[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2019 12:31 am Title: Chapter 9
I MISSED THIS! LITERALLY... as well as ACTUALLY! Meaning:
I somehow missed the last update. But, it just gave me a couple of chapters this time.
I just love me some delusional Lindsay and Michael. I could just see the way their faces lit up when Brian walked in to see them... and, I'm actually surprised Brian was concerned about breaking down... if it was me... the minute I would have seen them... I would have exploded... which is pretty much what Brian did!
Funny how Michael got to observe the new family in court... he was replaced by both Ben and David... with each other. I'm surprised he didn't bellow something out in court!
Hehe... even Lindsay's parents and sister had nothing good to say about her. And nobody for her to manipulate at Chez Prison.
I'm going to miss this story. Thanks for the updates,
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2019 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ok this is weird. I was just reading an update on another story and wondering how long it had been since this one was updated and was going to look. But then I refreshed the screen and presto, there was your updated chapter!!
Not sure whether I'm psychic, or matbe just psychotic! LOL.
Thanks for the update hun,
Deb L
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2019 5:45 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great update. Sorry to hear about your family members. Hope they are doing ok. We will always wait for your stories. They are wonderful as is your writing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2019 5:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
I was just rereading this and here you are!!! You, my dear, have definitely been MISSED, but I of all people understand about the continual stress and strain of RL issues. But no matter, because you have come back in the very BEST way possible. Michael and Lindsay should have loads of 'fun' coming their ways in prison if for no other reason than they mentally, emotionally, and attempted to physically hurt children. Even some of the most hardened criminals draw the line at Child abuse/ neglect. I say beat them to within an inch of their worthless lives, allow them to make a full recovery, and then start the cycle again as long as they live. I know, I know... I can be quite vicious when it comes to Michael and Lindsay. In fact, I may have to include that particular scenario in one of my epilogues, LOL
Anyway, I'm so happy that the family remained solid throughout it all, and that the Dumbass Duo had to witness it. Deb might mourn the loss of the son she raised, but she'll not miss the man Michael had become. As for Lindsay's family... well, now they won't have to worry about her AT ALL. In fact, I have a feeling that they will use Lindsay's notoriety to their full advantage, including living high-profile lives so that Lindsay hears about it constantly. I think that coupled with the knowledge that Brian and Justin are together and happy will be the worst kind of punishment for her.
Oh, I'm so HAPPY that you posted this, Darling! Looking forward to MORE!
Well Wishes and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2019 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 9
Thanks For the Update 😃
I was just thinking about re-reading the whole thing over again so a new chapter is a welcome surprise.
Yeah can't control what life throws at you just gotta hold your head up and power through.
Hope Everyone is doing better and you get some rest.
Date: Jul 03, 2019 9:08 am Title: Chapter 8
All children are cared for by loving parents. Craig helped Brian get out of his demons. Michael and Lindsay in shock of Brian's words may be able to realize the atrocity of their actions. Great update thank you.
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2019 12:47 am Title: Chapter 8
Am still loving this story. I know it's hard to care for others 24/7 and will gladly wait for more.
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2019 6:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
So sorry to hear of your RL situations. Hope both are improving daily. As for this chapter, it is wonderful. I love that for once Craig is a good guy and Brian has confronted his demons and put them in their place. Fantastic writing. We will wait for updates. Take care of those you love and yourself.
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2019 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ben is thinking smartly by making sure Hunter has people around him who will look after his well-being while also protecting his heart until someone worthy comes along to help Hunter become even more well-adjusted distinction man anyone would be proud of.
Hunter being adopted by Mel is what he needs to show all mothers aren't like his or Lindsay plus it will help reinforce that he his wanted by everyone while also strengthening the bonds between Gus and Jenny who adore Hunter to pieces.
Hunter needs to see that his disease doesn't define who he is it is what he puts out into the world that defines his character, he has so many options and whichever one he chooses to follow will see him Happy with Success that he earned himself.
Craig was just who Brian needed to help him see that the demons of Michael and Lindsay need to be vanquished and left in the past.
Brian hit Michael and Lindsay right between the eyes with some hard truths and now those ties they used to strangle him are broken forever.
There is No Get Out of Jail card for any of them and all their safety nets are dust.
The Family is moving in without them and soon they will be forgotten like a bad dream.
Thanks For the Update 😃
Date: May 28, 2019 8:17 am Title: Chapter 7
Mel does things well for kids. I'm happy for Ben and David. Good luck with Blacky.
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2019 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad that Ben improved and putting him with David is shear genius. Mel's plans for Jenny and Gus are perfect.
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2019 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wonderful update. So sorry to hear about Blacky. Will keep both of you in my thoughts and prayers. We will be waiting when you are able to write again. Take care.
Date: May 21, 2019 11:50 am Title: Chapter 6
I really enjoyed the small POV from Carl he is often overlooked
Date: May 21, 2019 11:50 am Title: Chapter 6
I really enjoyed the small POV from Carl he is often overlooked
Date: May 21, 2019 7:45 am Title: Chapter 6
Michael does not understand what he did, he is stuck in his delirium, a pity for him. I do not wish him dead but I hope that his fellow prisoners will make him realize what he did and its consequences. Everyone's scared for Ben I hope he'll be fine because Jenny needs him. Are you planning on letting Michael know that David is getting close to Ben, he's going to explode! I can not wait to read what's happening on Lindsay's side. Great update
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
I do hope for Jenny's sake that Ben comes out of it.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
I do hope Michael isn't dead but I hope is head is pounding when he wakes up?
Ahh If Only That Has Also Been Lindsay Too ;)
The kids had to know Jenny is scared along with Gus and everyone else for Ben I do hope he will be waking up soon.
David and Ben got sucked into Michael's world and they were smart enough to get out now they can find Happiness whether it's as a couple of just friends they will know that loving someone isn't a mistake the mistake is pushing it away because of past hurt.
Michael like Lindsay is just don't a minor bump and in time everyone will move past this pain and see that Happiness isn't a passing momemt, it is a Lifetime of Joy and Laughter with very few dark days.
Everything Carl thought about Brian and Michael is accurate Michael abused everyone around him because he is Selfish and Self-Absorbed, Vic was the best Father Figure Michael had but instead of embracing and cherishing that time they had together he saw it as a burden, while Brian cherished every second Vic spent with him as more valuable than gold.
Brian took crumbs and turned them into diamonds with sheer determination to never let anyone beat him down again.
While Michael took diamonds and turned them into o crap simply by being a lazy, pathetic, disloyal son, friend and father, he was given every advantage to succeed and wasted it (Just Like Lindsay) by expecting everything to just be handed to him for being born.
Michael and Lindsay were so determined to make Brian love them Forever that they didn't care about the collateral damage they were doing and even after being caught they are looking for excuses to get out of jail so they can stalk Brian again, they don't care about Mel, Ben, Gus, Jenny just what they Want, Crave, Need, Desire, Covet.
Thanks for the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great update. Ben and David would make a nice couple. Imagine Mikey when he found out! Fireworks!!!! Fantastic writing. Glad you have a new story coming, also.
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2019 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
Deb finally cut the last tie she had to Michael and now he has no more strings to pull anymore he is Really, Truly On His Own just like Lindsay.
I was not expecting this about Ben I hope he will be okay cause Hunter can't lose anyone else and this family isn't ready to let him go either.
Justin is right they all do need a break.
Thanks for the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2019 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. Yeah, Debbie for finally telling he idiot off. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2019 1:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow. Deb really let Michael have it. Bravo. Ben needs support and I hope things turn out better for him.
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2019 8:30 am Title: Friday pt. 3
This is great! Can we have the court and stuff for more of the smackdown!
Thanks
Deb
Date: May 10, 2019 6:57 am Title: Friday pt. 3
Well the 2 idiots are put in front of their damage and they always want to justify them! Michael who stole Ben, Brian and David calls Justin a gold digger but he's a shit seeker! They will languish in prison and it's a shame for Gus and Jenny. Carl is so devastated I feel bad for him when he has to explain to the family their macabre motivations. Debbie and Brian are going to be worse than Mel and Ben who have already broken their relationship. I can not wait for more!
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2019 1:15 am Title: Friday pt. 3
No wiggling out of this for Mikey and Lindz.
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2019 11:38 pm Title: Friday pt. 3
WHOO-HOO!!! Dumb and Dumber are going down under... and we're NOT talking about Australia, even if they are a couple of saltwater crocodiles. To think that they wouldn't be thoroughly investigated, while they are sitting in JAIL, is just the epitome of stupid. I laughed when they tried to play innocent, especially Lindsay. That web she was trying to weave just kept getting destroyed at every turn. I guffawed when her parents' lawyer revealed that he was only there to find out what she was being charged with. OUCH! That must have hurt, knowing that she was completely exposed, and unable to refute even one accusation WITH a lawyer present. Should be interesting to see what she and her cohort in cuntery tries to come up with now to justify their actions.
Poor Carl! Not only was he hearing just how ignorant Michael and Lindsay were firsthand, but now he's going to have to explain it all to Deb, if he wants any peace. Hopefully the fallout from this will be minimal to the family as a whole, but especially for Brian, Gus, and Jenny. I think Ben and Mel have already resolved that they married the WRONG people within themselves.
Great Writing and Looking forward to MORE!
HUGS,
~Nichelle