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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2019 9:45 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Getting On With It

Too bad for Justin: he really has not a good week, but his father is the worst as he can't understand Justin.



Author's Response: Craig is unredeemable.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2019 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 4 - No Going Back

So sad, but there nothing Brian could do to change Justin's mind.

I hope Craig won't try another hit and run on Brian's car.



Author's Response: Not at this point.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2019 11:06 am Title: Chapter 3 - Reunion ... of Sorts

My heart wants Justin to say "yes", but I don't think he will; he is too low for that and he doesn't trust Brian to act differently as before, which is why he left him in the first place.

Craig being aware of Brian's presence can't be good.



Author's Response: Nobody's happy.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2019 10:49 am Title: Chapter 2 - Fitting In

It's horrible to see that nobody really cares for Justin, except Brian and his mother.

I don't know why I feel that this meeting could be the last for them.



Author's Response: Justin truly feels abandoned.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2019 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1 - Settling

What a dark and sad beginning; I can feel how Justin is down and off; gone the fighty sunshinning twinkie.

It's one thing to leave Brian, then Ethan, but going back to his father is the worst thing to do.



Author's Response: But what other choice does Justin have?

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2019 2:50 am Title: Chapter 24 - He Came, He Saw, He Ran

Wow, great story.  Terrific writing.  Thanks for a happy ending.  Who needs someone like Craig in their life?  



Author's Response: Exactly! Craig doesn't deserve to have a son like Justin.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2019 5:12 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Settling

Great first chapter.  Something so different.  Can't wait to see where you take them.  Sorry, I am just starting to read this story.  RL even gets in the way of readers.  Wonderful writing.  May not review until the end as I sometimes do since once I do start reading,, I have to keep at it.  Off to chapter 2



Author's Response: Thanks for giving this a try. Hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2019 2:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Settling

That happens sometimes but a story is still a good story even death fics.  Especially is an author worked hard to write it.



Author's Response: Very true.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2019 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1 - Settling

I am so glad you finished this story.  I wish I could have read the original to compare.  I wonder if she decided to delete because of reviews.  It's a shame when things like that happen.



Author's Response: There was controversy because her story kept Brian and Justin apart.+

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2019 12:49 am Title: Chapter 24 - He Came, He Saw, He Ran

Craig should have been more comfortable, after all Ben(a Professor), Ted(an accountant), Melanie (a lawyer) were there.  People he could relate to.  Wouldn't it be funny if Vic recognized Craig from his younger days?



Author's Response: lol Vic and Craig - that would be momentous.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 23 - A Family Dinner

That could have gone worse.  Much worse.



Author's Response: Definitely.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Normal

Normal isn't what it use to be.  



Author's Response: That's right, but can Craig really accept that.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Standing Up and Backing Down

What an amazing turn-a-round.  Craig has been redeemed.



Author's Response: Perhaps.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Face to Face

Wow!  Brian told Craig the truth and Craig couldn't take it.  At least no blood was shed.



Author's Response: lol No blood - yet.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 19 - A Father and Child Reunion

Does Craig know what normal is?  He's a very selfish person.



Author's Response: Highly questionable that Craig understands normal. It is only what he thinks is normal.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Realization

This is going to be so hard.  All Justin wants is to be happy and all Brian wants is Justin.



Author's Response: But can they have that?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Intense!

So Craig is going to be furious.  He's the only one who doesn't want Justin in the Pitts.  That should tell you something.



Author's Response: It says everything.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Bittersweet

At least they've admitted they're not happy without each other.



Author's Response: That's a start.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Home

It's good that Justin made his choice and it's one I like.  But how will Craig take it?



Author's Response: That is the million dollar question.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Repentance

Oh my.  I was hoping for Emmett and you gave me the whole gang!  Best chapter ever!!!



Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 5:57 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Intervention

Darn, I was hoping that Emmett would show up.  If Michael said something stupid, he could pop him in the head.  Love how much Gus means to Justin.  If anyone can get through to Justin it's Gus.  Maybe Molly can get through to her mother?



Author's Response: I'd love to see Emmett pop Michael one. lol

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Falling into Place

I'm glad that Brian called Michael out on why he didn't want to talk with Justin.  Ben certainly has Mikey's number.  Fun chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks, hope you like the rest of the story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Hard Decisions

I think Justin is finally thinking.  At least he's certain about Andy.   At least Gus and Molly are helping whether they know it or not.                                                      



Author's Response: We'll see how it goes.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Arrangements by Rage

Yay for Molly.  I think you've hit on the perfect solution.



Author's Response: Hope so. lol

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Planting the Seeds

I'm so happy to see Emmett helping.  He might be able to keep Michael in line.



Author's Response: Emmett is always a ray of sunshine.

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