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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 5:00 pm Title: Brotherly Love and Sisterly Fury

Ewwwww!!! WTF!!!!!

Michael screwed around with his half brother who he gave Anal Warts?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!!!

Oh My Gawdddd!!!! I think I am going to be sick!

The Best Sex Of His Life?! With Michael Grassi?! 

Has George Never Had Sex Before?!

Won't Daddy be surprised when he finds out how close his boys really are lol

Yes a hotel is exactly where George, his big brother and their Daddy should stay until Hell Freezes Over or the money runs out.

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 12:59 pm Title: Brotherly Love and Sisterly Fury

OMG!  I think I need a list of characters, nicknames so I can tell who is who and relationships with others.  Just how is George related to Michael?

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 11:41 pm Title: The Jewel in the Crown and Like Father Like Sons...

Great chapters.  Little by little I am catching up on my reading,  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2019 5:24 am Title: The Jewel in the Crown and Like Father Like Sons...

Nice! So right, Like Father Like Son. Would like see Michel & Lyndsay fuming, foaming face when they know about Jenny, especially that Brian knew it already.

In Qaf, Directors messed up by making Michel a Fa*rter. Seriously, Ted's better option for Mel with Justin next. Both are close to Mel. There isn't any scene Michel being child friendly, Aside from Mikey being Childish & petulant himself all time. Hence, Mel In a way had a child with child.

 

 

Loving your fics. Wonderful. :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2019 3:33 pm Title: The Jewel in the Crown and Like Father Like Sons...

These quotes are a great reminder of the tone of this story:

Can you give me a few seconds? He won’t take long, just like his father!

Consider yourself Liberty Avenue slapped!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2019 2:50 pm Title: The Jewel in the Crown and Like Father Like Sons...

Well I guess George has officially met Deb and it is a meeting he will soon never forget lol

That was a lesson Grace won't soon forget and will probably be using herself to get her best under control before she ends up kicking him to the curb at last.

Michael and Lindsay will be so pissed when they find out about Ted and Jenny but the celebration will be Awesome.

Melanie should be with someone who actually makes he body tingle and makes her laugh, smile, feel relaxed instead of her dealing with frostbite and constant whining.

Blake and Ted are so Adorable!

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2019 10:52 am Title: The Jewel in the Crown and Like Father Like Sons...

Okay who is George and how does he fit in?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2019 4:29 pm Title: A Wife's Wrath

The scene with Lindsay made me laugh when she heard the wife.

Ted and Blake together is great news.

I hope that Jenny will soon know who her father is.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2019 4:15 pm Title: An Arresting Sight and Rimming His Bell

What an incongruous reaction from Justin. Best way to kill the mood, but the laughter was worth it. It's another way to get close.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2019 8:06 am Title: A Wife's Wrath

First, I love how Brian & Justin is having their naughty times.

Second, is it Right what is being indicated about Jenny.

Third, this is the Lindsay show up for legal advices? Her waspy attitude is annoying.

"Do Up your shirt, You look like you have two bald men down there." As Jenny, Pearl and Gus would say "Burn!" Lmao!

You did Awesome writing. ðŸ˜Š



Author's Response:

Hello my friend - yes it is right, Ted is Jenny's birth father, in the first chapter Mel told how that came about but they never told Michael. Now he has had the support money back and his rights removed he can't do much about it. But there is more sibling misery for Micahel to come...

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2019 5:42 pm Title: A Wife's Wrath

Jenny Is Ted's Daughter?!?!?!!!

Boom! Goes the dynamite when Michael and Lindsay find out rofl

Lindsay tried whoring herself for legal help and got dumped on her flat Ass lol

Leda will do enjoy going up against Lindsay in court because I am sure all her former conquest will enjoy spilling all on the record.

Plus Gus and Jenny will enjoy telling their side on the record too.

Cause Brian never his his reputation but Lindsay sure did enjoy acting like a saint while she spread her legs all over town to the highest bidder.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2019 12:49 pm Title: A Wife's Wrath

Now that's some back story. 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2019 7:11 pm Title: An Arresting Sight and Rimming His Bell

Great chapter as always.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2019 5:53 pm Title: An Arresting Sight and Rimming His Bell

thanks for update

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2019 8:43 pm Title: An Arresting Sight and Rimming His Bell

How nice that everything is falling in place.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2019 7:49 pm Title: An Arresting Sight and Rimming His Bell

Micheal & Lindsay should REALLY take things seriously. But Would be Fun to have them thwarted on their idiotic nut brains.

Hope, Ethan & his lovaa have Not-so goood ride to the prison. Their stupidity to play victims.

Glad for Brian, Justin, Mel, having their back by family. Thank you for lovely update. ^_^

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2019 6:02 pm Title: An Arresting Sight and Rimming His Bell

Looks like Ethan and his Lawyer did not get their brains the first day they were handed out because they are beyond stupid.

Then again so are Michael and Lindsay so obviously like recognizes like.

Michael and Lindsay think that if they ignore the situation they are in it will go away but the rabbit hole is about to swallow them hole.

Too bad Ron didn't have a clause in his will that if Lindsay was caught doing anything illegal or harmful to Brian or Gus she forfeits her inheritance and it automatically goes to Gus and Jenny and she gets a dollar a year of she is found guilty and sentenced to prison.

Now that would really chafe her flat Ass!! lol

Michael and Matthew definitely sound like they are cut from the same cloth and with Jennifer, Deb and Grace working to destroy Matthew I hope it chokes Michael too.

Brian and Justin are drawing closer together and that will help make them both stronger.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2019 3:27 pm Title: Setting the Lofty Sample

Read both updates.  Absolutely great.  Love when Linds & Mikey are called out for the fools that they are.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 9:15 pm Title: Setting the Lofty Sample

Looks like the secrets are coming out.  Nice job.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 7:08 pm Title: Setting the Lofty Sample

WoW, Now I Know Where Mikey's loot money will be going too. Supporting the new Offspring. He didn't need to do alone, besides Lindsay, Ethan could a lend hand too *probably from prison. Great! ðŸ˜…😁

Fantastic writing. Kudos.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 7:00 pm Title: Living Arrangements...Lofty Ambitions

This is Amazing! 2 beautiful updates of your every fics. Wonderful.

Great, Micheal Loft ambition thwarted for GooOood. Lindsay needs to realise her place Which is definitely not or never will be with Mel or Brian.

Love Jenny, Gus , Jewel Shuting Up Lindaay & Mikey nasty mouth.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 12:01 am Title: Setting the Lofty Sample

Now that is just blatchy !

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 7:29 pm Title: Setting the Lofty Sample

Tada!!! And cut! I would like to be a fly on the wall to see all the expressions showing on Lindsay's face.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 7:09 pm Title: Living Arrangements...Lofty Ambitions

Ha ha ha!!! Michael can talk about fucking back without lube: he just has been the recipient of such treatment, not in a life affirming way; his request to get the loft was denied and he learned that not only Brandon is getting that right, he also is getting Ben's favours!

Let's the fun begin!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 5:11 pm Title: Setting the Lofty Sample

Boom Goes The Dynamite!!!

If Lindsay has someone out there already to pop she will have to go to Michael for support and everyone knows how much Michael loves to hand out money for his responsibilities.

Or perhaps Ethan is ready to play Daddy from prison?

 

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