Date: Jun 14, 2021 6:40 pm Title: Chapter 10
I kind of had the feeling something was going to happen to Joan. I'm just so glad that she and Brian were able to resolve their differences and become a real family again.
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2019 5:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh no, that's not how I expected this to end. I have tears in my eyes. After so many years of mutual hate, they have made peace and they should have more years to share.
Like I wrote earlier: "real-life"; this is also part of it.
One positive part: Taylor and his "Bi": delightful how Brian behaves with this little sunshine.
Author's Response: It is sad that they won't have more time, but the last years were good ones.
Date: Apr 19, 2019 5:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love when Brian storms into Kinnetik and "plays" with Ted. Such great friends and business partners.
It's good for Bree to spend some time with Joan.
Author's Response: Brian and Ted are perfect foils for each other.
Date: Apr 19, 2019 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
These guys are hot and insatiable.
Bree and Riley could become a great team: he helps her feel the music and she helps him getting back to playing the piano.
Author's Response: Bree and Riley will help each other.
Date: Apr 19, 2019 5:32 pm Title: Chapter 7
One thing I love about this series is that you don't sugar-coat life; there are words that hurt, like what Jennifer told Brian. Even with the best intentions, people can be hurt by simple words.
One other is the way you make Justin blush with Jennifer's comments on her honeymoon.
It's like "real life": with love, fuckups, arguments, ...
Author's Response: Thank you. That's probably the best comment we can receive.
Date: Apr 19, 2019 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
Whoa, Mel and Brian being civil and almost at peace! That's nice to read; finally after all these years, they are starting to act like adults towards each other.
Author's Response: It's about time, but it may not last. lol Old habits die hard.
Date: Apr 19, 2019 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
It's great to see the family is doing well and Lindsay's life is starting to shape up smoothly. The girls might help a bit.
Author's Response: It's nice that Lindsay has found some stability.
Date: Apr 19, 2019 4:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
The scene with Bree not wanting to reveal her secret with Ashley is very emotional. She is so loyal to her friend that she can't even tell her fathers what is bothering her. Until Brian breaks the dam.
Author's Response: Brian and Bree have a special bond all the way through our Sunshine Files.
Date: Apr 19, 2019 4:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
What an amazing and impressive site these "Ajanta Caves"!
I feel for Brian having to deal with such request from Gus.
Author's Response: It would be hard for any parent.
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2019 1:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
A sad ending to a wonderful chapter. It's a good thing the family is there to help. Love Taylor's appearance in this story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2019 1:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
Love the Brian and Schmidt moments. They are always fun. Joan has changed a lot thanks to Bree.
Author's Response: I love Brian and Ted together too.
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2019 11:41 am Title: Chapter 8
We've seen most of the family except for the family of the day. So far you haven't missed anyone.
Author's Response: lol It's a lot of people.
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2019 11:25 am Title: Chapter 7
Deb and Jennifer do seem to say things that hurt Brian. Justin can make Brian feel better but they have company.
Author's Response: The women never seem to think about the consequences of their words.
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2019 11:14 am Title: Chapter 6
Brian and Mel never seem to get along. I think that's going to change. Everyone seems to be wanting to attend the symphony.
Author's Response: Brian and Mel are so much alike that they find it hard to get along. They both want to be in charge.
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2019 11:00 am Title: Chapter 5
All the girls seemed taken with Charles.
Author's Response: He is quite suave.
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2019 2:28 am Title: Chapter 4
Brian is a genius. Bree will be very happy. Emmett and Drew having their party on the lane is fantastic.
Author's Response: Always knew Brian was a genius. lol
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2019 2:17 am Title: Chapter 3
Trips to Ireland and the sympathy. Bree will enjoy getting culture.
Author's Response: Bree will enjoy any new experience.
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2019 2:07 am Title: Chapter 2
Bree wants to visit Ireland. So do I. Gus wants to go to India. They do have ancient buildings in Ireland.
Author's Response: Both have ancient buildings.
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2019 1:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Brian actually thinks he's getting his loft back? We shall see. So Bree has decided on Ireland. Technically speaking she doesn't have a drop of Irish blood in her.
Author's Response: It doesn't matter that Bree doesn't have Irish blood, her Dada does.
Date: Apr 13, 2019 7:47 am Title: Chapter 2
Ireland is way less risky than India and culturally quite similar to USA.
Rocky time ahead of the family.
Author's Response: Yes, perhaps so.
Date: Apr 13, 2019 12:54 am Title: Chapter 10
Sorry blurry eyes forgot their rating.
Author's Response: Hm, is that a good thing?
Date: Apr 13, 2019 12:53 am Title: Chapter 10
Wow, this was fantastic. Really was not expecting the ending. Had to get the tissue box out once again. No words to say how wonder your writing is. Can't wait for the next story.
Author's Response: Sorry this story caused you to use so many tissues, but glad you could feel the emotion. Thanks so much.
Date: Apr 12, 2019 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, another part!!! So happy! Brian seems to be in a weird mood: is Bree's project bothering him? Maybe he could find out interesting things about his family, something worthy. It's not because one person is mean that the whole family is this way.
Author's Response: Brian has very mixed feelings about his family. It's always a touchy subject.
[Report This]Date: Apr 12, 2019 3:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you once again for making my day with a new Sunshine Files. First chapter is great. Love the interaction with Brian & Ted. They make me laugh. Wonderful writing as usual by both of you. Off to read again. Will probably wait until the end to review again.
Author's Response: Glad you are happy to see a new file, and that you enjoy our versions of Brian and Ted.