[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 3:57 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire
Woah. Jones is dead? I'm confused is Luther turning into a good guy or still a bad guy?
Date: Apr 29, 2019 1:16 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire
Please don't make us wait too long before an update!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 9:58 am Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire
For once Luther did right. Being a grandfather gave him some sense. Micheal was easy to be trapped. Both idiots are wrong for thinking having any upper hand on Brian,Justin, Zee,Faal & their family. still felt storms are brewing...as there are others.
Excited for more. Wonderful chapter. Thankyou for update. :)â¤
Date: Apr 16, 2019 11:40 pm Title: Baulk, Talk, Squawk and Walk
I hope you and yours are Well?
Reading The Rattle of Snakes Again I had a thought won't Lindsay be in trouble for defaulting in in her Payments and restitution to Faal and Zee will also aiding and abetting Michael while on parole.
Michael attacked a Corrections Officer and I think killed him (Will need to read this story over again) and escaped while assuming the man's identity so that means he could get life?
And because the Idiots are basically Idiots they will be arrested for violating the restraining orders by trying to contact The Family, especially one Brian Aiden Taylor-Kinney who neither one can stay away from without having conniptions.
Happy Easter and I Hope You Are Okay? 😀
Author's Response:
My dear BlueMyst, all is getting better, was not good for a bit - life was a but stormy. Hope you and yours are good too.
As usual you have done it again, in the rather fab recap you have given me plot twist that I hadn’t thought of...thank you!
Have a fantastic Easter.
Best,
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2019 5:39 am Title: Baulk, Talk, Squawk and Walk
Micheal can easily detected his frequency whining (Boy wonder fault or Briaannn!) anywhere. His delusional thinking he is something, BUTt he never had anything, anyone will intrested for.
Gardner's out? Is Stockwell dead?
When Brian kissed Justin⤠"...put the boy down" lol, I like the change in Luther and glad they decide to send babies for safety.
Time to carry a mallet for upcoming Clash of the fools Lindsay & Micheal. Very curious for next chapters. :-) "hugs"
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2019 8:51 pm Title: Baulk, Talk, Squawk and Walk
Good to see that Michael has been targeted. Now what is Gardner up to?
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2019 8:17 pm Title: Baulk, Talk, Squawk and Walk
Michael needs to stop thinking he is all that because if it was that good Brian would've hit and Ben wouldn't have quit it along with David forgetting it!
The babies being sent away so Zeecan get her Zaden On is a good idea she and everyone else need to be focused on making Michael and his cohorts suffer like they never have before.
Luther is helping to fix what he broke getting Michael involved if only he had used his brain to further his business instead of acting like a dictator to his family and hating Zee for something that has nothing to do with her he could be cherished as the father all of his children would be proud of.
I do hope Vance's ex is enjoying her life with a nice bank account and she finds someone who will cherish her.
What is Brian going to do with the former Gardner residence and will Gardner hate it?
So they all know Michael I around Liberty Avenue just need to find his hovel and see what Lindsay does when they get together.
Thanks for the Update :)
Date: Mar 07, 2019 4:07 pm Title: Baulk, Talk, Squawk and Walk
PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE we want moooooooooooore!!! And as for Michael telling someone they don't know what they are missing, that's gold. I mean Michael in Season 1 couldn't turn a head, I can't imagine what he must look like in your "now"!
Date: Feb 26, 2019 6:46 pm Title: As Fuck Ups Go!
Okay< I know this is probably stupid, but I can't seem to find it - what is MJ's full name? It's driving me potty!
Great writing as usual, enjoying the sequels and 'Secrets' is especially good.
Thanks
Deb
Author's Response:
Hi Deb,
Sorry it took so long to get back to you. And not being stupid at all...had to go back to previous story to find out myself. MJ is short for Megan Jada.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2019 5:55 pm Title: You Hide in Plain Sight...We Will Bring Back the Bait
How does Luther manage to get away with this. Now that they know who Mikey is posing as, he should soon be back where he belongs.
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2019 5:54 pm Title: You Hide in Plain Sight...We Will Bring Back the Bait
"A few more kicks..." Wow! Micheal is superbly plain stupid. He is in deep shit, like his face now.
Good job Justin. Bringing Lindsay in face to face Mikey. I also thought family will go Italy Villa, that might burned Micheal's jeolous ass. ^_^
And Did Luther changed? Is he helping them? Plot is rising level by level each chapter.
Date: Feb 26, 2019 5:14 pm Title: You Hide in Plain Sight...We Will Bring Back the Bait
I can't wait to see the meeting between Lindsay and Michael; that might get bloody.
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2019 5:09 pm Title: You Hide in Plain Sight...We Will Bring Back the Bait
Oh Michael you Stupid Idiot!
For Killing a Guard You Could Get Life along with Escaping Prison!!
Yeah Lindsay Being in town is just the bait they need to get Michael to out himself, plus rubbing it in her face that she like Michael Will Never be near Brian and Justin is wonderful ammunition to get them to be themselves...Stupid Beyond Reason!!
Yeah The Family Shouldn't Run From This Fight but They Should Be Well Armed!
Date: Feb 26, 2019 4:55 pm Title: You Hide in Plain Sight...We Will Bring Back the Bait
Oh my fucking GOD!!! shit just got real!!!
Date: Feb 20, 2019 8:17 am Title: As Fuck Ups Go!
.... What announcement was done on TV by Brian, as Justin suggested.
A couple of weeks had been gone by. What happened in that time? Micheal's on mad rush, he killed that orderly. What gonna happened next?
Btw I love Brian & Justin's morning sweet, sweaty ritual. *blushing* its great. â¤
Date: Feb 18, 2019 7:34 pm Title: As Fuck Ups Go!
What happened on those 7 days? When did Loft was put on fire? Whoa! Level of anxiety does keep getting up with every chapter.
One deranged wolf is out of the bar... another one on his way to getting marrow ripped back out. I believe Brian. He will definitely do it while Luther's awake.
Date: Feb 18, 2019 6:19 pm Title: As Fuck Ups Go!
Read the last two chapters. Wow this is so good. It takes a while to keep the charaters and plot in order, but then it is great. All the new characters make it interesting.
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 5:32 pm Title: As Fuck Ups Go!
Michael is Out???!!!!!!
It did someone else get out and if the orderly Michael was supposed to be impersonating is dead then does that mean Michael and Luther will be charged with murder?
I think Justin is right that Brian shouldn't do interviews with newspapers and stick to tv which will get it out faster and more accurately, the newspapers will hate that they say get the scoop and tv will be salivating to be the first to get the story out, so they will abide by the families rules or lose the exclusive to a rival.
it is either Michael or Vance who is after Justin and they will pay dearly if he is harmed.
Going to need to tighten security for everyone especially the kids and Justin.
Oh Luther you thought jail was bad you got off easy cause Brian will rip you apart if Justin is harmed or taken from him and No One Will Stop Him!!!H
Thanks For The Update, Great Start To My Week!! :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 5:30 pm Title: As Fuck Ups Go!
Michael is free? Luther is about to loose his marrow. Somehow I think if Mikey gets to Justin he'll find out that Justin can take him down with no problems.
Date: Feb 18, 2019 5:18 pm Title: As Fuck Ups Go!
Whoa! That's some evil cliffhanger you wrote here!
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 5:18 pm Title: ...And Being a Bored Broad Abroad Causes Trouble
Lindsay can be disgusted by Michael celebrating a death of a baby when she used Gus to keep Brian at her neck and call, neither thing is worth crowing about but I wonder with her continuing to lie about being married and egging Michael on can she be held accountable for his actions along with Luther?
I swear these idiots !just enjoy jail because they are desperate to either go back or get more time added!
Date: Feb 18, 2019 5:04 pm Title: ...And Being a Bored Broad Abroad Causes Trouble
Lindsay is poking the beast, but at one moment, Michael will learn the truth and it might get really ugly.
I don't remember who is Ron's new wife; who is she? I bet it must be horrible for Lindsay to have to be at their beck and call.
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 5:03 pm Title: ...And Being a Bored Broad Abroad Causes Trouble
The lies people tell.
Date: Feb 08, 2019 7:53 pm Title: The Truth is Out At Home...
Be nice Luther.
Micheal and his *ucked delusional thinking. Seriously I don't want Brian to donate. If Luther helped Micheal getting out along with Stockwell , these morons gonna gunning up for Justin. Although the guns point will be poking on their own a**s at the end.
More please !!
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2019 5:54 am Title: The Truth is Out At Home...
So Brian is Luther's son? How did that happen? Michael is all sorts of weird.