Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2020 2:27 am Title: Ear to the Ground, Eyes on the Prize

Oh this is getting good. Never thought of Vance that way so it is a great storyline.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2020 3:11 am Title: Ear to the Ground, Eyes on the Prize

Interesting chapter.  I need to reread this from the beginning.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2020 1:32 am Title: Vince and Daph Say Their Pieces

So many questions.  I can't wait for another chapter to find out just a little more about who is behind it.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2020 1:35 pm Title: Vince and Daph Say Their Pieces

Oh my god !! You are so good. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2020 3:57 am Title: All We Need to do is Convince and Find

You are a genius. You th8nk of so much.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2020 4:45 pm Title: All We Need to do is Convince and Find

Brian and Justin have been lighting so many blazes they should really invest In a fire extinguishers lol

So Gardner and Bell are old friends huh?

Bell obtained Sap's things when he died.

What stuff is in that safe that Sap forgot or hoped would never be found?

Is something associated with Gardner in there?

Luther actually will make a good attorney or aid for prisoners who wanted to reform once they get on the outside of help those who will never get out better themselves if they want?

Jenny is going to be a wonderful judge next month lol

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2020 12:28 pm Title: We Meet Again...Unluckily for You

So only Vance left to sort out now?

Sill loving all your current stories. Esp fond of 'Secrets'!

Thanks

Deb L

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2020 4:35 pm Title: We Meet Again...Unluckily for You

Lindsay and Nancy Are To Jail Together!

I do hope Lindsay realizes what she experienced before was basically a hello welcome to the neighborhood and this time around it could possibly be worse especially with her entitlement issues and wit Nancy around I am sure they will be getting what they deserve on a daily basis with sprinkles lol

Mel is really seeing the error of her ways and doing what she can to make amends to Brian and Gud because she let her jealousy cloud her judgement about Brian.

So Vance has The Saps things and is trying to still make Brian and Justin suffer he should seriously think about getting a life and savior his freedom because his days are numbered.

Luther would !and a good lawyer because for years he took without caring who suffered for repayment he should help others give to society instead of demanding, help others better their lives and appreciate this second chance to earn respect, love, and acceptance.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2020 5:34 am Title: Dad and Daughter Play a Timely Tune

Uh oh, Brian knowing about the Sap and Justin: even if he thought something happened, it's another level to hear about it from Justin.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2020 9:31 am Title: The Big Reveal...And How Three Wasps, Two Coots and a Probie Finally Got Rid

Yay awesome job Jennifer always looking out for her boys 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2020 1:16 am Title: The Big Reveal...And How Three Wasps, Two Coots and a Probie Finally Got Rid

Thank You Jennifer for being so smart and Thank You Zee for showing Jennifer that a good plan is always best for a idiot who just won't learn their lessons properly.

I honestly feel for Marcel because a dildo was still too generous for those loose legged heifers but it is funny that they can't tell the difference between an actual dick and plastic but when you snatch is colder than Antarctic what would a hot hard cock feel like anyway? lol

Melanie and Leda are having a Boy!😀

Nancy will run herself ragged looking for Sophie and trying to help Lindsay in this new situation she landed herself in.

Five years is too short but it does make a nice start😂

Gardner is on parole too right?

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 8:17 pm Title: Oh So That's How and That's Why

Woah.  So Gardner killed Sap?  Or do I have it all wrong?

Author's Response:

hello there, hope you are keeping well...you are correct he did.

Happy reading and stay safe

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 1:25 am Title: Oh So That's How and That's Why

So Vance is seeking revenge because he is attracted to Justin and since that will never happen he wants to destroy Justin and Brian aswell because Justin wants and is with Brian?

Sounds like Michael and Lindsay have another sibling who shares their brain?

Vance being hooked on drugs explains some stuff about him but the rest is pure him and purely stupid and selfish.

Not surprised Vance would get rid of Sapperstein the last thing he needs is another chain around his neck but he left himself wide open for bigger trouble heading his way.

Archie may not be able to bench above his body weight but he will be able to fly out of prison enjoying the sweet smell of Freedom and a new start in life.

Thanks For the Update 😃