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Reviewer: justinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2022 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1- Hi My Name Is Brian and I'm An Alcoholic

still loving this story. such a testament of the strength of spirit and really good friends



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I have really enjoyed writing this story.  I typically write post 513 stories and while this doesn't really fit that bill, it is an AU with a lot of cannon thrown in.  It has been a nice challenge.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2022 2:31 am Title: Chapter 64- Can The Truth Set You Free

This is such an interesting story aside from the Brian and Justin dynamic I am learning so much about the awesome work of AA



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I have done a lot of research into the AA model while writing it.  I'm a professional counselor by training, but have not done a lot of work with addictions.  I'm pleased that you find the story not only interesting but enjoyable.  

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2021 3:12 pm Title: Chapter 63- Confession is Good for the Soul

Oh dam the chapter has finished just when Justin arrives ???? I have to wait for the conversation 



Author's Response:

Yep-  waiting is what this story has been about- lol.  I talked to my hubby and daughter about the story and they couldn't beleive that folks were reading this ( almost 300K) and they just had their first kiss.  I guess it is a testament to the story.  Thanks for reading and commenting. 2 weeks and another chapter will be posted.

Reviewer: muddor Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2021 2:00 pm Title: Chapter 63- Confession is Good for the Soul

I still SO love this story!



Author's Response:

Blushing.  Thank you for your kind words.  I love it too and have always felt that Brian's drinking should have been addressed.  Now, I'm doing so, but we still have a lot to explore.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2021 10:26 am Title: Chapter 63- Confession is Good for the Soul

I expected something like this. Please not too much angst. 



Author's Response:

Not too much angst-  You've been reading my stories for a while, but I promise just the right amount.  And who knows, there may be a sequel to the story.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2021 3:25 am Title: Chapter 62- Oh What a Tangled Web Weave, When First We Practice to Deceive

Tough situation, but Justin's sponsor may be able to help them sort it out.



Author's Response:

A sponsor is there to help over the rough patches, so let's hope that is true

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2021 3:24 am Title: Chapter 61- Nuts, Bolts, and Screws

Excellent!!! I didn't see this one coming!



Author's Response:

It is nice to know that I can surprise my readers.  Thanks for all your comments and support.  Happy New Year

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2021 2:44 pm Title: Chapter 62- Oh What a Tangled Web Weave, When First We Practice to Deceive

Oh dear I hope Justin and Brian have a honest discussion soon. I do think Justin maybe right that Brian will be resistant to a new sponsor 



Author's Response:

It is a real difficult situation for both of them.  Brian likes having Justin in his life and may not trust another sponsor, but Justin can't have a relationship with Brian and be his sponsor.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2021 1:31 pm Title: Chapter 61- Nuts, Bolts, and Screws

Oh dear although I am glad they are moving forward I worry about them taking away from the sponsorship aspect of the alcohol withdrawal



Author's Response:

The kiss was great but there are still foils to deal with.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2021 5:58 am Title: Chapter 61- Nuts, Bolts, and Screws

Hang in there Sunshine. So love this.



Author's Response:

Justin has to figure out what he is going to do, but so does Brian.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2021 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 60

I am fuming. How dare Michael even bring up saving Brian as a kid, that was just the vilest of moves. And don't get me started on Mel and Linz, they want to see Brian fail so bad. I would love Gus to hear that... I mean in reality I wouldn't, but in this story I would like him to see how disgusting his moms are being.

Author's Response:

Gus is team Kinney all the way.  I think given the chance, he would be with Brian more, but in this story, he's firmly in his mother's clutches.  Thankfully, Brian is working really hard to build a strong relationship with his son.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2021 6:44 am Title: Chapter 60

Shame the girls aren't rooting for Brian.  Mikey seemes to feel that his wants and needs are more important than anyone elses.



Author's Response:

Michael does believe that the world revolves around him and still can't see why Brian isn't on his side.  As for the girls, they only see Brian for his money ( Mel) and the fantasy of family ( Linds).  No wonder they don't see him changing.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2021 4:39 am Title: Chapter 60

Won't those bitches be upset when Brian suceeds?  Michael is like a mosquito, he needs repellent, or a good slap!

Thanks,

Deb L.

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2021 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 60

Wow…with friends like those who need’s enemies! I expect all 3 could use a good enema.

Author's Response:

LOL.   They could use something.  They are so self absorbed that they don't see how Brian is changing and has changed. They are still treating him like the old Brian.  

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2021 9:18 pm Title: Chapter 60

Hey Sandy, loved the chapter!

First, forgive my expression but Michael, as always, is as useful as an empty douche. I'm glad Brian has cut ties with him. Yet, I'm quite annoyed that no one, and I mean NO ONE called him on his reference to Brian's childhood trauma. At the very least, Debbie should have issued a head slap that would've had the idiot fall out of his chair. What an asinine PITA!

I was incredibly impressed with Emmett and his date though. That made up for the dinner episode. Then Debbie finally telling Michael to fix his own issues was the icing on the cake. 

As for Broomhilda and the human BROOM she rides.... Talk about cussing out characters! I was mentally punching the witches in their throats. I can't wait for their plans both personally and professionally to fail!

Excellent chapter!!!

~Nichelle 



Author's Response:

Nichelle:

 

Debbie has decided that Michael can fight his own battles, but she isn't sticking her neck out to help either.  As for Mel and Linds, they are still so focused on themselves that anyone out of their orbit doesn't really count.  so glad you are still reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2021 12:33 am Title: Chapter 59- The "Dinner"

Go, Gus! Way to rock that dinner party! TAG



Author's Response:

Go Gus-  He done well- like 

Deb said.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2021 3:04 pm Title: Chapter 59- The "Dinner"

That went pretty well considering Mel and Lindsay were there. And, Mickael didn't show up to make a scene.

Debbie actually understands what Brian is going through and is quite supportive.



Author's Response:

I decided not to put too much drama in the chapter

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2021 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 41- Progress

I just started reading the story 2 days ago and dint realize you started writing it 2 years. That explains a lot of the inconsistencies. I love the story but it’s a bit confusing. Some chapters it appears that Mikey is married to Ben but the last chapter mentioned Mikey using Brian to pick up tricks. Also it’s only been mentioned once that Gus has a sister...but she’s never at Debs and it doesn’t appear Mikey is the father. Finally, Brian wrecked his Jeep and bought a new one a month ago, but this last chapter mentions Brian picking up Gus in a BMW.
It’s just little things that I guess got forgotten along the way.

Author's Response:

Mikey can still be married to Ben but Ben isn't mentioned as he doesn't really enter in the story.  Just because he is married, doesn't mean he can't trick.  AS for the sister, I can see that would be inconsistent-she is never mentioned.  Brian wrecking his Jeep was in the first chapter and I don't remember him buying a new jeep but he did buy a new car.  I apologize if it is a little confusing.  Yes, I have been writing it for several years.  I try to update every two weeks at this point and hope to finish it by the end of the year. There have been times that the posts have been a month or longer in updating.  I will try to go back and eliminate some of the inconsistencies that you pointed out and I do appreciate the feedback.  Otherwise, I hope you are enjoying the story.  

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2021 4:59 pm Title: Chapter 59- The "Dinner"

I am so proud of the way Brian handled dinner, and that he stuck up for himself regarding being just the fun dad. Linds needs to make up her damn mind. And well-done Tad for telling Mel exactly what a sponsor is, trust her to try and make it something negative.

SO MUCH CHEMISTRY

Author's Response:

Lindsay doesn't really like that Brian is changing his life.  She likes when she could feel superior.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2021 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 59- The "Dinner"

Mel and Lindsey cant stand that Brian is successfully changing his life. I'm sure you will have them looking for trouble. Will repercussions be heard from mikey not being invited. At least Deb understands. More soon please. 



Author's Response:

Absolutely.  Lindsay doesn't like to see that Brian is changing his life and Gus is really bonding with him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2021 5:00 pm Title: Chapter 59- The "Dinner"

Brian is doing well with the help of Ted and Emmett.  The meal was wonderful and Gus did a great job.  I am so enjoying this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I know that Brian is really proud of Gus and he is proud of himself for moving forward with his life.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2021 3:31 pm Title: Chapter 58- Dinner and a Show

Ahhhh I hate catching up with you lol. Cannot believe what a cow Linds was about Gus cooking, and I can't wait to see how well he handles it. I NEED SOME KISSES SOON hahaha :)

Author's Response:

Kisses-  hmmmm-  maybe,  maybe-   we shall see

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2021 3:12 pm Title: Chapter 57- Fear of Rejection

So many emotions here, I am sad he didn't correct himself when he said Justin was there because he promised to be his sponsor and not because he wanted him there. But so hap he is agreeing to the dinner ahhh.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2021 3:21 pm Title: Chapter 58- Dinner and a Show

Looking forward to the dinner. Have a feeling Mike will crash it. 



Author's Response:

We will have to see what happens with Mikey.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2021 3:20 pm Title: Chapter 58- Dinner and a Show

Too bad Daphne isn't present; she would torture Justin about Brian, a lot more than Molly is doing. It's pretty obvious who the muse could be.

Lindsay is as despicable as always. I can't wait to read how Melanie will react.



Author's Response:

Daphne would be fun in the story, but I think Molly may still have  roll to play.

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