Date: Nov 21, 2021 8:03 am Title: Chapter 4
Great story!! And I'm glad that Brian and Justin are now out and proud and in public again, whether Michael likes it or not!!
Date: Apr 28, 2021 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
This was a great story!! I liked how it in this story, Brian and Justin were only apart a week after the Rage party instead of months like in the show. They were both regretting being away from each other and talked it out and got back together - on their own terms!!
Date: Jul 30, 2019 1:18 am Title: Chapter 4
Loved it.... thanks for sharing
Date: Jun 08, 2019 1:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
another of your great stories
Date: Apr 27, 2019 3:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG that was awesome exactly how it should have happened.....
Date: Apr 26, 2019 8:39 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like this vision! I wish Michael had not been forgiven. It's too horrible to wish Justin's death like that
Date: Apr 25, 2019 4:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
I forgot to let you know that I found this an excellent way for Brian to tell how he doesn't want to share Justin: "I don't do jealousy. Jealousy is for lesbians. I, on the other hand, am just territorial. There's a big difference."
And Justin saying that he has the same right: he claims what he wants loud and clear.
Date: Apr 25, 2019 4:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
Fabulous revisiting this troubled part of their story! Steamy atmosphere!
Brian is finally letting Justin "know" what he means to him and they negotiate together the next phase.
Date: Apr 25, 2019 2:47 am Title: Chapter 4
Chelle,
I LOVE this version. Justin punching out the weasel was perfect and deserved. And Brian and Justin getting back together the way they did was great.
Hugs
~Lorie
Date: Apr 25, 2019 2:47 am Title: Chapter 4
Chelle,
I LOVE this version. Justin punching out the weasel was perfect and deserved. And Brian and Justin getting back together the way they did was great.
Hugs
~Lorie
Date: Apr 24, 2019 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love all the incidents you picked and the subtle changes you made that improved them.
Date: Apr 24, 2019 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
We deserve a bigger takedown of dear old fucking Michael!!!!!
Date: Apr 24, 2019 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
What a surprise. Justin hitting Mikey rather than Brian. Love it, it was perfect. Glad that Brian told the reason for it and that he found Justin.
Date: Apr 24, 2019 8:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yeah, Michael got hit, my favorite part.
Date: Apr 24, 2019 8:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
May Brian's wish come true. If only Justin hadn't jumped at staying with Ethan, out of the pan into the fire.