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Date: Apr 16, 2019 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Back and Forth

I agree, Justin is depressed.  His mother is clueless.  Poor Brian wants to help but doesn't know how.   Where is Alex when you need him?



Author's Response: Everybody's having trouble.

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Date: Apr 16, 2019 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Choices and Outcomes

Poor Justin.  He can't win for losing.  His mother is trying to keep out of it and that might not be a good thing.  Love how you explained why Brian doesn't want to say that he loves Justin.  Am glad that he admits that he cares.



Author's Response: Justin is in a very difficult position.

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Date: Apr 16, 2019 2:37 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Bottoming Out

This has taken a downward turn.  But you have to see that wherever you take it will be interesting.



Author's Response: I hope so.

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Date: Apr 16, 2019 3:29 am Title: Chapter 5 - Getting On With It

oops.



Author's Response: LOL

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Date: Apr 16, 2019 3:26 am Title: Chapter 4 - No Going Back

Justin made his choice, but is it too late?  Loving where you're taking this.



Author's Response: Thanks so much.

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Date: Apr 16, 2019 2:34 am Title: Chapter 3 - Reunion ... of Sorts

It's nice that Brian asked him to come home, especially when his father is about to betray him.



Author's Response: Yes it is.

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Date: Apr 16, 2019 2:27 am Title: Chapter 2 - Fitting In

So Brian is Justin's brother.  That's interesting.  



Author's Response: Is he?

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Date: Apr 15, 2019 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Settling

Truer words were never spoken.



Author's Response: Glad you think so.

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Date: Apr 14, 2019 3:25 pm Title: Chapter 24 - He Came, He Saw, He Ran

Thanks, I really enjoyed this!

Deb



Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting.

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Date: Apr 13, 2019 8:49 am Title: Chapter 24 - He Came, He Saw, He Ran

It could have happened so much and Justin would have been destroyed. Fortunately Brian has succeeded so that everyone shows him their support and their friendship. It's a shame that Craig is not really able to evolve, he was close !! Another great story. Thank you.




Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm gad you enjoyed this story.

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