when things don’t go the ways he wants. In the show we frequently see him take advantage of situations to be manipulative or hurtful and cause trouble when the opportunity has been presented to him. And when angry he lashes out causing maximum hurt and disruption for those around him when things don’t go his way, without really considering what he’s doing. 

What always really annoyed me in the show was that Micheal never had to deal with any consequences of his manipulations, inconsiderate behaviour or thoughtless nasty words... so I can’t wait to see where you take this and look forward to Micheal hopefully getting what he deserves for once ;)

Author's Response:

Just saw your review in my junk file. Sorry I haven't responded sooner.

I do plan on Michael not getting away with  it, no problem there. I agree with you how easily Michael always got away with being hateful. The Anniversary Party, Senator Baxter's party, the list goes on. So I have no problem sticking it to him.

Thanks so much for your support,

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2019 1:32 am Title: CHAPTER 1

Very different point of view.  Never heard it from Michael's crazy brain. Cool!

Author's Response:

I never put much past Michael... I think he's capable of all evil.

Thanks for readmg,

HUGS  ~Cathy

 

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2019 3:15 am Title: CHAPTER 1

I love it! I really like the idea of Michael remembering his own failed prom night as the catalyst to his attack on Justin.

Michael’s reaction to watching Brian dance with Justin is a great example of his jealousy.

Thank you so much for taking up the bunny! I promise I will try to be patient while waiting for an update!

*Hugs*

Deb

Author's Response:

Thanks, Deb.  I do hope if they are not able to bring your bunnies back to life, that you have them all written down some place. and can start posting them soon. They are great inspiration. Anyway, I want to thank you again for this great idea you had.

The next chapter is already halfway written, so you won't have too long a wait.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2019 7:46 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

So I didn't read it yet, I want to wait for a couple more chaps so I can enjoy a longer read but I am so effing happy um smiling like an idiot!!! um gonna be praying day and night for the next two chaps! but um probably gonna break and read before your update! happy dancing bitches. love. lori

Author's Response:

Lori, Lori, shame on you! Well then, just sit and wonder...  hehe

Next chapter will be posted soon, darlin.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2019 7:21 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

OMG, this is so good.  I have disliked Mikey in so many stories (and he wasn't a favorite during the show), but now I truly HATE him.  You have written it so well to bring out the emotions perfectly.  Never would have thought of this take on the scene as everyone thought it was Hobbs.  Fantastic idea and writing.

Author's Response:

Thanks Marilynne, it means a lot for your continued support. Our dear, widdle Mikey is so easy to dislike/hate... it was fun to put his evil, jealousy to paper.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2019 6:31 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

Awesome start!! Can't wait for more. Loving it.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Sandy. It's always nice to hear something like that from a great writer as yourself,

HUGS  ~Cathy