Date: Feb 05, 2019 8:47 pm Title: The Truth is Out At Home...
Jenny is so fun and a tiny bit nasty; a little like her mother used to be with Brian.

Date: Feb 05, 2019 6:07 pm Title: The Truth is Out At Home...
Oh Luther you are so stupid obviously you must want years added on if course the real punishment would be having to share a cell with Michael when he gets thrown back in because everyone knows he will.
Michael donated to save Luther's life and all I want to know is if he can ask for it back so he can burn it?
How can Luther get Michael out when what little money he has can't get him out?
Can't wait to see how all this falls apart!
Date: Feb 05, 2019 4:16 pm Title: The Truth is Out At Home...
Great chapter. But please keep Michael locked up. A free Michael makes for a miserable world. LOL Love how the story is moving along.
Date: Feb 05, 2019 4:16 pm Title: The Truth is Out At Home...
Great chapter. But please keep Michael locked up. A free Michael makes for a miserable world. LOL Love how the story is moving along.
Date: Jan 25, 2019 1:15 am Title: Hearing and Seeing Almost Clearly
Great update. Michael & Stockwell, what a pair.

Date: Jan 24, 2019 7:50 pm Title: Hearing and Seeing Almost Clearly
Boy won't Michael and Luther be surprised when they find out Zee is still with Faal and they still haven't won anything.
I do hope Lindsay is enjoying being Gutter Cinderella with no Godmother coming to get rescue anytime soon, watching happy people enjoy all the pleasures she never will again enjoy without kayo for it herself, not that she will have the money to enjoy breakfast much less hotel staff jumping at her every command.
The Wicked Never Gonna Be Stepmother had to work for living and that means she can spend her nights crying her pillow that all her machinations failed and now she seriously has to face the consequences.
Thanks for the Update:)
Date: Jan 24, 2019 3:43 pm Title: Hearing and Seeing Almost Clearly
The vipers' nest is swarming! Michael should be careful with his emails and not print them.

Date: Jan 24, 2019 2:52 pm Title: Hearing and Seeing Almost Clearly
So Luther actually believes the e-mail she sent Michael. More fool him. What a way to find an official photographer. lol.
Date: Jan 19, 2019 1:42 pm Title: Plans Begin to Form...and How He Kept His Promise After Lights Out
Another good and entertaining chapter. 72 hour labor. My mother was in labor for 56 hours, before they took me with forceps. My mom still tells me how she thought I was going to be disfigured, but all came out just fine. Me??? With all four kids, my longest labor was 1:47 minutes. I can't imagine anything longer.
Faal, taking a gun out and threatening the doctor, is almost too funny for words. But almost funnier, is Brian being her birthing coach. Not sure how they wrangled him into that.
I started thinking how many years have passed, when Jenny was swearing like a sailor. I can't even comprehend what her age should be. Any hints? And the 'Hank' she speaks of, is David's son, right? I remember how they were when they first got together. It's surprising that all these years later, they are still together.
Orange is The New Black. Shame on you, Zee, but funny as hell.
Well, we haven't heard how life is going for Lindsay. I have to wonder if Ronald's new wife is running her ragged. *smirk*
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jan 19, 2019 12:59 pm Title: We Are Not The Rulers of This Kingdom...She Is!
Very good update. Thanks for some back info.
The visual of Justin sleeping in the crib with MJ, is cute. Oh-so-cute. Nice scenario. I can see him crawling in with Molly as a youngster, protective brother and all, then Criag laying down the law, and putting a stop to it.
WOW!!! Eight years of monogamy. You Go Brian!!!
I think I'm starting to remember more. Zee's brother's had a man cave, right? When they all lived together. But, is this the one where Jenny has kind of become a little lawyer, of sorts? But, if not, what she suggested, is truly unselfish and generous. Even if it is to make sure Luther stays alive. Its really unpleasant to donate bone marrow. (speaking from experience here.) But, it's cute how her and Zee thought the same thing.
Well, on to the next chapter. sorry I got behind.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jan 15, 2019 8:57 pm Title: Plans Begin to Form...and How He Kept His Promise After Lights Out
Great chapter. Love the name. Just perfect.

Date: Jan 15, 2019 5:29 pm Title: Plans Begin to Form...and How He Kept His Promise After Lights Out
As usual it the calm before the storm but what a beautiful, easy calm it is.
Too bad a storm is on the horizon but I hope the snapping wolves are ready for the tsunami heading their way?
Date: Jan 15, 2019 4:24 pm Title: Plans Begin to Form...and How He Kept His Promise After Lights Out
*in Emmett voice & clapping* Wonderful and Indeed, Markus gene is strong in Jenny. Our baby Pitbull.
The entire banterings in delivery room got me, later between Justin & Brian *goofy smile ahh childrens. lol. enjoyed it.
BriTinKudos â¤
Date: Jan 15, 2019 3:46 pm Title: Plans Begin to Form...and How He Kept His Promise After Lights Out
Jenny is going to be hard when she will be in a working environment.

Date: Jan 15, 2019 3:28 pm Title: Plans Begin to Form...and How He Kept His Promise After Lights Out
We have an MJ and a DJ. What do the initials stand for. Who's is whose?
Author's Response:
MJ - Mary Jane is Brian and Justin's with Daphne and DJ - Deborah Jennifer is Zee and Faal's daughter.
MissMerlot
Date: Jan 12, 2019 2:43 pm Title: We Are Not The Rulers of This Kingdom...She Is!
Terrific chapter. Getting good. Can't wait for more.

Date: Jan 10, 2019 6:03 pm Title: We Are Not The Rulers of This Kingdom...She Is!
Yes Brian does do Romance...His Way Of Course!
Love the flashback of them being together in New York and them deciding to do it raw and talking about marriage and family.
They do everything their way in their own time and are much Happier with Their Decision without outside interference from The Whiny Duo.
Jenny is one Smart Pitbull!
Out of everyone in this family their enemies should fear her the most because she brings the Lightening when her family is threatened plus being young mean they really won't see her coming until your on your Ass! lol
Thanks for the Update :)
Date: Jan 10, 2019 5:24 pm Title: We Are Not The Rulers of This Kingdom...She Is!
Brian can do romance! What a night they must have had!
Jenny is a very smart girl.
Date: Jan 10, 2019 4:49 pm Title: We Are Not The Rulers of This Kingdom...She Is!
I sooooooo fucking love how you're giving us the flashbacks! i read the three previous parts wondering about all the things you mentioned from the past and the things you didn't even mention (like how Justin came back, the reaction to him coming back, the whole nine yards u know) and it seems like you will give us all the dirty details in this volume and i am super happy about it!!!!

Date: Jan 10, 2019 1:40 pm Title: We Are Not The Rulers of This Kingdom...She Is!
So happy to see another chapter on this. Keep 'em comin'. We learn something new and amazing with each chapter.
Date: Jan 01, 2019 8:23 am Title: How The Devil And His Handmaiden Met...And He Confessed
Thank you for providing the info on my last review. Do you realize that with this series you have written 157 chapters, and 785,766 words? WOW - DOUBLE WOW!!!! The fact that you can remember everything about this story and continue to write it, after being gone from it for a year and a half, speaks volumes to you as a writer. And if all your readers (except me) can remember this whole story, I'm really impressed with them. But in this story, if it was Unc Lucian that had Michael followed and he met up with Rita, then I think the scenario I'm thinking of, is a different story. I remember the mother of Hunter's friend called her friend, who maybe had someone from her agency follow Michael and they had pictures of Michael following Hunter and throwing some stones at him, narrowly missing his head. They also had pics of him sitting in his car outside Kinnetik. If Brian came out alone, he was smiling ear-to-ear, but if he came out with Justin, Michael was scowling, with a murderous look on his face. Same Story - or Not? All that said:
Stockwell is a fool of all kinds. Trusting Michael. a mistake. Thinking with Michael's coaching he will get out. a bigger mistake. Thinking he will off Brian and Justin WHEN he gets out, laughable, and biggest mistake of all. And did I read that correctly, that he finished Rykert off as it took too long for him to die? So I helped him on his way.
Kudos goes to Zee. I am nothing to you and you are less than that. I am Uncle Lucian's Little One. Put that in your pipe and smoke it, Luther.
I hope you have a Blessed New Year, Nicole.
HUGS ~ Cathy
Author's Response:
Hey Cathy, hope you have had a good start to the New Year, I am still trying to shake off this damn cold, but hey ho. Thanks again for the review, but the scenario you mention re Hunter and Michael is not from one of my stories, if you can find out which one it is, I would like to read it - sounds very anti-Michael and I do love those.
You were almost right, he didn't help Rykert to live, he could've been saved but he didn't do that.
Hope you continue to read this.
Best
Nicole
Date: Jan 01, 2019 3:14 am Title: How The Devil And His Handmaiden Met...And He Confessed
Read all three chapters to get caught up on my reading. Great story. Can't wait to see where you go with it. Happy New Year.

Date: Dec 31, 2018 8:23 pm Title: How The Devil And His Handmaiden Met...And He Confessed
Yeah I figured his old partner had help Stockwell is calculating but if he is listening to Michael he is a Dumbass who's deserves to stay in prison, only not the fish place he is now and not near Michael or Luther of course hitting three birds with one stone could be very rewarding.
Zee is right Luther deserves to be saved so he can spend the next fifteen years paying for his crimes.
Wonder if Stockwell will continue to listen when he finds out Michael is gay or has had he gone straight?
After sleeping with Lindsay he should be an arrow now, a very small arrow lol
Happy New Year!! :)
Date: Dec 31, 2018 6:08 pm Title: How The Devil And His Handmaiden Met...And He Confessed
Michael and Stockwell plotting together? The first one won't last long enough to breathe the air of freedom.

Date: Dec 31, 2018 1:42 pm Title: How The Devil And His Handmaiden Met...And He Confessed
What is Michael up to? I doubt Luther will get away with whatever he has planned.