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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2019 10:32 pm Title: Friday pt. 3

Great update.  Glad  that they are both in jail, no bail.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2019 8:08 pm Title: Friday pt. 3

Not surprisingly Lindsay was getting paid for lying on her back and moaning in what she thinks is ecstasy but her partner is the need to get out of Siberia quickly with all his parts still intact.

Well since Lindsay can barely draw much less sell art then opening her legs and mouth is the only job she can do...Well?

Melanie is going to be very surprised about the Sam still being in the picture and Lindsay's side job she should also get checked out I doubt Lindsay was Sam's only paid Whore.

So Michael stole from Ben, David and Brian that little weasel has quite the brain when he is being selfish.

Funny how they call Justin the gold digger when they are the one's concerned about money that they either steal or work on their backs for, while Justin is a self-made Millionaire and stands to inherent Millions more?

What Are They Going To Do Now That No One Is Coming To Save Them?

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2019 7:55 am Title: Friday pt. 2

It's good to give us the thoughts of everyone after the arrest of the 2 terrible idiots. Everyone will have to rebuild their family but they know they are all there for each other. Beautiful chapter.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2019 1:31 am Title: Friday pt. 2

Wonderful chapter.  So glad they got arrested.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2019 11:08 pm Title: Friday pt. 2

Getting the thoughts and feelings of some members of this family shows just how much Michael and Lindsay's selfish behavior is effecting everyone.

Mel, Ben, Hunter, Emmett and Drew have their own pain to deal with some because they knew Dumbass Duo for years and others because they got to know them by being around this group.

Mel and Ben will mourn their relationshiand Brian is mourning his friendship with two people who should've valued them but used them for their own selfish demands.

They all need to break plates and scream the pain away while they cry out all the pain.

For Gus and Jenny maybe after crying the y wouldn't mind a water balloon fight?

Something fun and wild to help everyone overcome their sorrow and what better way to not let Michael and Lindsay continue to taint their lives is to laugh and smile.

Today is Darkness and Sorrow, but Tomorrow is Sunlight, Warmth, Laughter and Joy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2019 10:35 pm Title: Friday pt. 2

Thank you for giving us everyones thoughts on what is happening.  Great job.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2019 7:02 am Title: Friday pt. 1

Well the two idiots were arrested. I am curious to see what they will say to defend. Just to know because they will stay in jail for a very long time and the family will be happy without them. Great banner!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2019 12:29 am Title: Friday pt. 1

There's a special place in prison for those two . Wow.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2019 7:11 pm Title: Friday pt. 1

Yes They Have Been Arrested!!

The lengths Michael and Lindsay are willing to go to have Brian focused solely on them is Sad and Horrendous, they are willing to have Justin killed and a child kidnapped goes to show they aren't crazy just Horrible Human Beings who seriously don't deserve Mel, Ben, Gus, Jenny or Brian.

What they do deserve is to see sunlight only through cell bars for the rest of their pathetic lives.

Mel realizing where the blame truly lies and seeking to find her own Happiness while also willing to admit that Brian was never her enemy shows that she is ready to close, lock and bury the door Lindsay would try to use to get back in.

the family will be fine without Michael and Lindsay after they are sent away they will be distant memories.

the door to the past is ready to be locked, deadbolted, cemented in twenty feet of concrete and hurdles in several black holes never to be seen again.

Thanks for the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2019 12:45 pm Title: Friday pt. 1

Yay.  The arrest glad to see how everyone is taking it.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2019 11:43 am Title: Friday pt. 1

Wonderful update.  Now to see what they try to get out of it.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2019 8:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, but where are the two idiots going to find the money? David with Ben and their sons why not, it's a good idea. I look forward to the following Thanks for the update. Glad you're back!

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2019 6:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

So happy to see an update, but not just for the story.  But, with an update, I know you must be feeling at least a little better.  How have the migraines been?  I have been worried about you since I know what they are like.  Mine have not returned and for that I am so happy.    There are several WIPS right now that haven't been updated for a while and another writer told me several of the writers are having RL and health issues.  I love the writers and keep them all in my thoughts and prayers.  As for this story, love it.  Of course, I love when Mikey and Linds are idiots.  The only thing they are worth is that they keep a plot interesting.  LOL  So, please take tare of yourself.  Hugs from Pennsylvania, USA

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2019 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well Worth The Wait!!:)

Michael and Lindsay are going to be so surprised when they realize they are going to lose everything including their Freedom, but the family will be okay and then being gone will hardly be a ripple in anyone's life.

David and Hank sound like they could use some friends and Ben is a good start to that.

The Next few chapters will be very interesting :)

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2019 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

WHOO-HOO!! This made my day! Looking forward to MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2019 3:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well we did get to see what everyone is up to.  Makes looking forward to the next chapter a must have.

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