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Reviewer: Louan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2022 8:10 pm Title: Chapter 10

That was a fantastic tale.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2021 2:22 pm Title: Chapter 10

did read it again.. never liked Lindsey even in the show

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2020 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 10

read it again and again

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2019 1:04 am Title: Chapter 1

So glad you have continued the story.  Michael and Lindsay are really stupid.  So glad that they have Cody on their side.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 10

It's good to see that things are better for the gang.  Michael doesn't seem to think before opening his mouth which causes him trouble.  Deb has changed for the better.  Lovely story with a good ending.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 9

Until Michael and Lindsay see the errors of their ways they will sow what they have reapped.The family has gotten closer together and will be enjoying their lives.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 8

How Michael and Lindsay think they were doing that was best for Brian is beyond me.  Maybe the devil can explain it to them.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 3:19 pm Title: Chapter 7

Cutting Lindsay and Michael off as parents is a good idea. Having lied to Brian that he had no rights wasn't good, but Melanie seems to be changing for the better and looking out for the kids.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 1:09 pm Title: Chapter 6

How cruel of Mikey to rant about his mother in such a rediculous fashion.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 3:10 am Title: Chapter 5

Deb made me proud.  She's seeing Mikey for who he is.  Ben has to get better for his son and daughter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 3:01 am Title: Friday pt. 3

Michael and Lindsay tried talking their way out of it, but it didn't work.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 2:54 am Title: Friday pt. 2

Everyone is concerned about Brian and Justin.  But if they stick together everything will turn out fine.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 2:42 am Title: Friday pt. 1

Now that Mel knows what Lindsay and Michael are up to doesn't she wander what where Lindsay got the money.  I mean stealing from Gus should put her away for a long while.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 2:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Where is Michael getting all the money he needs?  I must say that David and Ben would be a good match.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2019 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 10

Brian reflecting on how his life and the lives of those he holds dear have changed shows that at last Brian had found his Happiness and is content to leave the past where it belongs and to just move forward letting his Happiness continue to grow.

Thanks The Wonderful Journey😀

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2019 2:33 pm Title: Chapter 10

What a nice finishing to this story.  It was nice to see what everyone is up to.  Now I am planning to reread this from start to finish because it is so good.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2019 11:51 am Title: Chapter 10

A lovely finish... I love how you worked in the original, 'Consequences of Snooping'... you truly did the plot bunny justice. Deb has such awesome ideas.

I hope Mikey learned to keep his mouth shut now. I do wonder how Lindsay is faring.

It's nice to know David and Ben made a go of it... after the Hank debacle... maybe they are on their way. Did David have plastic surgery?

Yay! Mel's back with Leda! Much prettier than Lindsay.

I like how Justin realized the screaming into the forest would be productive to the kids' sanity and healing.

I'm looking forward to your next story.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2019 9:32 am Title: Chapter 10

Such a wonderful story I have adored every chapter you are a gifted writer thank you for sharing it with us 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2019 7:57 am Title: Chapter 10

Thank you ! I love your story! I hope you will write something else soon.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2019 8:41 pm Title: Chapter 10

Wonderful story.  Thank you for the perfect ending.  Hope you are thinking of something new.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2019 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 10

I enjoyed this a lot.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2019 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for a great story!

Deb L

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2019 1:47 pm Title: Chapter 9

Looks like the family is rearanging itself.  It will be interesting to see where and how things work out.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2019 7:33 am Title: Chapter 9

Glad to see a new update even if he announces the close end of this beautiful story. The whole family is here at the Tribunal and Lindsay and Michael have only what they deserve.

Reviewer: justinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2019 4:52 am Title: Chapter 9

So glad to see Ben and David get a happy ending. Hunter doesn't seem to have any luck with his crushes, first Brian and now Daphne. 😁😉

 

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