You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2021 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 26- Finding Brian Kinney

Ohhhh Lindsay is gonna get stunnnnnnnnnnng.

Author's Response:

Lindsay is not happy

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2021 2:26 pm Title: Chapter 25- A Free Evening

Brian is changing so much before our very eyes, and I think he's going to get scared soon. But it's so good for him.

Author's Response:

Well the story is taking a long time to write, but really it has only been about 2 months or so of sobriety

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2021 2:14 pm Title: Chapter 24- Sex, Drugs and Rock and Roll

Justin is giving him such wonderful advice. I think it was a great choice he made not to go to the club.

Author's Response:

Brian really wanted to believe he could go to Baylon, but i the end he decided that it was not a good idea.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2021 9:46 am Title: Chapter 23- Possessions

Michael is an inconsiderate asshole. Who would do that to their friend?

Author's Response:

Michael is only concerned with his needs.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 51-Conversations with Friends

Loved Brian's explanation to Gus about why reading is good. 🙂 TAG



Author's Response:

reading can take you to so many places-  like fixing what silly writers did to a great tv show. LOL

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 5:21 pm Title: Chapter 22- Celebration Kinney Style

Your writing has me smiling so much.

Author's Response:

thank you for the compliment.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 5:04 pm Title: Chapter 21-Support

I LOVE THIS TWIST, ARGHHHHHHH

Author's Response:

I occasionally do write a ciffhanger.  I'm not very good with those, usually provide some closure to the chapter.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 20- Worthiness

I hope he listened to what Justin said. he's going to have lots to think about tonight.

I so need to go to sleep but I can not stop reading.

Author's Response:

I'm flattered that you are finding the story so mesmerizing.  It's up to 52 chapters and still not done.  

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 20- Worthiness

I hope he listened to what Justin said. he's going to have lots to think about tonight.

I so need to go to sleep but I can not stop reading.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 19- Sharing His Success

You have summed them all up so bloody well here, and hearing Justin hit the nail on the head with his friends and how Brian feels about himself is amazing.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your sentiment.  I'm enjoying exploring these characters.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 4:02 pm Title: Chapter 18- Progress

I am so proud of Brian right now. He's realising so many things. And I think, in the end he will realise his true friends are Ted, Emmett and their partners, and Justin too :)

Author's Response:

Brian is coming along nicely in his sobriety journey.  He is learning who his friends are.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 3:44 pm Title: Chapter 17- Best Friends or Worst Enemies

Ted is the best

Author's Response:

Ted is a star in this story.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 16- Temptation

WHAT IS HE GOING TO SAY, AHHH! Also how rude of Mikey to keep showing up. Does he not learn?

Author's Response:

Micahel is the epitome of "its all abouut me".  He won't learn.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 15- Camaraderie or Habit?

I hope he trusts Justin enough to tell his friends what he's doing. I bet Michael won't be supportive...

Author's Response:

He trusts Justin and he's put a lot of thought into their friendship.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 2:35 pm Title: The 64,000 Dollar Question

Oooh, I was worried Brian would get angry there and tell him to leave him alone.

Author's Response:

Brian respects Justin.  He might not like what he says,but he wil listen.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 2:23 pm Title: Chapter 13- My Son Gus

I am so enjoying Ted and Brian's friendship blossom like this. And way to go Brian for wanting more involvement in Gus's life. Watch the munchers be mean about it.

Author's Response:

Ted has alwasy had Brian's back.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 2:12 pm Title: Chapter 12- The Road Less Taken

I loved how he said he can't deal with Deb's love right now, he's right, it would be intense and she'll probably make it about her.

Author's Response:

Deb means well, sometimes, but she can be overwhelmimg too.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 6:03 am Title: Chapter 11- Conversations

The questions Justin is asking are amazing and thought-provoking. And so much of what he's saying makes sense about the way Brian behaves.

Author's Response:

Justin has been where Brian is and understands what he is dealing with.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2021 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 50- Amends 2

Amends Jean important step. Good job Brian. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2021 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 49

Just love their budding friendship. 🙂 TAG

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2021 3:19 pm Title: Chapter 10- No More Secrets

Justin is an amazing sponsor. I love all the advice he's giving Brian. He's making Brian really think about his choices.

Author's Response:

Justin erally wants to help Brian and it shows by their conversation.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2021 3:19 pm Title: Chapter 10- No More Secrets

Justin is an amazing sponsor. I love all the advice he's giving Brian. He's making Brian really think about his choices.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2021 3:02 pm Title: Chapter 9- Two Weeks Sober

I fucking hate Lindsay, she really undermines Brian.
I love how he's chosen to trust Emmett, I think he is a good friend and will continue to support and put Michael in his place without telling Brian's secret.

Author's Response:

Lindsay is another character I don't like.  Emmett is a quiet, introspective man who is very loyal.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2021 2:50 pm Title: Chapter 8- First Trial

I am so happy he made that call to Justin.

Author's Response:

He's beginning to realize Justin is there for him

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2021 2:01 pm Title: Chapter 7- Mikey's Lament

How dare Michael do that, and in front of Gus too.

Author's Response:

Michael is very self centered.  I'm not a fan of his.

You must login (register) to review.