[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2019 1:51 am Title: Ghosts of the Past
Poor Gus! How can Brian ever explain to him why everyone else has aged except for him and Justin?
Uh oh! Now there’s a gorgeous tutor on the scene and Brian is reacting! Obviously his heart is breaking with how he now feels wrong about loving Justin. The age difference is much bigger now. I hate to admit it, but Brian shouldn’t feel guilty about reacting to the tutor; everything is so different now. But how will he explain it to Justin and Gus?
At least Justin seems to have made a friend with his bodyguard. Lex seems like a nice guy, but who knows since he also seems to be falling for Justin!
So sad to see that Brian and Justin both know that Brian’s feelings have changed.
OMG! Hobbs killed Daphne!!!???
Justin figuring out that Brian has already let go of Justin because he has thought he was dead for so many years now is so heartbreaking! Okay! I admit it! You made me cry!!!!
Can’t wait to see where this goes!
Deb [Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2019 1:18 am Title: Home Sweet Prison
Gus' reaction to Brian's beard is so adorable and Justin's comment is very funny!
Too bad Brian couldn't get away from Lindsay!
Poor Justin being stuck in that facility! At least he seems to be taking everything pretty well.
Heading off for the next chapter!
Deb
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2019 12:29 am Title: Hello Again
Love everyone's reactions to finding out that Justin and Gus are not only alive, but they haven't even aged in almost 17 years!
Smart move by Justin getting them to release Gus to Brian and only Brian! Someone needs to bitchslap Lindsay! Several times preferably!
Off to the next chapter!
Deb
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2019 12:18 am Title: Nightmare
I love Flight of the Navigator! It was one of my kids' favorite movies when they were little. Can't wait to see how you adapt QaF with it. Very interesting start!
I do have a question, though... why is Justin trying to get to the second floor when Brian's loft is on the 4th floor? Just curious.
Deb
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2019 2:46 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
Hope, its does get better. You written good. Don't like tutor Travis and Lex. Justin & Brian's relationship, love is more than some physical attraction. More than beauty. Yes "IT'S Never over". Gus, mostly Brian needs Justin back in his life.
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2019 2:10 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
So sad about Daph. Brian and Justin are changing. Will things get back to where they were?
Date: Apr 17, 2019 2:35 am Title: Ghosts of the Past
Time changes everything. But, on a cherrier note, ha, there's someone in the wings waiting for Brian. Lex is too old for Justin though.
It sounds like it's over and done with. The final good-bye. Saddening but understandable. Either they pass through some time warp where things go back to the way they were or Justin ages seventeen years. Won't change their non feelings though unless Brian's having one hell of a dream or reaction to bad drugs.
Of course Hobbs would more or less get away with murder.
Date: Apr 17, 2019 1:54 am Title: Home Sweet Prison
Didn't care much for this chapter.
If he isn't a prisoner why such a strict schedule? Will the do something to him if he refuses to talk, answer questions? If they want his co-operation you don't think he should be given what he wants?
Lex Luther? Really?
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2019 12:37 am Title: Ghosts of the Past
Wow, this was fantastic, but I had to get out the tissue box. Brian and Justin not the same breaks my heart , but I trust that you will do what you can to make it better. I don't know why their story affects me the way it does, but it is the same with any story where they have their troubles. Amazing writing.
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2019 4:21 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
What a sad chapter...
Date: Apr 13, 2019 5:50 am Title: Home Sweet Prison
Dang poor justin looks like he's going to be there awhile.
Date: Apr 12, 2019 2:51 pm Title: Home Sweet Prison
Poor Justin. This place sounds horrible. TAG
[Report This]Date: Apr 12, 2019 2:18 pm Title: Home Sweet Prison
Love it. Cool. These men in black are kind creepy except Lex. I like their conversation. Justin's stubborn, hope he gave them a good long run for answers. Kudos for your writing. :)
Date: Apr 12, 2019 7:35 am Title: Nightmare
Very interesting start... TAG
Date: Apr 12, 2019 12:44 am Title: Home Sweet Prison
Oh, wow, this is really getting good. Love it. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Apr 11, 2019 10:40 pm Title: Home Sweet Prison
This is getting spoky in a men in black way.
[Report This]Date: Apr 11, 2019 5:02 am Title: Hello Again
This is something new. The mystery attached to Justin and Gus disappearence. I am totally hooked. Justin giving himself up for Gus safe with Brian (hope Brian will get Justin back too.) Lindsay seems lost her mind.
You are good ! Excited to read MORE..... :)
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you're liking it.
Date: Apr 10, 2019 5:14 pm Title: Hello Again
very intrigued! thanks for posting the 2nd chapter so fast!
Author's Response:
Thank you, chapter 3 is up now. It took a bit longer to get out than I planned.
Date: Apr 10, 2019 3:22 am Title: Hello Again
So different and exciting. Not sure what they have planned for Justin, but thankfully he's thinking of Gus being taken care of. I wouldn't turn him over to Lindsay either.
Am so looking forward to the next chapter. Twilight Zone indeed.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope it lives up to such nice words. Lindsay won't be all bad but she's not a saint either.
Date: Apr 10, 2019 3:03 am Title: Nightmare
Im a bit lost. Seventeen years past but Justin and Gus didn't age?
I enjoyed the chapter but was confused. On to chapter 2.
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2019 2:20 am Title: Hello Again
Oh, wow, this is great. I, also, never saw Flight of the Navigator, so everything is new to me. Terrific writing.
Author's Response:
Great. Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2019 2:11 am Title: Hello Again
Love where you are taking this. Don't know the movie you basing it on, but who wouldn't want to stay young.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Well, Brian would but he's not the one that is young. Wonder if he's gonna have issues with his partner looking so very much younger than himself.
Date: Apr 10, 2019 1:51 am Title: Hello Again
OK you got me hooked, can't wait for the next chapter. Very good start.
Author's Response:
YAY! Thank you so much. New Chapter is up.
Date: Apr 09, 2019 9:58 pm Title: Nightmare
Well I'm hooked. I can't wait to see how this turns out.
Hugs,
Jessica
Author's Response:
I'm so glad, I hope I don't disappoint.